Date: 01/19/11 01:21 am Title: Chapter One, or Back to School
Bill's timetable is close to mine actually :D Love this rewrite
Date: 10/23/10 09:39 pm Title: Chapter Nine, or at Work
I loved the original I Less Than Three You, but I'm loving this one more. The changes you've made are wonderful - I love how Tom and Bill's relationship is moving more slowly here and that Bill didn't agree to go out with Andi. The whole timeline here is working out wonderfully, and I'm getting more dimension from the characters as well. Not to say that the original wasn't wonderful (it was - it's in my favorites), but this one just takes that one step farther.
I'm hoping you get back to this eventually... I'm a little worried you won't finish it, seeing as it's been so long since you last updated, but I'll keep an eye out for further updates anyway. :)
Author's Response: I am working on the next update I promise. I just got distracted by other things XD
Date: 08/14/10 07:39 am Title: Chapter Nine, or at Work
I love this story, and I also love the original, so please finish this story, I want to know how it ends :)
Date: 02/06/10 04:50 pm Title: Chapter Nine, or at Work
You gonna update any time soon? I want to see how this works out.
Date: 02/06/10 04:47 pm Title: Chapter Eight, or the Party
I can't believe Andi did that! How could he?
Date: 02/06/10 04:44 pm Title: Chapter Seven, or Opening Night
Tom kissed Bill?! yay!
Date: 02/06/10 04:42 pm Title: Chapter Six, or Friends
Andi getting jealous?
Date: 02/06/10 04:40 pm Title: Chapter Five, or Becoming Friends?
still pissed at Bill's mom.
Date: 02/06/10 04:38 pm Title: Chapter Four, or Told You
Ok, feeling terrible for Bill.
Date: 02/06/10 04:36 pm Title: Chapter Three, or Wednesday
nice relationship w/ mommy. she sounds like a bitch though. And bill would be such a terrible sweeny todd, just no!
Date: 02/06/10 04:33 pm Title: Chapter Two, or The Kiss that Shouldn't Have Happened
second chapter was good, this is moving a little slowly but I get the sense it's going somewhere interesting.
Date: 02/06/10 04:30 pm Title: Chapter One, or Back to School
I didn't read this the first time around but I figured I should take a look if you were going to the trouble of improving it. So far so good. Getting a decent idea of their personalities.
Date: 01/30/10 05:53 pm Title: Chapter Nine, or at Work
Although I really, really like the old version of this, I like this one even better! It's better written, you changed a few details that made it even better (I'm using that word a lot, huh?), and yeah... it's great!
Hey, I don't know if you did it intentionally, or if you don't know, but one of your totally awesome stories (Because... I Love You, cowritten with RAWR_dino) is no longer here. I hope you'll post it again, even if it's not finished, because it's absolutely fantastic.
Date: 01/28/10 06:12 pm Title: Chapter Nine, or at Work
As I said on my first review at this rewrite I love the way everything is going on =) thanks again ^^
Date: 01/28/10 06:11 pm Title: Chapter Eight, or the Party
A rape, that’s always the worst part, ya know?
I’m not capable of being okay after I’ve read something like that.
Date: 01/19/10 02:46 am Title: Chapter Nine, or at Work
Awwww!!! Tom kissed Bill's cheek. x] That's so cute. x]
I'm loving the rewrite, it's so great.
And Bill's right, Andi deserved it. >:[
I can't wait for more. :D
Date: 01/19/10 12:35 am Title: Chapter Nine, or at Work
EEP! Yay! -Squeals-
Date: 01/18/10 07:37 pm Title: Chapter Nine, or at Work
Okay, so I have to start off by saying I was listening to my TH station on Pandora.com and right as the story mentioned the Saving Able song, it was playing in the radio. I've never been so excited and slightly creeped out before.
Anywho, I gotta say, I really like this story. I haven't read the original and it's taking everything in me not to go over and finish it there, but I don't want to be spoiled.
Good job!!
Date: 01/18/10 03:44 pm Title: Chapter Nine, or at Work
*Bouncing* Yaaaay, Tom kissed Bill on the cheeeeek
Date: 01/18/10 02:26 pm Title: Chapter Nine, or at Work
Awww Billi! Tomi! I sound so weird wow! I just gave you your 70th review!!! I cannot wait till the next chpater =DDDD I Love this and i usually dont like these kind of stories becuase people rush the everything and soon bill and tom have sex, but your story is nice and slow awesome!!! =D