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Reviewer: juzziiewa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/09 02:00 am Title: CAPITULO UNO;;

yay! another chappiieeeeee!! -DancesAroundRoomSingingAutomatic-

good chappie cant wait for the next!

can i havers a cookie...? -pouts-

Reviewer: sarahyellow Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/09 01:39 am Title: CAPITULO UNO;;

I didn't realize before that Billa's universe was so futuristic. If Bill and Billa are going to end up together I hope the writing between the two gets deeper. I like that there's not like, super angst going on in Billa's world now that he's missing. You made it light hearted and sorta funny. That was nice.

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/09 01:10 am Title: CAPITULO UNO;;

awwwww, i love it hun!!! *takes a cookie* danke!

Reviewer: juzziiewa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 08:07 pm Title: INTRODUCTION;;

sounds good so far keep uploading! =]

Reviewer: TouchoftheWind Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 04:36 pm Title: INTRODUCTION;;

Nice start

Reviewer: slipping_abyss Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 03:12 pm Title: INTRODUCTION;;

I like it, it's very original . Unless of course someone already wrote about it. But I havn't read anything like it.
Update date soon~

Reviewer: hilary1014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 01:21 pm Title: INTRODUCTION;;

*takes cookie, thank you!*
first off i LOVE the banner,
billa is freakin hot!

and secondly i love the lead of this story and how different Billa and Bill are

Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 12:31 pm Title: INTRODUCTION;;

OMG I love the last line!!! That was insane. I was expecting Bill and Tom to freak out a little more then they did, -shrugs- But everyone reacts differently. I loved it and I am so Tracking this. :)

Reviewer: nothingbutadream Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 10:29 am Title: INTRODUCTION;;

Aha! Awesome.

Reviewer: ferrynofwinter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 10:22 am Title: INTRODUCTION;;

Haha, Tom cracks me up, both of them. I'm interested, but when am I not when it comes to your all's stories, can't wait to read more, ja?

Reviewer: BuggaBiene Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 08:13 am Title: INTRODUCTION;;

I'm excited? LOL can't wait for the rest of it :)

Reviewer: Geisterfahrer Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 07:20 am Title: INTRODUCTION;;

Hahahaah, holy shit. xD i love it :'D

Reviewer: F1Musa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 06:49 am Title: INTRODUCTION;;

eeeep :D cool so far I love iit

Reviewer: Janeyyy Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 06:45 am Title: INTRODUCTION;;

-nods- definate potential :)

Reviewer: aimee123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 06:27 am Title: INTRODUCTION;;

Love this so far, a very different and interesting idea. update soon?

Reviewer: sarahyellow Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 04:00 am Title: INTRODUCTION;;

Oh, I'm excited for this one. Although I was hopeing the alternate universe Bill got sent too would be a little bit more weird.

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 03:45 am Title: INTRODUCTION;;

awwwwww! this is cute! oh wow, Bill x 2 will be hot for sure, so im looking forward to this getting updated! i wonder what the Tom's would do if they met? *blushes at twins x 2....? uhh*does math in her head at 3am.. (headdesk)*

Reviewer: Felicia08 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 03:25 am Title: INTRODUCTION;;

GIVE ME MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Billa_Loves_Skittles Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 03:17 am Title: INTRODUCTION;;

I dun need one....i has CAKEEEE    osm A/N notes to dude  and dude... brian fart...what was i tlking about? NVM LOOSING HIGHER...uh NORM- uh... LOOSING BRAIN FUNCTIONS!

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