Date: 11/21/18 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was a good story!
Date: 02/19/11 12:17 am Title: Chapter 1
lol!this was great! its a borderline LotR parody xD
Date: 06/04/10 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so hot! I will never look at that mike the same way again.
Very smexy!
Date: 12/24/09 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
omfg that was good and hilarious!!!!
Date: 11/11/09 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
*O*
(That's honestly all I can say right now) This was so deliciously hot XD oh my goodness, that's about all I can manage to think. XD
Date: 11/11/09 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
*O*
(That's honestly all I can say right now) This was so deliciously hot XD oh my goodness, that's about all I can manage to think. XD
Date: 11/11/09 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG! The mike! Hah, I KNEW that someone is about to write about it... and this was a good one! I'm sure Bill's mike is as precious to him as Gibson is for Tom.
Hot and cute in a way, very fluent and smooth, easy to read and a good flow. Nice job here, made me giggle... Oh, poor Precious! :D
Date: 11/11/09 11:55 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved it! Nice! Now everytime Bill sings on stage, my mind will be in the gutter as he holds onto Precious. XD
Date: 11/11/09 11:49 am Title: Chapter 1
erm.. please don't kill me but first thing I thought was.
"oh my fucking God... isn't her name Sugar? and Fuck.. she's studded!!! poor Bill's ass.. and by the looks of her body it looks freaking rough.. uh... fuck.. poor ass."
really... it's good but yeah..
Author's Response: the name is correct...it is Sugar. however, this particular story was written based on the idea of a friend, who has always called Bill's mike Precious. hence, the use of the name. :o)rnrnas for the roughness....naaaahhhh. bill can take it. XD
Date: 11/11/09 10:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Nnnnngghhhhh Oh god honey that's hot!!! You should step out of your comfort zone more often if this is the result. Damn woman I'm a puddle on the floor! Awesome
Author's Response: thank you hon! i'm just glad everyone has liked it so far...and yes, i totally stepped out of my comfort zone with this one. i like the romantic aspect of it because that's what i wish for in my heart, but this was the first time i delved in the the pervy part of my brain. and whew, i needed a popsicle or 7 to cool off after writing this one. :o)
Date: 11/11/09 09:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Woot woot. Awesome. That was effin hot!!!
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 11/10/09 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Seriously, I am with Astrid here - DISAPPOINT? Dear LORD, woman! *gasps for air*
Guuuuuhhhhhh especially the imagery in the paragraph where Precious first makes her ahhh... impression on Bill ;D That was fucking GORGEOUS, so unbelievably dirty and I promise you - more than I ever could have hoped for! Nnnnnnnnghhhhhh
I've been dying for a story like this recently anyway - something so straight to the point, rough, angry, and I LOVE how dominant your Bill is; that in order for Tom to dominate him, he HAS to get this anger and force worked up. God, so perfect :) I also agree with Astrid - they pound it into our heads every day anyway, how much they care about each other, so it's just so refreshing to read something so raw.
The only thing different from how I usually think about this "scene" XD is that I almost always think of Bill being the one to initiate it - like that he would just have that dirty little fetish, and I think he would totally get off on knowing that he's using something in concert that nobody has any clue of the things he's done with it LOL :x But I think it's amazing that you took something out of my head, and made it completely your own.
OMG AND THE COCK RING. I HAVE NEVER READ THAT IN A FIC, ACTUALLY. And I didn't realize until Bill walked out of that bathroom that I hadn't, and that it's a SHAME because it's SO HOT LOL. And Tom's seduction in the bathroom was perfect - there's something about the word 'nasty' that just really does it for me *pants*
I wish I could be like Astrid and quote all my favorite parts, but I'm on my laptop with no mouse at the moment and copying things is haaaaaaard! But from the looks of it, it would be the same parts anyway ;)
Author's Response: O.o I am SO glad you liked it....I always worry when it's someone else's story idea that I put into words. I'm afraid it's not what they expected or had in mind for it. *sigh* I am totally speechless right now. I was absolutely sure this story wasn't gonna come out right. So thank you. I really wish I could say more, but I'm just so tickled to death that you liked it. <33333
Date: 11/10/09 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Those glittery mikes deserved a story about them, and what a story this was! That sex scene was too hot for words...I so can't even form a coherent sentence right now!
Author's Response: i needed a cold shower after writing it. :o) thank you for the kind words!
Date: 11/10/09 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was so hot. And so creative! Great job.
Author's Response: thank you so much!