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Reviewer: Nightshaded Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/23 05:43 pm Title: INTRODUCTION;;

I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!

Reviewer: TimePassed Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/23/13 12:59 pm Title: KAPITEL SIEBEN;;

Omg where's the sequel?! I loved it!

Reviewer: tokiohotel-luv88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/10 12:48 pm Title: KAPITEL SIEBEN;;

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW*deepbreath*WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cnt wait to read the sequel

Reviewer: tokiohotel-luv88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/10 12:38 pm Title: CHAPITRE SIX;;

aww, thats so sad!! but i love this story so much

Reviewer: tokiohotel-luv88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/10 12:24 pm Title: LUKU VIISI;;

aww, i feel bad for billa. why wont bill just admit his feelings? what are we gonna do with that boy? haha great chapter

Reviewer: tokiohotel-luv88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/10 12:05 pm Title: KAPITEL FIRE;;

aww, poor billa. but im glad that bill and billa finally kissed

Reviewer: tokiohotel-luv88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/10 11:58 am Title: KAPITEL DREI;;

aww, i think the whole bill/billa thing is so cute

Reviewer: tokiohotel-luv88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/10 11:50 am Title: CHAPTER TWO;;

aww, poor tom. finding out samy deluxe is a fashion designer must have been tough to handle. haha, love this so much!!! i love all your stories!!

Reviewer: tokiohotel-luv88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/10 11:31 am Title: INTRODUCTION;;

woah, bill and billa are acting way too calm!

Reviewer: Janice Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/10 09:05 pm Title: CHAPTER TWO;;

*gaaaassssssp* I KNOW WHO THAT IS!! Alex Evans!

Reviewer: screamtillyoufeelit Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/10 08:54 pm Title: CHAPTER TWO;;

sil looks like alex evans

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/10 11:19 pm Title: KAPITEL SIEBEN;;

:O

:O

:O

That was just...a perfect ending. I have no other way to describe it.

And I forgot to mention the fact that I love how AU!Tom is written. He makes me laugh xD Using, like, sixth-grade words. Too funny.

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/10 11:14 pm Title: CHAPITRE SIX;;

Oh...oh.

Normally this kind of chapter would piss me off because of how fast it moved. But it was written perfectly, and I actually teared up a little when Billa had to go home. I just...gah. Whichever one of you wrote this really knows how to play with peoples' emotions @_@ Of course it was in the other chapters, too, so the other author is good at that as well xD

I'm almost in tears ;-;

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/10 11:04 pm Title: LUKU VIISI;;

No, Bill, you love Billa ;-;

You are putting me through with agony with this story. That's great writing, though, making the reader so caught up in your story that they feel like they're actually in the story :] Of course, you guys know that, but...oh, never mind.

Bill/Billa is just the cutest thing x3

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/10 10:53 pm Title: KAPITEL FIRE;;

This relationship is so real. That's another thing I adore about your writing. It's not surreal where it couldn't possibly happen in real life. I can actually see things like this happening. And I really love how the two of them aren't really jumping on each other or anything, they try to get close to each other but it makes them uncomfortable and they keep away from each other. I do a terrible job at that xD

Agh...I love this. I can't wait to read the rest :]

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/10 10:46 pm Title: KAPITEL DREI;;

Oh oh oh.

This is a beautiful romance. This is...just wow. Fluffy and adorable but dramatic at the same time. So sweet and so perfect. I absolutely love this. I can't stand how amazing this is turning out to be x3

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/10 10:41 pm Title: CHAPTER TWO;;

Oh, this is such a sweet story :]

Bill and Billa being in love [or falling in love, or whatever] is just so cute. It's different from normal relationships [after all, who normally falls for their parallel universe form?] and that makes it so original. And that's why I'm loving this story :]

And ignore that jerk who was talking about your story being a ripoff and not even being as good >.> I've never seen the other show but I'm sure this is just as good if not better. It's so well-written and I'm so interested in it. And your wording is great, I hate when I use the same words over and over >.>

So yeah. You guys have my respect d(^.^d)

Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/22/09 03:35 am Title: KAPITEL SIEBEN;;

HEHE OMFG!!! This was brilliant! And i can't wait to read the sequel! I seriously read this all in one sitting and at first I thought it was going to be weird.... bill being in love with himself and all... but somehow it wasn't... can't WAIT for the next!

Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/22/09 03:00 am Title: CHAPTER TWO;;

HAH Alex...

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/09 02:47 am Title: KAPITEL SIEBEN;;

Your idea for the sequel sounds osm, but I just had a thought. While I was reading the beginning of this chapter, I was thiking that it coulda been osm if ya'll woulda made it that Billa didn't find Bill's universe again right away, adn ended up going to the other ones first by accident, like being in JP or something liek that. But hey, I'm still excited for the next one!

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