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Reviewer: RandomBoredom Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/09 06:34 am Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches

I am ADDICTED to this story. More more more!

Author's Response: xD Yes M'am! After Finals, though. Maybe next week D:

Reviewer: rainbowhead Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/09 03:46 pm Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches

ok bill obvi goes w/ Bu(shido) and tomi goes w/...ME! wel i'm gonna b a celeb! u just wait n see...now about this whole updating dealio. skool is great and all but girl u could so b an author like nao!pleeeeeeeese! im dying here! i need my fix! P.S. 7 Days & Nights made me cry! CRY! REAL TEARS WOMAN!

Author's Response: Ahh, I know! D: I'm sorry, dear! I shall update. Uh...sometime xD Hassle me on Myspace or Facebook-- x) Ohyeahh, Tomi is totally yours. Have fun with him :)

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/09 01:32 am Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches

i would pair bill up with TOP from big bang cuz he's so hot *-* lol

and OMG an update! hahah yaaaay :D hopefully the next one wont take as long? lol i got so excited for tom at the end though haha

Author's Response: Big Bang xD Ah ha, nice choice:) Mm, all of the updates take a long time D: I'm so sorry! Ahh!

Reviewer: icansho Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/09 01:52 am Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks

No! Billa boy's are always manly ;)
It's those Tomi-boys where you get the Archuleta's and other femmys!
Haha.
Which honestly makes sense -- if you think about it a bit?
And I can Absolutely see Brendon Urie...
With almost any male celebrity in the world.
Aside from Georg and Gustav.
For some-odd reason they just don't seem to mesh with his urie-ness?

Author's Response: xD The Gs are a little bit manly for Urie, I imagine :) Mehh, Billa+Tomi are the best of all the pairings, though! Mm, my smexyhexys... *Heart*

Reviewer: quickwick Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/09 03:32 pm Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches

plzzzz updates quickly :) i really love ur stories

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: icansho Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/09 12:16 pm Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches

Teddy is adorable! I love ALL of you're character personalities!!
Except for Drew and Alana, They can go die in a hole.
Why, poor-poor bill, Are you being abused? :(
YOU SHOULD FIX HIM!
He's broken
&& Needs his tomi!
...even though his tomi's is married to a bitch.
It's okay though.
Cheating and Divorces are condoned in the fictional story
(hopefully)
ANSWER:::
Bill with Brendon Urie. Just yummy (:
Tom? For some reason i'm think David Archuleta!
DONT EVEN ASK xD!
&& As a Threesome? Chris Pine :D

Author's Response: Isn't Archuleta a Billa boy? x) Okay, it's still hawt~ Mm, Brendon Urie :D I can see that!

Reviewer: Forsaken_Soul Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/09 01:38 am Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches

Amazing update

Author's Response: THank you, dear

Reviewer: SkullGirlXOXO Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/05/09 07:09 pm Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches

That was...FUCKING AWESOME!!! I just moved in with my aunt and needed a pick me up and damn that picked me the fuck up :)

I forgot to say, the last chapter reminded me of my trip to New York which was funn.

and yeah, i'm working on a one-shot to try and get me back into writing and what not, should I let you know when its up so you can read or.....???

i don't know but yeah giving that we haven't spoken in FEREVERRRR!!!!!!!!! i'm being quite hyper :))

i'm excited fer the next chapter so hurryy your tush dear because if I'm blowing off my weekend homework for the site you should blow off school for me...and the site.....but mostly me :)

great story jelly!!!

Author's Response: Oh my, yay! :D Yeah, I'll try to write, and I'll read your story, too, if you wish. I'm glad this made you happier!

Reviewer: JaMokiKitty Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/09 08:15 am Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches

I just stayed up all night reading 7 Days and Nights, and then this. It's now 8 o'clock in the morning and I haven't slept yet! All because of YOUR stories! I really like the direction you've taken with this one so far, with Alana being a cheating bitch(big surprise there) and Bill caught up in an abusive relationship and being flat broke with Drew taking his money and practically starving and what-not. For some reason I get some sort of sick pleasure out of viciously torturing that boy...as long as he gets a happily ever after in the end! Ahh drama. I hate it with a passion in real life but in stories, my appetite for it is insatiable! lol I CANNOT WAIT for the next chapter! b29;

Author's Response: Believe me, I have a fetish for making Billa suffer xD But if I keep doing that, I'm sure my reviewers will boil me alive. Go get some sleep~ :D

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/09 04:33 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks

your welcome! i hope my days are too >.< i cant tell yet.

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/09 12:27 am Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks

I know how... Your Algerbra problems link them to tixets sales and how many girls could be bills types yadda yadda... and Chemistry i dont know. 

D;



Author's Response: Yay! Thankyou! :) I hope your days are getting better!

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/09 09:58 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks

D: i am not hospital matrial... No its not pretend it has something to do with something that you really really like and yeah.

Author's Response: Hmm, maybe try to apply for a loan to get the money to get good insurance first? o.o Ahh, I need to somehow link Chemistry and Algebra II with Tokio Hotel. God damn D:

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/09 07:51 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks

I have to find a job with health benifits and its difficult. D: i have been looking so hard. D: make it fun  and it wont be so bad...

Author's Response: I'm sorry, dear D: I hope you find the job of your choice! Maybe a doctor's aid, or some sort of medical work? Mm, making Review Packets fun? Definitely impossible xD

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/09 05:44 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks

painful... i am having a problem with my back and i have no isureance so D: i cannot go to the doctors with out gettin this hefty fee. yours?

Author's Response: Oh no! That sucks D: Maybe you should get some insurance over the holidays~ Ohh, mine is getting crushed by so much work. Finals are coming up ._. It's very awful.

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/09 11:46 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks

=O that sounds so difficult

Author's Response: it'll be fine! :D How was your day?

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/09 11:27 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks

Draw her i wanna see her!!! lol

Author's Response: Just a skanky blonde with hooker boobs and a skinny frame, but she actually has to be prettty o.o

Reviewer: RandomBoredom Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/09 10:28 pm Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches

Please please UPDATE! Hmm, I honestly can't stand to read about Bill with ANYONE else, male or female, other than Tom. ANYONE at all.

Author's Response: That's sort of my opinion also xD Same thing with Tom, actually. I literally wanted to rip Chantelle's face off when I heard about their fling.

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/09 04:23 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks

i know ... but still I find it fun to pick on her still even though.  XD

Author's Response: Very xD I need to draw her one day!

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/09 12:38 am Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches

Question: Tom and Bushido... Bill and no one...

*has had the story open all weekend finally read* 

Really can someone Kill drew on the streets... No hold that... Have Alana run into Drew in a bar and piss him off.... 

I love art too I love drawing photography... and writing! lol oh and I care! >.< 

 



Author's Response: Alana hasn't made an appearance in the story yet xD Ahh, Tomi and Bushido! So cute :3 Haha, you had this open all weekend, but no time? Poor dear D:

Reviewer: vendetta Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/09 10:27 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks

oh wow, thats like, My wet dream! hope you get it. whenever you do get time to write though... us fans are waiting!

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