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Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/13 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 4

Dani's her (their?) daughter...and they've gotta be racers...

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/13 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 3

Ok...he knows her because they've raced each other in street racing, right? And her tattoo is Spanish for messenger of god...Tom definitely deserved that...it shouldn't matter that she's a chic...

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/13 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 2

Tomi...always thinking about the ladies...

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/13 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Totaled already? Shame on him...and no need to get so snarky, Tomi...

Reviewer: mad_hatter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/10 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 6

whoa. anyway the car is GORGEOUS i want one so bad.

Reviewer: mad_hatter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/10 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 5

AHHH i like it.

Reviewer: mad_hatter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/10 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 4

Dani. Is that Khris and Bill's daughter or something?

Reviewer: mad_hatter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/10 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 3

Uh-oh. How does Bill know Khris and why is he racing Tomi's car? Oh gott is Khris like an ex-girlfriend?!?!?!

Reviewer: mad_hatter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/10 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 2

Hahahaha the twins are so adorable!

Reviewer: mad_hatter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/10 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like it :)

Reviewer: callate Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/09 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 6

Ooh man! They should have another race soon. XD.

Reviewer: callate Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/09 11:03 am Title: Chapter 5

Is Tom gonna be the mystery driver =O

Author's Response: depends do you want Tom to be the mystery driver

Reviewer: callate Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/09 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 4

I suck at guessing but I'm gonna give it a try...XD. Maybe they know each other from car racing I'm not sure XD. And maybe Jesse works for some rich dude XD. And Dani maybe her kid or lil sibling XD...

Reviewer: callate Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/09 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 3

I have no idea how can Bill know Kris XD. But I do know what "Mensajera de Dios" means "God's messenger", something like that, Spanish is my first language even though is not as good as it used to be anymore XD...=P

Reviewer: callate Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 2

Haha crazy twins XD.

Reviewer: AilisHatake Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/09 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ahhh female twin? Awesome. I love the necklace..LOL!

Reviewer: Mynx Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/09 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice Jossy. I wonder whats story gonna be about

Reviewer: callate Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/09 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

More plz! (=

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