Date: 07/24/10 08:37 pm Title: Perfect
whoa, that felt sooo real, i loved it. now i'm shaking because of it.... amazing job, really.
Author's Response: Oh wow, thanks so much! *___* Sorry I didn't respond sooner, I'm never on here anymore...
Date: 12/05/09 01:55 pm Title: Perfect
very nice, very nice. Sad too.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/02/09 01:27 pm Title: Perfect
This hurts to read. It was beautiful and true and real. And so sad!
I liked the spacing and the fact that the words were in three places left, right and center.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yeah, it was hard to write, but I'm glad you thought it was good ^.^
Date: 11/30/09 01:14 am Title: Perfect
That was amazing. Bloody amazing. I think this is easily how child-stars might end up. You wrote it amazingly. I really liked this style off writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! =)
Date: 11/15/09 10:18 pm Title: Perfect
I loved the way this was written (:
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 11/15/09 11:39 am Title: Perfect
Wow, angsty... But I like always this kind of disjointed style of writing. This was interesting (and sad) way to show us one possibility underneath the perfect cover of Bill Kaulitz. I think you should write more with this style, but of course should be also careful, because this style is easily coming empty and used if not careful. But this was nice, I liked it... Just felt sorry for Bill. His personal hell.
Author's Response: Yeah, it was mega angsty *_*rnThank you so much! Yeah, I can see what you mean, though, things can get easily lost and meaningless in this style if you don't put thought into it. Anyway, thank you!
Date: 11/15/09 10:29 am Title: Perfect
i really like the craziness remnids me of my favortie author ellen hopkins but omg the story was awesome too and soo beliveable
Author's Response: Haha, thank you so much ^^
Date: 11/15/09 07:01 am Title: Perfect
Uh,,,
woah...
It was really good. Insanely so....
Author's Response: :D :D Thank you SO much! X3 That means a lot!
Date: 11/15/09 01:14 am Title: Perfect
Oh, I liked this!
I imagined different people
speaking different lines in
my head which made it more
interesting to read haha.
I enjoyed your craziness! ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you so much ^^ Haha, glad it turned out that way for you, cuz that's sort of how it went in my mind, too. rnThanks for the awesome review :)
