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Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/11 09:59 pm Title: Denial

How frustrating for the twins! They are together all the time but are unable to have each other because prying eyes are always upon them. Hope they get more twin time in year four.

Author's Response: Yes, the poor boys! They just want each other all the time, hehe. ;) We'll see how it goes for these troubled twins...

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/11 12:58 am Title: Denial

I'm glad they realized they have to start being more careful. Another great story, I can't wait to start reading the next years XD

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :3 I'm glad there's lots to read for you. ;)

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/11 12:34 am Title: The Spare Wheel

Oh little kits, you need to learn to be a little less obvious. Great chapter! XD

Author's Response: Yes, yes they do. They're so stubborn though! ♥ Thank you. :D

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/11 09:00 pm Title: Separate and Not Equal

Gordon is so understanding, if only Simone could try a little harder to do the same. Great chapter! I can't believe I'm nearing the end of yet another year XD

Author's Response: Gordon thinks he gets it...and tries not to think too hard about it. Thank you! Yeah, they start to grow up so fast. ;_;

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/11 05:13 pm Title: The Sweetest Gift

As long as its twins incest is best. Pass it on.

Author's Response: I think so, too. ;D

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/11 01:17 am Title: Wrestling for Tops

Those kits should be careful where they 'wrestle', luckily Simont didn't walk in on them earlier though. Hopefully she doesn't push them into doing anything they dont want, I can't see that ending well for anyone. Great chapter!

Author's Response: They really need to be more aware of stuff like that! Crazy little kits. Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/11 10:32 pm Title: Cause and Effect

Simone and Gordon should look into finding out more about youko. Wouldn't there be books, or at least someone they could write to or something? I'm assuming if they found out more, Simone wouldn't be so worried with how close the twins are. Great chapter! XD

Author's Response: The issue there is that youko are very secretive about revealing anything about youko to humans. So, that's not something that would be readily available. You're right, though, Simone needs to learn more!

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/11 10:03 pm Title: Explosion

Can youko only heal youko? Or people too? I guess I'll find out more about how it works as the series goes on. Great chapter! XD

Author's Response: Depends on the youko, really! We will find out, I promise. :)

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/11 10:03 pm Title: Separate and Not Equal

Why does Simone think showing affection is dangerous? Is she the same Simone who made love to her husband outdoors in Year 1, chapter 1? Could she be the same woman who was so very sensitive to the twin's needs on the caravan trail to Leroux? I thought she was the free thinking artistic type. Gordon needs to bang some sense back into her. Thank the gods that he is so tuned in to what everyone needs in this family.

Author's Response: Well, this is incestuous affection we're talking about - not to mention these are youko, who are already regarded with suspicion by a lot of humans. ;_; She seriously is just trying to be protective of them, but I think Gordon has a better idea of how they ought to do that...it's just they don't see eye to eye.

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/11 06:16 pm Title: The Bottom Line

Great chapter! XD

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/11 05:59 pm Title: Delaying the Inevitable

I hope Simone backs off a little bit, before the kits start resenting her. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Let's hope! Eep. ._.

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/11 01:35 am Title: Caught

Simone has the worst luck walking in on them Hopefully she doesnt blow the whole situation out of perportion

Author's Response: Yes she does! Unfortunately I think she's pretty good at hitting the wall. ;)

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/11 01:03 am Title: Fair Days Before the Storm

Was that the same pervert or a different one? Great chapter!

Author's Response: Different one. ;D

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/11 09:29 pm Title: Cause and Effect

I'm disappointed in Simone. She is an awesome character in many ways but she does not seem as warm and supportive as the kits need her to be. She needs to remember that they are in a world that is not their own and the only thing they have of their previous life is each other. I think no matter what happens they need her unconditional love and support. I don't think she can even begin to understand how they must feel. I think they need more emotional support than they are getting from her. Sorry. I hope this doesn't sound too critical. I'm just very involved in the story.

Author's Response: The problem between Simone and the readers, I think, is that she's serving a function in their lives as important as being their surrogate mother - she's imposing the human standards by which they'd be required to live by, if they're going to live openly in human society. It's especially difficult because there aren't any youko of Simone's acquaintance who can let her know what is, or isn't, normal for youko kits. It's not too critical at all! It's one of the unfortunate conflicts of the story.

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/11 03:32 pm Title: Shivers and Shakes

I knew it! They totally have some sort of healing powers. Great chapter!

Author's Response: They definitely do! ♥ Thank you. :)

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/11 07:10 am Title: Explosion

Good for Tom! Those bullies need to be put in their place! Tom needs karate or kung fu lessons to channel his powerful energy and make him an unbeatable fighting machine. I guess music and sex would be his preferred outlets though. Go Tomi!

Author's Response: Tom does his best! I agree, he could do well with some martial arts lessons. Unfortunately being proficient at music and sex are his limit. ;)

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/11 06:43 am Title: The Bottom Line

I need Simone to set up a chore chart for me and my kits in my universe.

Author's Response: It's easy! ;D Just get a big white board, write out a row for everyone's names, write columns for all of the chores that need to be done, then in the square where the name and the chore meet, write "daily" or "weekly" for that person/chore combo. :D

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/11 01:28 am Title: A Broken Trust

Ser Baudman is a dick! Didn't even try and listen to Bill's side of the story. I hope Geordie and his crew back off, or at least get theirs sometime soon. Great chapter! XD

Author's Response: He really is, poor Bill. That kind of trust, once broken, is gone forever! Sad. :( Thanks, I'm glad you thought it was great!

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/11 01:11 am Title: Keeping Pace

Omg! Something bad is going to happen? Cause I didn't really feel like something bad was going to happen, but when you say you feel like something bad is going to happen, I can't help feeling as though something bad is going to happen! 0_0

Author's Response: Hehe, I just get that way sometimes, exp with WIPs. ;)

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/11 10:47 pm Title: Waiting for You

Great chapter XD

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

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