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Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/09 09:59 pm Title: KAPITEL DREI;;

Ilikeit.
*unfolds my arms wide*
thismuch.
*smiles*
sothatmeannewchapternowwwwwwwwww.

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/09 05:27 pm Title: KAPITEL DREI;;

How weird is it that two people that are essentially the same person like each other? Cuz they do, even if they won't admit it.

And I will skvish Tom again. *skvishes him*

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/09 03:02 pm Title: KAPITEL DREI;;

i hate thunderstorms too...poor billa...he's gotta really miss home...i hope they do eventually find him...but not too soon...

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/09 02:54 pm Title: CHAPTER TWO;;

freaky...but they're taking it quite well...i guess being high does help you believe the unbelievable...kinda...

Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/09 02:09 pm Title: KAPITEL DREI;;

He'd been too scared to open his eyes, wonderinf if he would if he'd find it was just a dream that Bill had been stroking his face so caringly with his thumb. = wonderinf to wondering.

and I loved this chapter. their body languages says it all, they are attracted to eachother. Bill just needs to accept and go for it, kiss the boy -giggles-

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/09 01:33 pm Title: CAPITULO UNO;;

mmm...more cookies...-takes a cookie-danke...i've always wondered myself if this was possible...really makes you think...

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/09 10:22 am Title: INTRODUCTION;;

-takes cookie-Danke...this is interesting so far...now because billa's helpers screwed up, he's stuck for a bit...

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/09 01:54 am Title: KAPITEL DREI;;

oh yay! i want Bill/Billa kisses soon... hehehe

Reviewer: 2Kewl4U Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 09:35 pm Title: CHAPTER TWO;;

I love it!!!!

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 05:13 pm Title: CAPITULO UNO;;

"duder totes" - greatest Tom line ever

Reviewer: BrokenMirror Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 04:02 am Title: CHAPTER TWO;;

First off, this plot is gold xD I love Billa, he's insanely cute.

This sentence was win, I almost cracked up (which I'm glad I didn't, since I'm in class): om couldn't get over the fact that Samy Deluxe was a world-wide known fashion designer and not a rapper. - HAHAHAH *imagines*

Oh, and *drool* Alex Evans!

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 01:56 am Title: CHAPTER TWO;;

zomg! i love it!!! gimme more?

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 01:29 am Title: CHAPTER TWO;;

You are vy welcome for the name. I like it.

Dude, Tomi is so bent outta shape by the fact that Nena is still famouse in the other universe, and Sammy Deluxe is a fashion designer. I will skvish him nao. *skvishes tomi*

Reviewer: BuggaBiene Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/09 12:52 am Title: CHAPTER TWO;;

a lil bit confused cuz... i still don't know wat Basil looks like...link? lol and i liked this chapter. :)

Author's Response: yes, click the link and you'll see the picture... it should work. if not then i'll go fix it. xxAli

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/09 11:15 pm Title: CAPITULO UNO;;

*flutterclaps* COOKIES AGAIN? I LOVE YOU GUYS! *grabs cookie* Dude, I totes love stoner Tomi. He's, like, my fave, dude. Duder rocks. *noms cookie* See? He and I even speak the same language!

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/09 11:00 pm Title: INTRODUCTION;;

*takes cookie* Danke. Tomi is funny as shit, dude. *noms cookie* Cereally, dude, I could get to like him.

Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/09 03:35 pm Title: CAPITULO UNO;;

-snatches another Bill cookie and stuffs into face, talking through mouthfull of cookie- This story is quit interesting. I am really becoming quit attached to High!Tomi. He is funny XD Looking forward to more -swallows mouthfull- updates. :D

Reviewer: Billa_Loves_Skittles Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/09 12:45 pm Title: CAPITULO UNO;;

dude i love high tomi, its osm!!! And tommy seems really quite stable mentally dude! Anyway, even though it is morning i am having trouble stringing complete toughts together so imma no gonnna try.... 

word! food! sandwich! glasses! messy roooom! bada-bing-bada-boom (that one has nothign to do with the story...) SPAGHETTI!(that one either) time travel/space/parralell universe= osmness ja... kthxbai!

Reviewer: iPhantom Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/09 09:59 am Title: CAPITULO UNO;;

This is AWESOME! Awesome plotline (so far) and everything! Thank you for making this!

Reviewer: hopelessblonde Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/09 09:39 am Title: CAPITULO UNO;;

*puts hands out for cookies*
Tom being high is so funny. =*D
Can't wait for more! =D

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