Date: 11/26/09 09:33 pm Title: Cause and Effect
I love your story...but I missed some Tom and Simone time. Sometimes I think that he doesn´t love her so much!
Date: 11/26/09 09:05 pm Title: Cause and Effect
simone needs to learn to mind her own damm bussines.
Date: 11/26/09 07:38 am Title: Fair Days Before the Storm
They really are like... tooth rottingly sweet. I love these kits.
Date: 11/26/09 05:30 am Title: Cause and Effect
Interesting chapter, as always. :)
Looking forward to the twinkissing. :D
Date: 11/26/09 05:16 am Title: Shivers and Shakes
I love that you basically gave Kish sick kits for her birthday lol. I like very much that they can somehow heal each other with their gifts though - really gorgeous idea. But ouch that they find out about Ser Baudman on top of this >.>
Date: 11/26/09 04:48 am Title: A Broken Trust
Some of the adults in this really do make me wonder @_@ Poor kits, more mature than the teachers. ♥
Date: 11/26/09 03:19 am Title: Cause and Effect
So does Tom actually think that fighting won't solve all his problems? Did he actually learn a life lesson? *gasps* Oh goodness. *wipes tears from eyes* they are just growing up so fast, aren't they?
Great chapter though. But reading about Tom going into the fight all alone nearly made me sick to my stomach. I was so nervous he was going to be badly beaten by Geordie, I almost didn't want to read. And Bill feeling his pain to start off with made it seem a lot worse than it was. But major points for the twin connection!
Date: 11/26/09 12:19 am Title: Cause and Effect
Awww.. Poor Tom.. he seems so sad, after figuring out that fighting (or nothing, actually) will ever change anyone's thinking. ;__; I feel so sorry for him, even though it's something he needed to learn.. at least the kits were getting good grades! :D
Very interesting chapter.. I actually enjoy fillers and chapters like this, with more every day life/information in them, a lot. :3 I don't know if I'll be online tomorrow, but I'll sure try if there's kit kissing involved! :D
Date: 11/26/09 12:18 am Title: Cause and Effect
I'll be online to read it! Good chapter, I'm a little sorry for Geordie, but I still kinda want to whack him a good one. :p
Date: 11/26/09 12:08 am Title: Cause and Effect
You know I love these kits. I hope they don't get separated in school but I think they might. And thank you for the well wishes. :) I have so much to do and I can't do any of it. D: I have twins to write, damnit! *hearts*
Date: 11/25/09 11:56 pm Title: Cause and Effect
I worry bad things are coming as a result of that fight :( But I enjoyed the chapter ^__^ Everyone loves twinkissing, or well, they should. [/silly comment]
Date: 11/25/09 10:02 pm Title: Explosion
I love the little hints of their magic showing up and grrr bullies! This made my night. :)
Date: 11/25/09 08:20 pm Title: The Sweetest Gift
Oh my goodness. I promise I didn't leave you. I can't believe I'm so far behind!!!! I promise I will write a proper review as soon as possible I just today finished year 2 so I'm sorry for my lateness.
Date: 11/25/09 02:27 pm Title: Explosion
That damn Geordie! Someone needs to take care of his foul attitude, but it sounds like his father is the one spouting that crap.
And the teachers that treat them badly aggravate me just as much! Grrr with the youko hate. Those poor boys are always in detention or meeting with the head master, lol.
I'm proud of Tom for standing up for them. I would have done it too. So it wasn't that bad of an explosion, at least it was a provoked explosion. *pets Tomi*
Date: 11/25/09 07:59 am Title: Keeping Pace
You're evil, just saying. These ominous end notes :o Idk. Poor kits ;_;
Date: 11/25/09 07:26 am Title: Waiting for You
Pointing out mistakes as requested! Giving you a brief quote so can find them a bit easier.
...was behaving pretty selfish, when it came down to it... - selfishly?
"Whoosh," Simone said with a soft laugh, when Tom had gotten it all out. "Feel better?" - Bill rather than Tom?
...thought about it, being somewhere about Tom, then... - without Tom?
Those were all I noticed and that said, awwwwwwww. I think my favourite bit was the manipulation of Simone at the end - go twins! They really are too precious.
Date: 11/25/09 06:38 am Title: Holding On
*gives much for the humble efforts*
Tomi is so angry and defensive. It makes me want to squish him up, even if he'd hate that.
Date: 11/25/09 05:09 am Title: The Sweetest Gift
I don't think you're burning anyone out, but I would agree that you're totally posting at a rate where I haven't a hope of keeping up XD I liked this chapter, though the whole time I was reading it, I read it like it was a set up for Georg and Gustav coming into the story. It's made me quite excited if it is!
Date: 11/25/09 02:11 am Title: Explosion
:) I was so happy to see another update! You know, I'm typically a pacifist, but in Geordie's case, I just want to rip the little twerp to shreds! Being so mean to the kits like that. You have a way of creating quite hate-able villains, and of course the kids are lovable. :) Wonderful job! I'll be awaiting your next update!