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Reviewer: KookieKannibal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/08 07:59 am Title: Chapter 8 *A new-found love*

hehe'love
continue please

Author's Response: I will ;)

Reviewer: sofiabobia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/07/08 03:41 am Title: Chapter 8 *A new-found love*

thats was BEAUTIFUL! write a full explanation please? and one more thing...how old is sam again?

Author's Response: I will write one for you, but I've got a problem with uploading lately, everything gets rejected without a reason :S But I'll try ;) And the way I think about Sam, she is 17, but if you think she's younger it's okay too. She's just Georg's baby sister ;)

Reviewer: sofiabobia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/07/08 03:39 am Title: Chapter 7 *A scary brother*

OOHHHH!!! intersting!!

Author's Response: Thanks ;)

Reviewer: cadixa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/08 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 8 *A new-found love*

MORE!! quick!!!

Author's Response: haha, I guess you like it? XD

Reviewer: beckyxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/08 09:42 am Title: Chapter 8 *A new-found love*

awwww
thats so cute xxx

Author's Response: thanks ;)

Reviewer: liebetub Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/08 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 8 *A new-found love*

They love each other! yeeeeeey!!!!!!!!!^^D
Love the story hunny^^)
Keep up with the greate writing^^)

Author's Response: Thanks, I will ;)

Reviewer: cadixa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/08 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 8 *A new-found love*

more! i love it! hury up! lol *mean*

Author's Response: thanks ;)

Reviewer: beckyxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/08 11:00 am Title: Chapter 7 *A scary brother*

oh my god
wow
!!
xx

Author's Response: *blushes* thanks :D

Reviewer: KookieKannibal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/08 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 7 *A scary brother*

was he gonna rape her
sick baster
grrrr was this the other ass u were tellin me about grrr
continue

Author's Response: No, he wasn't. And he's not the ass, he's actually kinda sweet, I'll explain later. The biggest ass is (of course) their father, and Tom... well he's an ass sometimes ;)

Reviewer: Angstmuffin Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/08 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 7 *A scary brother*

Aww, depresssing >,<
but this is soo good ^^
i

Author's Response: Well, it would be no fun if the entire story was all cute right?

Reviewer: liebetub Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/08 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 7 *A scary brother*

What was wrong with Georg??
Bill saved her and she trust him^^)
I hope so much that Sam and Bill get together^^D
Love the story^^)
Keep up with the greate writing hunny^^)

Author's Response: Thanks, and yeah, I let them get together. And that ting about Georg is a bit difficult, I'll explain later.

Reviewer: old_german_schwanz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/08 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 7 *A scary brother*

dis storii is poppin congrajalashinsz

Author's Response: thanks ;)

Reviewer: sofiabobia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/31/08 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 6 *A change of thoughts*

yay=] the spaces definetly improve it!
write more about sam and bill!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I kinda hoped it was better too. And I'll definetly write more. I've gotten adicted to my own story XD

Reviewer: KookieKannibal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/08 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 6 *A change of thoughts*

damn she like blew up out of nowhere
yeah toms an asshole in this story
lol
continue

Author's Response: Jup, I needed more then one asshole in the story. Can you guess which one the other is? XD

Reviewer: liebetub Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/08 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 6 *A change of thoughts*

I really feel sorry for Sam:(
I know what it's like to be scared about that a person will just jump up behind you and take you away:(
It's really frightening:(
So I guess that in sometime in the story the father will come and kidnapp her and the person she likes moust will come and save her^^)
I think you are a really good writer so keep up with the good work hunny^^D

Author's Response: Yeah, I know what that feels like too. And about the kidnapp... good idea, maybe I'll use that later on. Thanks ;)

Reviewer: beckyxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/08 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 6 *A change of thoughts*

I could fill a hole page with i love it and write more and amazing but some how i don't think its enough
xx
write more
xx

Author's Response: Aaaw thanks :D I'll write more soon ;)

Reviewer: sofiabobia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/30/08 09:07 am Title: Chapter 5 *A confusing boy*

whoah...unexcpected twist. this is really good! keep going! except it might improve it if you put the dialougue on seperate lines, to do this make a < br > whenever you want to make a space, its just like pressing the return key.

Author's Response: Thanks for the tip, I'll try that next time ;)

Reviewer: Angstmuffin Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/08 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 3 *An awfull confession*

liek omg! this is soo sad
it tolly made me cry liek tears :(
but its liek rly good!
I liek the part with tom in it ;P

Author's Response: Aaaw, don't cry, it's just a story ;) And that part with Tom, I have no idea where that came from XD

Reviewer: KookieKannibal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/08 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 5 *A confusing boy*

u should continue that waht u should do
lol
so sweet yet so sad

Author's Response: I'll continue, don't worry

Reviewer: KookieKannibal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/08 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 4 *A scared girl*

aww

Author's Response: I assume this is positive :D

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