Date: 10/15/23 06:57 am Title: First Meeting
This was so goodd
Date: 02/06/17 07:10 am Title: Epilogue
Okay, I think I started to read this like years ago, but never got to finish it for some reason. I was looking for all the stories I've reviewed and if there was anything I could reread there and I found this one! Okay I know this is an old story so I'm guessing your English has improved a lot since you wrote this, but I'd really recommend that you read this through now and fix all the grammar mistakes. 'Cause I noticed that the words your and you're as well as their and they're were mixed up quite a bit. But other than that I think this is a very good story. The whole Tom breaking up with Bill thing though should've come earlier I think so there would've been time to kinda go through that but other than that I really liked this! :D And God I felt stupid when I didn't realize that The Man was Tom's initials, though I knew it was Tom all the time XD But yes, I really enjoyed this story, I just think you should read this through now that it's been a while since you wrote this and fix all the errors and it'd be so much better! Great work! :D
Date: 02/15/15 02:16 am Title: Epilogue
Right now I just wanna give you a huge hug, woman ;_;
I don't know what else to say, just... AMAZING ;_;
In the first parts of the story was very interesting cause Bill's life was so unfair for him :( And I have to say, maybe I had just a little clue that TheMan would be Tom, but... but, I really didn't wait it when I realized that he's was, really, TOM Ahsklmkdagkld ;_; In the 34 chapter I was just thinking "So, so, is it serius? Tom is gone? So, who the fuck will be with Bill? Oh fuck, don't tell me will be TheMan, who the fuck is he?!" In fact, I was waiting he would be Bushido or someone else, so when I read TOM OHMYGOOOSHHH!!! I cried and danced at the same time ;_;
Thank you so much for share your story. Had a lot of drama, but I really liked it!!!!!! FAVORITES! :D
PD:I know it's very late to review it, hehehe, it's 2015, but I just needed to do it C: And, I found this story in Spanish version, but I preferred to read and review it here, :) Congratulations! :') See you. :D
Date: 12/20/14 12:50 pm Title: Epilogue
And then they had sex and lived happily ever after!!
Date: 12/20/14 12:48 pm Title: First Meeting
Thank you for that. I was just about to reach into the story and kill Tom. Now I don't have to. :)
I can't believe Yan!!!!! I was actually feeling kinda sorry for the little fucker! *reaches into the story and kills him instead* Ok, now I'm good.
Date: 09/21/14 02:07 am Title: Prologue
So perfect!!! Amazing story!!!!
Date: 12/02/13 12:24 am Title: Epilogue
God, I love it, they are so cute and romantic. I absolutly love Tom again, I hated him for a chapi. Definetly this is one of my favourite fics ever, I totally love it!
Date: 12/02/13 12:12 am Title: Epilogue
...Loved the end!
Date: 12/02/13 12:12 am Title: First Meeting
Oh-my-god, I must have commented a lot of times here but oh my god. It was so obvious from the beggining that The Man was Tom, but somewhere I really thought it was Bushido or even Yan. You made me suffer, my heart broke with Bill's one, but I love
Date: 12/01/13 11:42 pm Title: Merry Christmas
God, I hate you. I cant even believe Im writting this instead I keep on reading. Tom must be kidding or Im killing him!
Date: 11/29/13 12:07 pm Title: The Lost Lamb Comes Home
Aaaaaaaaaaaah, I love it. I couldn't even wait for the traslation and got here to read. I'm in love with this story, Tom is sooooo cute!
Date: 08/06/13 05:22 am Title: Epilogue
Wow. It's an old story, but I just read it yet.
I'am from germany, so my english is not perfect, but I want to try ro write a review ;)
At first the critic. The story plays in germany. So here you can't easily skip one or two weeks school.(because, when they where in the cottage ... )
And in germany you are allowed to sleep with fullages, when you are 16. So tom would not have to go to jail, when he had slept with bill, when he was 16 ;) Also in germany you are not allowed to drive a car when you are 15 because, you can just make the driver license, when you are 18. ( 17 too, but then you are just allowed to drive, when there is a person sitting in the car, that is not younger as 30 and has the driver license too )
That made the logic not sooo good, but okay, I made sure some faults too, when I write a story that plays in the USA.
Also a had sometimes the feeling, that you didnt write, because on some parts, there where many false words ( easy words, so I could read the fault, also I'm not a native englisch speaker ) and words that where not there ( for example, you forget often the word 'lips' ) So it makes it not so easy to read the story, and some times a get really annoyed by this, but thanksfull it was not too often :)
So, to the good things:
I liked the idea. ( also the scence when they were children ) and I hated Bills family too xD The beginning with tom and bill, when they get nearer to another, was really cute. when tom broke up with bill ... i dont know what i should thought. I guessed from the beginning, that tom is 'the man' but I liked, that I cant really could say that he was it, so long time. I did'nt get why bill was not angry about that, because so tom lied much more to him than he expect, but okay. Maybe he was to happy to have tom back ;) But i had whished, that he made it not so easy for tom, because he wanted to kill himself cause tom, and tom lied so much to him. I had liked it more, but the and is also okay how it is.
In all: I like this story really really much, so I'm glad, that you shared it with us :)
Date: 06/18/13 06:52 pm Title: Epilogue
I read this fic long time ago and I remembered it, because of some friends. I don’t like to be a ghost reader, so I came here to correct my mistake and say that this story is amazing. I read it completely and it made me fell so many emotions. It has a bit of everything, romance, sexy moments, some humor. I really love it. Thank you for sharing your talent and your fic with the rest of us. Kisses.
Author's Response: Aw... Thanks you. I'm glad you like it.
Date: 03/27/13 07:04 am Title: Epilogue
this was a really good story!!
i am sad that it is is over!
i wish there was a sequel to this!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. Yeah sorry no sequel. At least not one I'm planning.
Date: 12/19/12 06:33 pm Title: Epilogue
Loved it!I knew it was Tom who was The Man!
Author's Response: It became quite obvious at some point XD
Date: 08/19/12 06:16 pm Title: Prologue
I start to cry!!
Author's Response: Don't cry. Everything's going to be okay
Date: 03/21/12 12:10 am Title: Epilogue
This was a wonderfully written story. Really enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 02/26/12 01:44 am Title: Epilogue
OMG I LOVE IT! XD
Author's Response: I'm glad :)
Date: 02/26/12 01:35 am Title: First Meeting
ive cried so much in this story! lol i love it though, when the man turned out to be tom i was like "i fucking knew it!" you clever devil you XD
Author's Response: Yeah... sorry I made you cry so much. I'm glad you liked it. HAHAH!!! yeah I think at some point it became obvious who the man was XD.