Date: 10/07/11 10:09 am Title: 1.
This shows one of the reasons why I love the ability to use words to express and create. And I love the spare yet poetic way that you've done this.
Bill's expression and reaction as Tom pushes into him feels incredibly tender, and you've somehow managed to keep the overall mood of the piece throughout.
Needless to say, I'm a little in love with this piece. Favouriting.
Date: 11/25/09 03:28 am Title: 1.
Aww that was sweet :)
Date: 11/14/09 08:40 pm Title: 1.
this is so good, exquisite. wonderful job!
Date: 11/13/09 03:26 am Title: 1.
I think this story is beautiful. You have a gift for capturing a moment in time through words. Thank you for sharing. :)
Date: 11/12/09 05:27 pm Title: 1.
Awwww... Such a.. yes, beautiful! Very sweet, lovely and almost touching fic. Hot too. This ficm left a good feeling inside of me, happy feeling. They just semed to love each other so much! Few little mistakes, but nothing much. Wonderful little piece of work... Beautiful :)
Date: 11/12/09 03:17 pm Title: 1.
I loved that story.
And Bill is beautiful
Date: 11/12/09 03:06 pm Title: 1.
It was so nice. It's not the simply pwp/lemon thingy, It's more. And Bill is beautiful ..really beautiful :D
Date: 11/12/09 02:33 pm Title: 1.
love it
really really do
love the build up
love how I just want him to fin the word
like...even though we know the wird, since its in the title, I still feel like I dotn knpow it because I feel so much like Tom here
if that makes sense xD
Date: 11/12/09 12:25 pm Title: 1.
That was, well, beautiful.
Date: 11/12/09 10:54 am Title: 1.
Great job! A beautiful ending as well...
Date: 11/12/09 08:42 am Title: 1.
awww... i was gonna say 'how beautiful!!' but yeah, then it hit me :p but seriously, i loved it.. the ending was soo sweet!!! x
Date: 11/12/09 07:20 am Title: 1.
awweee... really fucking beautiful.. ethereal, otherwordly, perfection.. nothing could really fit as perfectly as that.. and I'm fucking cheesy. -headdesk- epic fail!
Date: 11/12/09 07:13 am Title: 1.
really beautiful n emotional
well done girl
marvellous!!!!!!
Date: 11/12/09 06:03 am Title: 1.
That was so sweet. Loved it. I really like how Tom was trying to figure out the word and then it suddenly hit him. Omg you have an adoptable thingy from morethantwins. I haven't gotten one yet lol.
Date: 11/12/09 02:42 am Title: 1.
Oh, how sweet! I love the point of view / tense it is written in and how words that are close to 'beautiful' but not quite as meaningful are skittered throughout. Excellent! c: