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Reviewer: MidnightsRose Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/12 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 2

i like keep writing

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/11 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 2

Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/11 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! Poor Rayne!

Reviewer: Aylin Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 2

i really like this story so far.
it's a great idea for a fanfic and you should totally continue and keep updating!
=D

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/09 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

FOR THE LOVE OF EVERYTHING HOLY, TOKI, GET A FRICKIN BETA! You're still using the wrong forms of the words, and that drives me crazy. Your writing is good, but it needs just that little bit extra to make it better. In fact, Imma smack you on New Years if you don't send me the next chapter before you post it.

*snugglescuddlesglompsgivesgoodsextoskvishes*



Author's Response: lol, i had thea read it first before i did.

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