Date: 12/04/09 10:27 pm Title: THREE
give me the next chapter already you whoreeeeee.
jkjk you know i loveyou. and love this.
but nah, i do need a next chapter
Date: 12/04/09 09:11 pm Title: THREE
fuck this is sooo good...bill the little slut haha love it!
Date: 12/04/09 08:30 pm Title: THREE
omg i screamed at the end! You need to update like now! pwease?
Date: 12/04/09 08:03 pm Title: THREE
O.O
*eyes roll back in head* tomigawd...
*drools*
I'm feeling a bit faint *collaspes*
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*jumps up* I'm okay!
whoo *fans self* this is just... uqbbvuhviqevjnbvjqnbifbiebhefb (writing that simply because no other word in the english language can justify this amazingness that is this story)
*tips ice cold holy water over self* think pure thoughts, think pure thoughts, think pure thoughts... oh who am I kidding?! Your stories have corrupted me... this is the second story of yoursd thats has made me feel vaugely turned on and confused as to why... (*coughsaddleupcough*)
SO yeah, anyways, I love this, I love you and your writing and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Keep up the kinky work!
Date: 12/04/09 07:49 pm Title: THREE
-squeal- H-A-W-T HOT!!!!!!
That was probably the sexiest threesome chapter I've ever read! Keep updating, please!!!
Author's Response: "sexiest threesome chapter"? Haha, Oh god, if you thought that was hot, just you wait. ;)
Date: 12/04/09 09:04 am Title: TWO
Awww man bill is being hoe ass for doning that but hey its cool what goes around comes around can't wait to see tom and bushido fuck him yay!! ^__^
Date: 12/02/09 10:35 pm Title: TWO
OMG OMG OMG OMG THAT BITCH! i so hate Bill right now! mroe more!
Date: 12/02/09 05:30 pm Title: TWO
woow this is getting interesting...
Date: 12/02/09 05:24 pm Title: TWO
Way to treat your readers in your end notes...haha jk. Oooooooohhhhhhhh, can't wait to see what happens next....
Date: 12/02/09 03:53 pm Title: TWO
D:
How dare this chapter not continue!
Im writhing inside...
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Date: 12/02/09 02:22 pm Title: TWO
LMAO, this is awkward.
I cant wait for the next chapter though
Date: 12/02/09 11:19 am Title: TWO
Poor Tom! I feel so bad for him being all heartbroken. Bill's mean for hurting him like that.
Date: 12/02/09 10:39 am Title: TWO
Oh boy...can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 12/02/09 04:45 am Title: TWO
Poor Tom, I felt so bad for him when he was reading all the txt messages Bushido and Bill sent each other. Bill pisses me of hear playing Tom like that... well playing both Tom and Bushido, but poor Tom though. I can't wait to see how things are going to go down with Tom and Bushido.
Date: 12/02/09 01:56 am Title: TWO
Really?! You're going to leave me hangin' like that?!? Well, I guess you made up for it with the 'Ponyboy'. Kind of.
Looking forward to more!! :)
Date: 12/01/09 11:18 pm Title: TWO
O.O Oh shit!!!!! Naughty naughty Bill-just how long does he think he can keep this up?!?!?!
Date: 12/01/09 04:31 pm Title: ONE
Now LOOK! This had better not be one of those fics where the author starts it and then two years later it's still sitting there unfinished. I want resolution!!!! This is so beautiful, sexy, sweet, and a little angsty, I'm loving it. My vote is for him to have them both, for them to be all three together, but for Bu and Tom to make him pay a little first. Teach him a lesson, give it to him hard. Kinkiness. Not too much angst.
Author's Response: Don't worry, second and third chapter are already written. Just need to get them beta'd ;) Thanks for the review.
Date: 11/18/09 03:37 pm Title: ONE
With Tom.
Go on?