Date: 11/22/09 01:54 am Title: Caught
OH, lol, I totally had a different thought process about where this was going. But now I want to kick Simone in the shins ;-; (so mature I know). No separating the twins ;~;
Author's Response: Now I want to know what you were expecting!! But, er, she's doing what is dictated by her morals? ;_;
Date: 11/22/09 01:50 am Title: The Sweetest Gift
Ahaha, well, I guess that something good will come out of it o__o; Hopefully D: *flails* I'm glad XD I feel so silly when I give reviews like they're so useless ;-; *goes to read*!
Date: 11/22/09 01:36 am Title: Caught
Oh and I found this typo:
"Mm, your mouth is cold, Tomi," Bill said, rubbing his lips up against Bill's. "Is it cold inside, too?"
Author's Response: D'oh *goes to fix* Thank you!
Date: 11/22/09 01:35 am Title: Caught
DUN DUN DAAAAAAAAAAA!
I love all of this action packed deliciousness, and my belly got all nice and warm just like the kit's when they were smooching. So sweet. :)
Author's Response: Yes indeedy, conflict again! Ahh I'm so glad! More smooching imminent. But I'm excited to start the next year. ;)
Date: 11/22/09 01:19 am Title: Caught
XD poor boys and poor Simone. I really love when you update, no matter how late. I didn't see any mistakes, but then again, I might've read over them in my excitement.
Author's Response: Hurrah, and thank you! I'm gonna try to make sure today's update is earlier in the afternoon, though. :D I'm glad you're loving this.
Date: 11/21/09 10:19 pm Title: Fair Days Before the Storm
Not gonna lie, I cheered a bit when Tom kicked the creeper in the nuts :D
Still fabulous, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: He deserved it! :/ Thinking he can get away with kit-napping lil' Bill!? Tom will do what he has to, to protect his Bill. Thank you! I hope to not disappoint!
Date: 11/21/09 08:31 am Title: Fair Days Before the Storm
Wait. Pervert had youko ears on? Why? To draw them to him? Was it the same pervert or another one? Oh and now he's pissed at Tom! Oh no.
Author's Response: Augh, this is the problem with writing and posting so fast. I didn't make it clear enough - yes, it's a different man. The twins don't know why he had the ears on, but it was partly because it's a fair and he had the set of ears; partly because he wanted to attract the kits' attention.
Date: 11/21/09 07:48 am Title: Fair Days Before the Storm
i would've kicked that son of a bitch in the shins too.
rrr!!
uhh... can't wait for tomorrow, then.
thank you for posting
Author's Response: He deserved it! :D ...I hope you guys are still speaking to me after tomorrow.
Date: 11/21/09 02:33 am Title: Fair Days Before the Storm
Ahhhhhhhhhh! That was so action packed, I adorrrrrred it! I can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*flails crazily*
Author's Response: Eee I'm glad it came across action-packed! *excited you're excited!*
Date: 11/21/09 01:00 am Title: Fair Days Before the Storm
Be happy! This was a great chapter! I love the twins' interactions with each other. Please keep up the good work (good lord, I sound like a teacher!)
Author's Response: Woohoo, then I'm happy! I still think I need to be a bit more clear about the pervert, because there was some confusion that he was the same one from last year - this was a different guy. With a now-ruptured tender bit. >:D Thank you!
Date: 11/21/09 12:55 am Title: Fair Days Before the Storm
This isn't really much of a review, since I'm dead tired, but I'm curious: how do you pronounce youko? My friend and I keep battling about it XD Love the story, and I love that you update a lot. Can't wait to see what happens next! xoxo
Author's Response: Ahaha, no worries, that's totally where I was yesterday; I left a couple of incoherent reviews anyhow. Youko is "yo," like the greeting, plus "ko" like the start of "cocoa." I love Japanese because it's a pretty phonetic language. There's a slight elongation on the "yo" because of the "u." I'm so glad you love the story! And I'm so happy people love the fast updates, I feel like I'm not pushing myself hard for nothing. ;D
Date: 11/21/09 12:55 am Title: Fair Days Before the Storm
Glorendipitous! That pretty much describes the sight of an email alert for this story, too. ^_~ I think my favorite bit of mental imagery in this chapter was the one conjured up while Bill was admiring the pewter foxes, much as that landed him in trouble eventually. Also loved when Bill said it was his job to pester Tom, and that Tom ought to look it up in the city code book. Hee. They may be unconventional brothers, but they're brothers all the same.
skldfjg I suspected the pervert would show up again when I read the end notes on the last chapter! Man, do I ever hope Tom did managed to rupture one of his testicles. Both would be preferable, but I'd settle for one. Grr.
Fabulous and far more than readable, as always. I'm definitely being spoiled by this chapter-a-day thing, but even if you updated only once a month or even less often, I'd still await new chapters with bated breath!
Author's Response: XD I am so happy it gives you that feeling! Ahh, thank you, I thought that was an especially pretty moment, too. Too bad he brought home the ring and not the foxes. ;) *pictures Tom checking Bill's references*
Darn perverts! Gordon and Simone are on the alert, though.
Thank you soooo much!! Honestly, in a masochistic sort of way I'm enjoying the chapter a day thing myself, just because there's SO much to tell and I'm happy to be getting it out there. I'm really happy you're enjoying it.
Date: 11/21/09 12:28 am Title: Fair Days Before the Storm
*flails* That end-note scares me DDD: But yeah, I like that Tom can find Bill :) That makes me happy face. (...My reviews are horrible.)
Author's Response: I hope people will still speak to me, wah. But yes! Tom can find Bill, and vice versa. ♥ If Bill hadn't been so stressed he would've realized. I like your reviews, and "happy face" is a perfectly valid comment. :P
Date: 11/20/09 11:33 am Title: Shivers and Shakes
Aww that was so precious. Poor sick Bill and angry, pissed off protective Tom. I love how they heal each other.
I knew the perverts would come back! Watch out Tom and Bill! Pretty little kits. Can't wait for the next one as usual!!
Date: 11/20/09 05:11 am Title: Shivers and Shakes
Very sweet chapter.
Date: 11/20/09 04:07 am Title: Shivers and Shakes
AWWWWWWWWWWWW this was the sweetest thing ever! I love little Tom sooo muuuch ♥
Date: 11/20/09 02:17 am Title: Shivers and Shakes
ohhhhhhhhh! this just touched my heart. :) didn't you say earlier that youko had magic powers sometimes? maybe tom's a healer, or maybe he can just heal bill because they love each other. it's like he took bill's sickness into himself. anyway, I really needed this right now, it's wonderful as usual. :)
Date: 11/19/09 10:57 pm Title: Shivers and Shakes
I do believe they go together, more than ever after this chapter! ...well, okay, maybe it's impossible to believe it any more firmly than I already did, but if I needed convincing, this chapter would've managed it. *claps hands excitedly* I was already fascinated by whatever happened when Tom hurt his leg, and now, oooh. Both kits healed up so quickly from the draught? Intriguing!
I gasped out loud when Bill collapsed and Tom screamed for him, by the way. Hopefully they won't get sick again, or if they do, Simone and Gordon will have learned their lesson and will let our kits stay together and, hmm, maybe fix each other up?
I am so ridiculously gleeful every time you update this story, and even more so with the dedication to meeeeee. :D I adore this chapter so much, and I must mention the ending bits before I conclude this review - twinkissing always meets with my approval!
Date: 11/19/09 09:36 pm Title: Shivers and Shakes
I love the last line! It's a perfect description of Bill. :) Of course I'm still reading, I love these stories. I hope your headache gets better. :( Good job!
Date: 11/19/09 09:35 pm Title: The Sweetest Gift
You're welcome :) I feel so bad when I find typos because I feel like I'm being mean when I point them out *flails*
But yes, the chapter was very sweet :) Cute twins~