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Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 09:55 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks

 it is. Lovers is tooo flashy and sexy... a porn shop should be gritty.

Author's Response: Gritty? xD Like, dirty and raw, full of sex and naked people posters everywhere? Mm, I can't wait to go :)

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 09:41 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks

 >D  Yes yes it is. Not really its just rows and rows of porn... you got gay porn straight porn... and then the toys... its nothing like Lovers Package its not flashy its just there. and yeah..

 



Author's Response: that's like. Supercool :) I want to go! Really bad! We have that, cept our store is called Spencer's

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 09:09 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks

hehe, okay. Elmo's Adult Books and Novlty shop its a store from my town. XD its the only one ive been in and on the street its on where it doest feel like an STD...

Author's Response: omg that's BRILLIANT! I really want to go in and check it out :) is it fun in there?

Reviewer: Samara483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 08:49 pm Title: Of Hot Chocolate and Fishnets

omg haha you finally updated i was about to stop tracking this story but then i was like noo maybe she will post and i didnt stop beievin and my dream came true!!!!!!!!!!!!!! haha well i think i exagerated but yeaa lol please please please post more soon!!!!!!!!!!1 please ((:

Author's Response: xD Omg, you were going to stop tracking? NEVERNEVERNEVER! x) I feel bad now. I'm going to be a good author and update faster *nodnod* Hopefully.

Reviewer: EmmyKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 07:49 pm Title: Of Hot Chocolate and Fishnets

I'm gonna do as I did last time, and review like I'm reading the chapter XDD
Why does Drew keep saying 'you know I love you, right'? - Oh, I know why, because he's a dumbass who knows he's hurting Bill O.O
GO DIE, HE'S NOT YOURS! *joins Andi's plan and buys an airticket*

HAHAHA! - “Don’t worry. People are very nice in America.”
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“MOTHER FUCKER!”
Omg, that just fit SOOOO well, hahaha!

I seriously hope Bill will leave Drew now, or else I'll jump into the story and force Robbie to make him leave him, because something's gotta be done about that piece of shit *coughDrewcough*

-- TEDDY IS SOOOO SWEET, if I was Bill I would've died from his cuteness! *__* Aaaaw *happy dance*

WAAAAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH, oh my God, Andi, HAHAHHAHAHAH! "
“OKAY! I’m here, I’m ready, so that big asshole better come out and SAY HELLO TO MY LITTLE FRIEND!” The loud mouthed man yelled, waving a fishnet around wildly." That was just.. I have no word, I'm overwelmed by this.. HAHAHHAHAHAHA-feeling, you know? I've always thought he was great xD

I completely forgot.. SOMEONE TRIED TO KILL TOM!? I bet Alana hired someone to do it, what's it called, a HITMAN! - Urk, stupid word. and, who would even wanna kill Tom [except for Alana], they won't get his money [Alana will] by killing him o.o - So ALANA YOU BASTARD O.O *kills*

Poor Teddy, all alone with Bill and his wierd friend, ironic, isn't it? *_*

I repeat, Houston, we have a problem, Bill is stuck with Tom's son, you copy? Stuck with Tom's SON! - SCHOCK, I didn't see it coming *cough*
I can't wait to read more, it's like, it's like this is my second world, you know? - like, I friggin' know the caractars and stuff.

HE SHOULD GIVE HIM HIS SOUL! and vice versa, not that he doesn't already own it, but still!

Author's Response: xD "Merry Christmas baby! Here you go- MY SOUL." Mm, that's delicious. This is your second world? I'm very flattered! xD Ahh, I enjoy your reviews, sweet. They make me happy.

Reviewer: Sarah22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 06:59 pm Title: Of Hot Chocolate and Fishnets

Wow I nearly got a heart attack! I got very churning when Drew beat Bill again. In my mind I killed him alredy. Oh and Tom ans Teddy are so cute its unbefuckinglievable!
I think the best present for Tom is to get his son back and see Bill again. And for Bill a lot of money, a own bodyguard and a new apartment would be a good present.

Author's Response: xD Billa and a cutie bodyguard--hmm, maybe Robbie? :) That'll be pretty spectacular. Mm, I know, TEDDY IS AMAZING x) I want a kiddo like that~

Reviewer: vendetta Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 01:52 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks

well, i supppOSE its the thought that counts huh?

Reviewer: han Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 11:49 am Title: Of Hot Chocolate and Fishnets

you want to kill me...yep definitely...here i am all stressed waiting eagerly for their reunion when you decided to shot tom!!!!!*cries*
and now bill found tom's kid...and you end the chapter like this???? i'm dead...my heart can't take it...

you have like on of the most interesting, exciting, sweet stories...and you can still take this to an upper level of breathtaking emotions...

please...pleaaaaaaaaaase update soon!

Author's Response: Ahh, Tomi HAS to be shot! x( Maybe he has to stay in NY loooonger now? *nudgenudge* Don't die! I feel bad! D:

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 10:27 am Title: Of Hot Chocolate and Fishnets

I adore this. You need to update as soon as possible. This is a great way to get Bill and Tom to talk again...

Author's Response: I know x) Cept...you know, Tomi's in excrutiating pain right now and whatnot, buuuut, at least he gets to see his pretty Billa Babe again :)

Reviewer: MinxyKatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 10:20 am Title: Of Hot Chocolate and Fishnets

Ure da most heartbreakhn updater ever! If i had 2 b ur beta id cry at da lng durations between updates. T.T
Did tom realì gtta b shot, O.O tha dramatics. Nd i lv teddy so much!!!! Hehehe nd andi's antics neva cease 2 entertain.
Please dnt leave my heart in dispear, nd update asap....pweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaasssssssse!!!!

Author's Response: xD I dont have a beta, but I bet she'd be hounding my ass because of the damn updates. I'm sorry, dear D: I hope I dont disappoint!

Reviewer: Minibar Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 10:10 am Title: Of Hot Chocolate and Fishnets

Omg! Thanks so much for updating, this story is definitely one of my favorites. :)The suspense of Bill and Tom meeting is just killing me!

Author's Response: I'm terribly sorry to keep you waiting D: But I'm happy this is one of your favs!

Reviewer: mincou Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 09:33 am Title: Of Hot Chocolate and Fishnets

YAAAAAAAAAAAY UPDATE!
As wonderfully written as always! ;D

But you should really update more often tho .___.

Author's Response: I know D: Stuff always comes up, it really sucks. I'm busy CONSTANTLY. Buuuut, I'll try to work on that :)

Reviewer: Janeyyy Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 08:31 am Title: Of Hot Chocolate and Fishnets

FINALLY YOU UPDATED!!

And yayy Drews gone!! And yay Bill's gonna find Tom!! xD

Author's Response: Yay! I hope you stick around for the next chappie!:)

Reviewer: alexLOVESjumbie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 07:44 am Title: Of Hot Chocolate and Fishnets

*Squeals/claps excitedly*
Did tell you how FUCKING hilarious you are?

“Billa…”The newly educated photographer whispered, “Did you grow a uterus, become pregnant, and then harbor a lovechild with some stupid American and not TELL me, or…did I somehow miss the fact that you were one of the only successful MPREG victims EVER?”

You had me fucking ROFLMAO the whole time!!! And Andi's catching outfit, XD.
Why do somehow I get the feeling that Drew's involve with the trying attempt of Tom getting shot? o.O Aren't I nuts?
Ohhhh!!!! I want my own Teddi to cuddle!!!! Were you also describing FAO schwarz??? I

Author's Response: xD I'm glad you think this is funny! Mm, that just HAD to be written; MPREG really makes me laugh :) OMG, shush! Nobody's supposed to know that yet! Well, I'm still working on it, so it might be it? WHat's FAO Schwarz? o.o I've never heard of that~

Reviewer: BrokenSouls Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 06:36 am Title: Of Hot Chocolate and Fishnets

ok on my computer my review does not appear complete -.-' i don't know why, but this is driving me crazy. i wrote a two page review and i only appears the first bit --' if you can see the whole review then fine if not just tell me that i'll try to post the rest **

Author's Response: xD Oh, dearie. The first part came up as much as this review, so yeah. Mm, I really appreciate your lengthy reviews. They amuse me and actually encourage me to write faster! Buuut, I havent been writing alot D: So. Yeah. I apologize.

Reviewer: BrokenSouls Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 06:30 am Title: Of Hot Chocolate and Fishnets

OMG I MISSED ONE CHAPTER *dies* I missed this so much you got no idea. I’m always like, damn she needs to uptaaade T_T
Ahem, ok, so basicly, I pity Bill. Seriously, he has a stupid asshole of a boyfriend and gets fired because of that. Motherfucker I agree with Andreas! Can I go dick hunting with him?

Reviewer: miyaiug Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 06:27 am Title: Of Hot Chocolate and Fishnets

Tom,Please cherish the opportunity that given by author to meet again,
Missed once is enough.
update~(runs away)

Author's Response: xD It'll suck if Tomi was, like, asleep if Bill came, hmm?

Reviewer: bookme Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 05:08 am Title: Of Hot Chocolate and Fishnets

keep writing, pleasssse!!! I can't wait for the next chapter, it is so exciting

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll be writing now :)

Reviewer: im_his Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 04:58 am Title: Of Hot Chocolate and Fishnets

it was worth the wait but PLEASE update sooner this is too good

Author's Response: I'll try xD

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 04:55 am Title: Of Hot Chocolate and Fishnets

YAY!!! and NOT YAY! D: Poor Tomi poor Theodore but at least hes wit Billa. You should just hurry hurry hurry... and and Awesome Cowboy Storys XD

Hope you dont let it grow dust like my acoustic is.

 Billa should get Tomi a gift card for Elmos , and Tomi should get Billa something  with "Sex" with that Elmos gift card. xD



Author's Response: xD I'm not going to let my acoustic go to dust. Hell, my mom totally won't let me :) What's Elmo's? I've never heard of that store o.o

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