Date: 11/21/09 09:53 pm Title: Dangerous Decision
YAYYYYYYYYYYY. Awesome. So excited for the chapters coming up!
Author's Response: XD it'll come soon
Date: 11/21/09 08:58 pm Title: Dangerous Decision
woohooo!!! sexy babysitter!! why does Tom remember all the things from when Bill was around? hmm
more soon please
Author's Response: Yes... very sexy babysitter. I don't know... I guess we'll find out eventually
Date: 11/21/09 07:12 pm Title: Dangerous Decision
Omg i really love this one, vera well done, more soon?
xoxo
Author's Response: XD!!! I'm happy!
Date: 11/21/09 07:03 pm Title: Dangerous Decision
Wow. I really, really like this so far. I'm very glad I opened it x]
please update soon D:
much love x]
Author's Response: YEAH!!! I'm glad you like it
Date: 11/21/09 06:43 pm Title: Dangerous Decision
oh man.....moremore more-=-=-PLEASE~
Author's Response: OKAY OKAY!!
Date: 11/21/09 06:32 pm Title: Dangerous Decision
OMG I wonder what will happen next.
Author's Response: You'll see soon enough
Date: 11/21/09 05:50 pm Title: Dangerous Decision
Aww poor Bill. All one with Tom for three whole months. Can't wait to see what happens! xD
Author's Response: I agree. Yup... all alone XD
Date: 11/21/09 05:43 pm Title: Dangerous Decision
"And I'll post more really soon"
You better!! :P
Ooh, I want to if Bill ever tells Tom, and if he does, how will Tom react ?! :P
This is so exiting!
Author's Response: AH!!! You'll have to wait and see
Date: 11/21/09 05:30 pm Title: Prologue
I love the story. Really quick update. I like that even more =) I can't wait for the next chap. I really want to see Bill all good and lovely, and then the pervie Bill showing his wild side to Tomi. The entire world gonna kill ya if u don't update soon...lol :D
Author's Response: HAHAHAHHAAH!!! No they won't. If you kill me you'll never know the end of the story
Date: 11/21/09 05:29 pm Title: Dangerous Decision
Ohhhhhh my goodness! XD THIS is going to be an interesting 3 months. Update soon, sweetie!
Author's Response: Yes it is. I'll try XD
Date: 11/21/09 05:16 pm Title: Dangerous Decision
.:D.
Author's Response: XD
Date: 11/21/09 05:15 pm Title: Dangerous Decision
This is really good so far!
Hope theres more!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll post more as soon as I can
Date: 11/21/09 05:08 pm Title: Dangerous Decision
Who can't relate to the feeling of being trapped,and I'm really starting to hate Bill's parents. Hopefully Tom will save him,ah...
Don't be afraid to take your time with this story,and get in the depths with these caracters.
I'm looking forward to read more!
Author's Response: YEah well i think everyone hates them. Yeah... maybe he will. OKAY!! I'll take all the time in the world XD! Jking
Date: 11/21/09 04:01 pm Title: Dangerous Decision
I want to give an HONEST opinion. Not trying to be mean here. This story is kind of boring for me. Bill seems like an Angsty Gary Stu, the therapists and his parents seem like evil jerk Gary Stus and Mary Sues. The plot is good, but the writing and characters are shallow. You need to make you readers really care about the characters, and you can do that by making them more origional and real. Right now all I'm sticking aorund for is the inevitable Tom/Bill hookup.
Some positives to your story is that it had good grammar (bad grammar pisses me off), the plot and general character pofiles are interesting, you give anecdotal history of Bill and Tom's relationship, you don't jump right into the sex, and that Bill pays for phone sex: something that is often viewed as negative or pathetic.
Hope this review inspires rather than offends.
Author's Response: Okay... well I`m going to be honest too since you were honest with me. I really don't care what you think. If you find that it's boring than stop reading it and I'm sorry but Mary Sues and Gary Stus? If you really think that's what I'm trying to do then you're wrong. And sorry if you find my writing shallow! Geez. If you're only going to stick around for the Bill/Tom hookup then you better stop reading it now if you don't want to die of boredom cause it's going to take a while before that even happens.rnOh well at least I did something good. which was not piss you off with grammar. And the fact that Bill pays for phone sex is not pathetic. Anyway.... sorry if you found this mean but this was really not the story to critise nor the day to write this kind of review.
Date: 11/21/09 03:54 pm Title: Dangerous Decision
:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!
Author's Response: XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Date: 11/21/09 03:37 pm Title: Dangerous Decision
morree;-;
Author's Response: Okay!
Date: 11/20/09 08:04 pm Title: Prologue
*peeks from behind a table* I'm watching you!
Author's Response: LOl... that's so not scary XD
Date: 11/20/09 05:59 pm Title: Hell On Earth
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Author's Response: oKAY
Date: 11/20/09 03:33 am Title: Hell On Earth
awwwww!!!! okay, im hopping this is Bill finding out Tom is going to 'babysit' him?
Author's Response: AH!!! You'll see
Date: 11/19/09 10:36 pm Title: Hell On Earth
I love this.
Author's Response: XD... i'm glad you do