Date: 11/24/09 10:31 pm Title: Explosion
Wow, I was off the mark about that, rofl. They should've kicked Geordie in the nuts, that's my solution for everything @__@
Date: 11/24/09 06:07 pm Title: The Bottom Line
Oooo, alone time for the twins. ;) I hope you're feeling better! :)
Date: 11/24/09 06:26 am Title: The Bottom Line
Oh no the foreboding in your end notes, I'm fearing for little kit!Tom.
And my kits are never boring, take it back! Lol
Date: 11/24/09 01:43 am Title: The Bottom Line
Not that boring. I'll be waiting for next chapter!
Date: 11/24/09 01:33 am Title: The Sweetest Gift
Boring, eh, maybe, but this is still a story with a plot. We can't be spoiled with twin cutness all the time, which you do seem to be doing an excellent job of lately, I might say.
Twins and chores though, somehow that plan seems doomed :P
But the twins without adult supervision, now THAT could lead to some interesting plot, if I might say so. And by 'plot' I mean . . . . . . . hehe
Date: 11/23/09 10:44 pm Title: The Bottom Line
I wasn't bored! I wasn't blubbering the way I was over the last chapter, either. ;_; Lovely chapter though it was. I'm giggling over the twins' reactions to a boring money discussion, though, and the fact that they do sound like a pair of little teenagers when asked about their day. I still love the, er, relationship between Bill and Kas, too. That's exactly how my cat reacts to children and/or canines, and Bill is sort of both. Ish. Poor kitty.
Okay, so the two of them staying at home means more chores. Is it bad that I'm also thinking it could mean more opportunity for... other things... I'm not even gonna finish that thought.
Date: 11/23/09 10:27 pm Title: The Bottom Line
Bahaha, the twins being left home alone excited me. Can't wait for the next chapter, and I hope you feel better =]
Date: 11/23/09 10:23 pm Title: The Bottom Line
Rofl, chore board XD Oh, poor twins.
Uh oh D: Explosion? Twins vs. Simone? *flails*
Date: 11/23/09 10:40 am Title: Delaying the Inevitable
Awww, the end there is just too adorable, but Simone's continuing attempts at separating the kits really makes me not like her, even though I'm sure she has their "best interest" at heart (whatever that means). I mean it's Bill and Tom lady. They are meant to be together. Get over it.
But your beginning notes were right right, this was a hard chapter, my heart went out for them, they were just so desperately wrought at the prospect of losing each other. But they do seem to win every time, they might lie about it, but their relationship has pretty much stayed the same. It makes me wonder when they are going to lose, it kind of seems inevitable.
I love how you write the kits, too, they both seem so real and complex. It seems so like Tom to say that Bill needs him, when on the inside it's Tom saying he needs Bill too. It seems like that is one of the fundamental differences between the twins you have captured beautifully, they feel the same about each other, but the way they express those feelings to the outside world is what makes them different.
Thanks so much, I'll seriously be checking THF every hour for the new chapter! :P
Date: 11/23/09 06:51 am Title: Delaying the Inevitable
I absolutely adore Gordon in this story, he always comes in and saves the day. Probably aggravates Simone, but she'll get over it.
I have grown so spoiled with daily kits. I don't know what I'll do if it stops. Lol!
Date: 11/23/09 06:27 am Title: Delaying the Inevitable
good, Gordon, good. *nods head*
what'd we do without him?!
Date: 11/23/09 02:22 am Title: Delaying the Inevitable
Tense chapter. D:
Simone just knows what will certainly happen if they keep sleeping in the same bed, but Gordon... I don't know, is just oblivious? Or wiser maybe, lol.
Anyway, I kinda prefer the character of Gordon. ^^
I understand why the kits feel more relaxed when he's here. Simone tends to scare me! D:
Keep up the good work! This story is amazing and so addicting.
Date: 11/23/09 02:19 am Title: Delaying the Inevitable
Simone! D: Leave them be! Though I actually understand her feelings on the matter, I guess. BUT STILL. :( Poor kits, this broke my heart. Their love is so strong. *_*
Date: 11/23/09 12:55 am Title: Delaying the Inevitable
It's unusual that I read a fic where Gordon is the twins' savior. It's a nice change. :) I enjoy your style of writing, very much. Please keep it up. :) Thank you for writing!
Date: 11/22/09 10:56 pm Title: Delaying the Inevitable
Gordon is my hero ;D Lovely chapter. I miss snow, so I'm eager to read about kits playing in it.
Date: 11/22/09 03:02 pm Title: The Sweetest Gift
For some reason 'Caught' equated to me (after that chapter we had just read with the kitnappers) that one of them was going to get Caught like THAT, not by Simone, hahaha.
Oh, and yes, I know, I'm all pro-twins, so I have to be anti-Simone XD
Author's Response: Ohhh, okay! Got it. Yeah, I can see where you'd get that idea. ;)
Poor Simone!
Date: 11/22/09 08:01 am Title: Caught
Damn it simone! Quit it! Lol. I don't like your ending note there. I'm suddenly very concerned!
Author's Response: *grins* I seem to be provoking that reaction. Hey, she's doing what she thinks is right! But a little concern is not misplaced...
Date: 11/22/09 06:50 am Title: Caught
So many sweet kisses in this chapter! :D
I kind of understand Simone, but I'm glad Bill lied to her. x)
Tom's reaction was cute too.
Wonder what she's gonna do.
Author's Response: Yes indeedy!
Hey, the twins are doing what they have to, as far as they're concerned. ;) It's a tough lesson to learn. ...And we should find out today!
Date: 11/22/09 03:40 am Title: Caught
Can't someone explain to that woman that it's not ~*immoral*~ for them? I really want to smack her right now :|
Author's Response: They didn't come with a handbook! So she doesn't know that. D: But I appreciate your urge to smack!
Date: 11/22/09 02:32 am Title: Caught
I can see Simone's point of view, but it's so evil to want to keep the twins apart! Not literally apart, argh, you know what I mean! I'll still speak to you, no matter how bad whatever happens next is. :) Good job!
Author's Response: I know, but she's doing what she thinks is right. ;_; Brotherly love, not brotherlove! ;D We'll see how you feel after today's update... Thank you!