Date: 11/29/09 01:29 am Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches
Bill with Bushido!!! *ahem* sorry, I love Billshido u.u And Tom... I have no idea with which other male celebrity put him with.
Anyway.
It took you quite long to update, but I understand, school totally sucks, which it's kinda disappointing, 'cause is a VERY interesting story. .
It's a pretty good chapter, but I'll like to see things develop more quickly, and I mean... when will Tom know about Bill's abusive boyfriend?!
So, I hope you update soon, I'll be waiting!
Author's Response: I do apologize for the very very slow updates D: If it's the summer, I'm sure things will go much faster. Well, it's only the second chapter, and I really don't want to rush this. I'm waiting for Tom to know about Drew after they met.
Date: 11/29/09 01:29 am Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches
Bill with Bushido!!!
Date: 11/29/09 01:06 am Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches
yes !!!!!!!!!! HE IS GOING TO SEE BILL!!!!!!!!! OHHHH PLEASE LET THEM MEET AGAIN AND HAVE THEIR HAPPY ENDING!!!!!!!! XD
PLEASE CONTINUE!!
Author's Response: Perhaps! :D
Date: 11/29/09 12:54 am Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks
i really was waiting this story!!! you have no idea how i was desesperate about it!!!!! XD
please donīt stop!! continue!!!!!!!! love this!
Author's Response: Oh dear o.o Sorry I made you wait!
Date: 11/29/09 12:44 am Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches
NGH-AHAHA-AHA!! *epic squee* ... YES YES WHOOO! *sigh*
...*giggles nervously* I had a moment... sorry...
So, anywhore, school sucks (yes, I know, mine does two but I'm off school in a week) and I wish I could read more of the fantastic stories on this site but I should be writing my weak ass, crazy ass edited for the pussies at school story, not read this (i'm bad, I know) but anywhore...
I'll go check out your deviant art when I'm not beign suffocated by assignments *nods* OH and I would love to see Bill with Davey Havok, or William Beckett or Criss Angel or maybe Jared Leto... who he can share with Georg (though i'm not quite sure why...) Tom... well can't picture him wiht anyone but bill... but maybe David Boreanaz or possibly orlando bloom... i can kinda see that...
*snaps out of excellent visual image* so yeah, I love this, I love you adn your writing and i can't wait for more...
PS i hate school *sobs* i ahve much better things to do with my weekend than writing my weak ass stroy that I have to edit to pieces (omigawd i have to make it het.. *shudder* waaa! sorry i'm ranting now... I'll just shut up and press submit)
Author's Response: My god, I have FINALS in a couple of weeks D: That's like, dead week for me. No computer. Just studying my ass off *sniff* Ohh, sexy sexy picks, dear :) oh dear, HET? Well, I've written that *guilty*. It was SMUT het, also! Oof, you ever need help xD
Date: 11/29/09 12:35 am Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches
perfect chapter, so excited for the next one.
aaaaaaand I think Bill would look good with Bushido? :o but that's like...too common, so i'll probably go with jared leto or ryan gosling. :]
Author's Response: I just like Billa with some ghetto smexiness. xD Danke, dear!
Date: 11/29/09 12:33 am Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches
Bushido or Manzini.
and this was great!!!!!!
Author's Response: xD I can picture Bushido also. Weird, huh?
Date: 11/28/09 11:46 pm Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches
I never want to stop reading this story....thank you for the update, looking forward to the next one~
Author's Response: Thank you so much, dear
Date: 11/28/09 11:30 pm Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches
yay they are going to see bill!!!!
Author's Response: Maybe :)
Date: 11/28/09 11:30 pm Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches
yay they are going to see bill!!!!
Date: 11/28/09 11:29 pm Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches
yay they are going to see bill!!!!
Date: 11/25/09 03:02 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks
I also want to applaud on how you matured them so well in here, Tom more than Bill, Bill still has that cute little boy inside of him, which makes me wonder if that's due to drewface.
drew was absolutely the last thing Bill needed in his miserable life, and for dear life he doesn't even realize that he's seeking replacement for Tom in that stupid "guy". He's holding on to Tom's memory even though he's trying to forget about him so badly.
well I think that's all for now, but if I think of more I'll write another one!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, dear! :) I love when writers put thoughtful insights into their review :) You're so amazing~
Date: 11/25/09 03:02 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks
( all of a sudden the scene were Tom was watching him through a hole in the bathroom wall comes back to me XD )
which reminds me of how I should add howmuch funny parts there are in the story , like the one where Bill threw a glass at him through his window roflmao! I've read that atleast four times before moving on xD and how Tom snuggled him up afterwards!
in this part I wanted to add how disappointing it was to discover that Tom had a son :c you built the tension up though because it really wasn't noticeable untill the kid called him dad (:
Date: 11/25/09 03:01 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks
what I love about this story is the machoman Tom, even though he has been a little bit over the top.. xD it was so adorable, because any guy in this situation would think such things about Bill, but HE actually said them, even though he knew he was going to get slapped and hit and thrown cuss words at xD
the second amazing thing is how lil' Billa tries to hide how much he likes Tom, because he really does, just the blushes and looks, which macho man Tom generally doesn't notice.
Date: 11/25/09 03:01 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks
okay, now that i've calmed down, i can review properly rofl.
okay, it's hard to review FFs without having "I JUST LOVE IT OMG OMG OMG" all over it, becaus that's how I feel, so I'll go a bit more in-depth.
I generally read FFs to have an idea of what I can use in RPs, and yours was one that made it lol. You might remember my air-headed review on the first part that just said "MORE NAO", well that's how i felt, and how I now feel, but then I realized that a nice, complimenting review is what writers keep going
Date: 11/25/09 02:51 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks
OH PLEASE MORE PLEASE
I FEEL LIKE KILLING DREW RIGHT BEEPING NOW
NOW NOW NOW *facedesK facedesk facedesk*
Date: 11/24/09 12:33 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks
This was good! How far in the future is this? About 4 years? Just curious! Can't wait for you to update again!!! Please hurry? :)
Author's Response: Well, I think he just turned 22 and 7D&N ended at the end of their high school year, so yes. 4 years :)
Date: 11/23/09 12:12 am Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks
omg
yay finally i've been waiting forever
awesome chappie!
and boo drew!
Author's Response: Rawr Drew~ D: Icky~
Date: 11/19/09 04:11 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks
UPDATE IMMEDIATELY!!! IMMEDIATELY!!!! I love this. I want to beat Bill upside the head and I want them to reunite right this minute. I love it.
Author's Response: xD I will, soon!
Date: 11/16/09 12:47 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks
Awww poor Billa D8
Update soon please,, I cant bare for Tom and Bill to be apart any longer!!
Author's Response: D: I can't either! I'm trying very hard to do it~