Date: 11/19/09 09:28 pm Title: Shivers and Shakes
Aww, that was cute :3 But I was confused by a possible typo?
"He's not going to die, is he?" Tom demanded shrilly, once Simone was settling Bill in the bunk that the twins shared at home.
"Bill!" Simone exclaimed, shocked at the outright query. "You can't think like that!"
Was that supposed to be "Tom!"? If not, I'm sorry 8D
Author's Response: Ahhhh typo. Thank you so much. *goes to fix*
Date: 11/19/09 06:15 pm Title: A Broken Trust
I rushed and read years one and two in three afternoons and I must say I'm very impressed. It grew on me so fast! I love the Kaulitz kits ;D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you've given this story a chance. ♥ I'm really enjoying writing the Kaulitz kits. :D
Date: 11/19/09 12:49 pm Title: A Broken Trust
Aww, poor Bill. That's definitely not fair.
Author's Response: Very much not fair, and so shocking for him. :(
Date: 11/19/09 09:27 am Title: A Broken Trust
Poor kits! I can't wait to read more. Good job. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm pleased you're still reading. :)
Date: 11/19/09 05:32 am Title: The Sweetest Gift
hi
thank you for each chapter, i dont review much but i read with a smile every chapter
Date: 11/19/09 05:02 am Title: A Broken Trust
I wish I could review every chapter but I never know what to say. I just love this, and the kits, and watching them grow up. I feel a little bad for Andreas, though. He's always pushed to the side but the twins obviously don't do it to hurt him intentionally.
I'm glad you're sharing the new chapters with us so quickly, I really do look forward to coming home and reading them. :)
Author's Response: Anything you say is good! *cherishes* I'm glad you're enjoying watching them grow up, I know it's such a gradual process... I think one of the reasons Andreas clicks well with them is that he lets them have their in-jokes. He probably pushed to be included at first, but backed off when they wouldn't give.
I'm really pleased you like the fast updates! Can't promise it will continue beyond November, but it is quite an exercise to assemble each chapter so quickly. :)
Date: 11/19/09 04:33 am Title: A Broken Trust
I saw the title of the chapter and immediately thought of something happening between the twins D:
Thank God it was just stupid Ser Baudman, though I'm not happy the poor babies got a detention :( I'm so loving this, please go on! ♥
Author's Response: Ouch! No, thank goodness. Twins are still safe. ;) But, poor babies have learned sometimes they can't trust adults. Thank you and I will strive to continue!
Date: 11/19/09 12:03 am Title: A Broken Trust
UGH! I hate when stuff like that happens. Grrr! Made me so mad for them.
I love love love this. :)
Author's Response: Me too, it's so completely unfair. D: And adults can be so inflexible when they're sure they're right. :P
I'm so happy you're loving this.
Date: 11/18/09 11:05 pm Title: A Broken Trust
Oh no, poor Bill! D: Being caught for something you did do is one thing, but punishment for something you didn't do? Especially from the music teacher, eep. My heart just ached for Bill here, and oh, do I ever hope they manage to prove it wasn't him who took the music sphere. *flails* Someday?
Author's Response: I knoooow. Alas, I think Tom took it to heart even more than Bill did. Bill can be a forgiving little soul. We shall see, in upcoming chapters. D: So glad you're still caught up in the story! :D
Date: 11/18/09 10:25 pm Title: A Broken Trust
Aww poor Bill. Getting blamed for something he didn't do... I would be pissed off too.
Is so nice of Tom to have Bill's back like always... I so wanted him to bite Ser Baudman's finger, but that would've caused them more trouble... totally worth it though.
Anyways, I can't wait for more. I am looking forward to see what is up with the "shivers and shakes"
Author's Response: I know, poor baby. Tom was pissed; Bill was just shocked and wounded. Ahaha, if Tom had actually bitten Ser Baudman's finger...that would've been very bad, I agree. Glad you're looking forward to more, and you can see right now what's up with shivers and shakes! ;D
Date: 11/18/09 10:13 pm Title: A Broken Trust
a note to let you know i'm following - i love this era of the twins and you write them adorably :) i want to stroke their ears so bad!
Author's Response: Yaaaaay I am glad you're still reading. :D I concur the desire to stroke the kit-ears.
Date: 11/18/09 09:56 pm Title: A Broken Trust
Grrr! That damn teacher just about had me flailing at his ass. What a prick. Poor Bill, he wanted lessons from him and then the guy turned on him. Poor little kit. And I love that Tom was right there the second Bill's voice got stressed. That Tom is something else. I want one for myself. :D
Umm, what does shivers and shakes mean???
Author's Response: I know, he turned out to be a real jerk. :( I wasn't even expecting that. And Bill wanted his voice lessons so badly. Here he's learning talented people aren't always nice. Tomi is forever the protective brother! (Shivers and Shakes is up; you can check it out now.) :D
Date: 11/18/09 09:54 pm Title: A Broken Trust
I always hated teachers like that, not even willing to listen to reason. Poor Bill, I truly feel for him here because they just can't win.
Author's Response: We all had at least one, right? :( My poor babies, it's so early to learn this kind of lesson.
Date: 11/18/09 09:38 pm Title: A Broken Trust
This made me sad face. Let's go kick that jerk in the groin for making Bill cry.
Author's Response: I'M WITH YOU. He definitely turned out to be a jerk; I wasn't expecting it. :(
Date: 11/18/09 04:50 pm Title: Keeping Pace
I just caught up on this story today (Yes, all three years--I'm sick in bed, and it definitely made the day pass faster!) and I wanted to let you know how much I love it. The kits are just too, too adorable. I love the growth of the family unit in part one, and I like how you're developing the twins relationship. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for giving this a chance! :) I'm really glad this story could keep you company while feeling sick, and I hope you get better soon. Very pleased you love it, and these kits are just going to keep being adorable, they've got me in their grip. Thanks for your review, I really appreciate it.
Date: 11/18/09 08:57 am Title: Keeping Pace
Since something bad hasn't happened yet, I feel this too. But you're cheating, cause you already know. :PPPPPP
Date: 11/18/09 05:21 am Title: Keeping Pace
Why are you using a happy face when something bad is going to happen??? D:::::
poor babies T_T *huggles twins*
Date: 11/18/09 03:49 am Title: Keeping Pace
You're evil and a sneak. Evil because who makes a :D after saying something bad is sure to happen? Someone evil, that's who. And a sneak because this is the only typo that stood out to me:
"Thank you, and let him know from me, thanks for even considering it." She wondered briefly whether to mention her hopes of paying on trade now or wait until further word, and thought it better to wait."
There's an extra " at the end there.
Eeeeeevil.
Date: 11/18/09 12:49 am Title: Keeping Pace
I feel like that is not a nice author note at all, that's how I feel! ;_; Loving the kits though. BBs don't deserve those bullies. D= *bites nails anxiously*
Date: 11/17/09 11:17 pm Title: Keeping Pace
NOOO :( lol
poor kits awww