Date: 05/17/10 09:49 pm Title: The Answer
Every story i read on here,some part makes me cry
Author's Response: Ah! I'm sorry i made you cry
Date: 05/17/10 04:22 pm Title: Prologue
Holy mother of moses, I cried for little Bill!
Author's Response: Yeah I do to sometimes I and I'm the one who wrote it
Date: 05/16/10 07:27 pm Title: The Answer
okay i just got caught up with this story and it is AMAZING!! but can you PLEASE tell me what Yan wants help with?! it's really killing me!! lol but please post soon! i really love your stories!!
Author's Response: Well I'm glad you like it. Ah sorry you're going to have to wait for that... but it's in the next chapi.
Date: 05/14/10 08:37 pm Title: The Answer
FORSHADOWNING! :D :D :D
Author's Response: XD
Date: 05/12/10 10:53 am Title: The Answer
im loving this story...when is bill gonna find out who "the man" is ?what does yan want help with?
what happened between bill and sophie? and why is she his "real guardian"?or is bill sophie son?...i dunno what im saying..im probably off the mark..
so many questions..i love your writing style and am a big fan!
update soon please xo
Author's Response: You'll find out soon about Yan and the man. You'll find everything out... That's okay. I think I made you think that many question. Thanks. I will
Date: 05/12/10 12:25 am Title: The Answer
wait with that nipple play, Tom didnt see Bills scar O_o? was it dark, too aroused to notice, huh?. hehe. welcome back ^_^..whew is happy that i track this fiction and i might not have known that there another chapter up =D want to know MORE about what Yan want to do. Congrats on the Sechelings award ^_^
Author's Response: Ah! Maybe he didn't. THanks XD. Hihi. I'll update more soon. Thanks XD
Date: 05/11/10 10:46 pm Title: The Answer
YAAAY! An update which was incredibly smexy!!
Author's Response: I'm glad
Date: 05/11/10 08:00 pm Title: The Answer
:O i need to read the next chap soon so im reveiwing :D and its awsome im like in love with this story i saw it updated and i squealed and clicked and went into lala land were bill&tom love eachother and i fracking love your leaping story :3
bye bye
love you!!!
Author's Response: LOL!!! It'll come soon. I'm glad.
Date: 05/11/10 06:43 pm Title: The Answer
ahhh more!
Author's Response: It'll come soon
Date: 05/11/10 06:16 pm Title: Prologue
i figured it had to be something; you have never been mean towards me before. i plan to continue reading, ive been here by your side through this story from the start. i just dont wanna see your other readers stop reading because of your characters choices. if anyone else was in Bill's place, they wouldn't go off and jeopardize their relationship with Tom by this point in the story, thats all i was trying to say before. i truly do love you sugar, and it takes a very strong person to admit that they made a mistake and apologize. ill stay by you with this. *hug*
Author's Response: Yeah that's true. I'm not usually like that. I do agree with you. It's true. I do agree with you on that. I'm glad that i could clear this out with you. I'm happy that you're still going to be by mean. It means a lot.
Date: 05/11/10 03:55 pm Title: The Answer
Jesus, I can't even remember what Yan wanted Bill to help him with. Memory like a goldfish
Author's Response: LOL!!! That's okay you'll know soon
Date: 05/11/10 11:51 am Title: Dangerous Decision
Hey Yuri... i'm reading again (cuz i loooove your story) and i just got confused by something. Sophie's character (chp 5) seems a bit agressive to Bill but later on near the last update she was really caring. What changed her? Also, Yan (last couple of updates) says something about Tom calling out Bill's name while having sex with Sophie. Does this mean that Sophie was aware of Tom's attraction to Bill? Was she trying to facilitate it in some way when they left for Greece and left Tom to take care of Bill? I think these are important parts of your story that you should include. Still love your story and still waiting to find out who "The Man" was.
Author's Response: Well I'm glad you read it. You'll figure everything out... like everything will be clear. I'm glad you love and you'll see soon
Date: 05/11/10 11:30 am Title: The Answer
btw, when are we gonna find out who Bill was having phone-sex with. Is it Tom?????
Author's Response: It'll be soon. You'll find out soon
Date: 05/11/10 11:28 am Title: The Answer
let me clarify the last comment. i started reading the story a while ago, i got hooked on the story, then there were no updates for a long while, and i was glad when i saw this most recent one. Still confused?
Author's Response: YEAH!! That's okay. You'll be unconfused soon
Date: 05/11/10 09:31 am Title: The Answer
awwwww poor Bill! i'm glad Tom did that, Bill needs a little love and attention
i still wanna know what Bill has to help Yan with. hopefully Tom doesn't find out
great chapter
Author's Response: HAHAHAHH!!! Yeah he does... he;s so weird. You'll find out soon. Thanks
Date: 05/11/10 03:06 am Title: Prologue
im reading and reviewing this. if i didnt feel that you could use my constructive criticism, i wouldnt have said anything. im 27 years old and in college, and when i choose to review its to tell you what i feel about your story. keep the drama by all means, but i only mentioned that you could cut down on it so you dont overdose. you can loose your readers for overdoing things til its expected, and they dont feel that you are going to change it up. the other way to loose readers is for being rude. constructive criticism isnt putting you down, and doesnt mean you can just tell a reader who has reviewed every chapter you posted and has been here since this story began to just stop reading if i dont like it. after that response, you should be glad that im not the kind of person who lashes out and tells her friends to stop reading your stuff. maybe you are having a bad day or something, but you should be more polite to the people who give you reviews.
Author's Response: Yeah no I'm sorry I was having a bad day and for some reason I took your review badly. Don't take it personal I wasn't trying in anyway to be angry with you because of what you wrote. I know very well that I can't keep the drama too high cause it's like always going to be repeating. I hope you didn't follow what I said in the other response. I'm not that kind of person to just get pissed because you're giving me advice. Thanks for reviewing again so I could apologize for my mistake.
Date: 05/10/10 03:25 pm Title: The Answer
yay tom/bill action
Author's Response: Yup XD
Date: 05/10/10 03:05 pm Title: The Answer
mon amour! T'a continuer a repondre a ce poste! Je suis tellement contente! XD I'm losing my horrible grip on french so I thought I'd bother you with that. At least the first part isn't so bad :p
Anyways, let me know if you want to get together at some point soon! I want my movies back...omg I sound like an ex wifey XD
Anyways, I loved the post. Still dunno what's going to happen but I know that whatever it is, you'll make it fun and entertaining!
Author's Response: HAHHAAH!!! I was like who the fuck is this at the beginning and then I saw your pen name and I was like YEAH!!! HAHAHH!! So true I still have some of your movies. Well you decide and I'll tell you when I can. I'm glad you loved it. Of course i will XD
Date: 05/10/10 02:56 pm Title: Prologue
DX XD lol
Author's Response: XD
Date: 05/10/10 01:42 pm Title: The Answer
:D MORE.
Author's Response: More will come soon