Date: 07/17/10 11:57 pm Title: Dirty Martinis and Powdered Sugar Snow
Sorry for leaving another review {especially since this one doesn't pertain to the story} but as for the coloring of the font, I just use html text codes (:
{here is the site I use in case you want to give it a glace-over XD}
http://www.myspace-codes.com/myspace_text_codes.htm
-----Samantha (:
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie! Now people will be like "woah WHUT. Pink and Blue font? This story must kick MAJOR ASS." You're amazing :D
Date: 07/17/10 11:56 pm Title: Dirty Martinis and Powdered Sugar Snow
Glad you're back! This chapter was well received by this reader!
I'd like a little more Alana vs Bill tension going on. Perhaps to spice it up, have Alana humiliate Bill in front of her socialite/high society friends and family, and have: a) Teddy call her out on it, b) Tom call her out on it, c) Bill have a bitch out with her (that he wins!), or d) Bill gets proof of Alana's infidelity (and/or well as an audio clip of her saying how she hates Teddy/Tom/Bill/whatever) and sends it to tabloids...
I'm evil, I know. But Alana's a bitch and if I knew her in real life I would get ghetto on her in a hot minute! :D
Author's Response: Oh giiiirl, I'm sure a lot of people will be smacking her around if she was real x) Which is why she is only safely tucked in my little These Hearts world. Very nice ideas, though. Thank you so much!
Date: 07/17/10 11:54 pm Title: Dirty Martinis and Powdered Sugar Snow
I would like to see bill and tom together and in love again..yay
Author's Response: A happily ever after will definitely be in the future, dearie :D
Date: 07/17/10 11:50 pm Title: Dirty Martinis and Powdered Sugar Snow
I AM SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED (:
{i have to be honest in saying i was starting to worry a little, thinking that maybe you weren't going to continue on with this story, but seeing a new chapter ceased my worrying. so thank you :D}
& Before I start reviewing the chapter, I'd definitely like to say:
i . c o m p l e t e l y . a g r e e . w i t h . y o u .
{regarding bill's new piercings}
I am beyond tired of people making conversation saying how its so unnattractive. Bill is Bill. Let him do as he pleases, for crying out loud.
{plus, i think its pretty sexy myself XD}
Ah, you have no idea how much I just wanted to jump into the text and just completely alter Alana's attitude. Poor Bill, having to put up with it. I couldn't do it, after the first few orders I would have given her a piece of my mind. XD
& Teddy. oh goodness, what a cutie he is. {he's been a cutie through-out all of the chapters so far}.
His innocence is adorable in this part:
“My father also said mother’s favorite past time is ‘cock swallowing’...."
{I won't type out the whole quote because you wrote it and already know it XD}
I was suprised by the ending, I didn't think Bill would do anything to get some sort of revenge-ish satisfaction.
but the laxatives in the martini.
G E N I U S XD
You asked readers what we would like to happen in this fic.
I personally would like to read about Alana 'accidentally' falling out of a window. Then Bill&Tomi&Teddy could live happily ever after (:
{but I'm almost 100% positive that's now how it will go XD}
I definitely picked up on the little hint of foreshadowning near the beginning, where Alana said:
“All I’m saying is, that type of behavior would be frowned upon at family court if something ever…happens..."
{well at least I assume its foreshadowing}
& by the wording, I can think of a few different scenarios, all by which won't be easy-peasy for Bill & Tom.
anyways, I would just like you to know that even though its only chapter seven, I do love this story. & I've been playing catch up so I wouldn't be far behind after reading the first story. {& now i'm caught up...so..yeah XD}
Looking Foward To More (:
-----Samantha.
p.s. sorry if my review seems somewhat scattered in thoughts, its almost midnight here and i've just had a red bull XD
Author's Response: OMG it's pink :D Different coloring made me happy. Maybe I just haven't been on this site long enough to use a new...feature? o.o Idk. but it's still pretty awesome to me :) Anyway, thank you! I agree-- Bill can freaking rock anything. He is gorgeous hunk of man and hell, Tomi loves him for it. I can already tell the audience would want me to kill off Alana as soon as possible buuuut... I've always loved the antagonist, so Imma keep her just for a little while longer to stir things up :) Thank you for such a long review, dearie :D
Date: 07/05/10 11:26 am Title: Of Smiley Bacon and Unfortunate Surprises
Alana needs to get hit by a train and die. Bill has to realize that he still loves Tom.
Author's Response: x) I think that too, haha. But not just yet.
Date: 06/30/10 04:56 pm Title: Of Smiley Bacon and Unfortunate Surprises
Haha love Andreas' character
Author's Response: aww, thanks :)
Date: 06/21/10 01:11 am Title: Of Smiley Bacon and Unfortunate Surprises
OMFG! IM ABOUT TO MURDER!! I MEAN MURRRDEEERRRR!!!!!!!! ALANA! how dare she act so casual about something like that? i mean..its her husband and child! *gets a scythe* move out of the way!! IM GONNA DRAG THIS BITCH TO HELL!!
sorry..i get really frustrated with people like that. urgh. even if they are characters, they seem so real to me. its insane.
aww i love the whole bill and tom thing :) it was adorable. p.s. im re reading 7D7N just cause im a spaz and i want to re read all the cutesy parts!! hehehe
WRITE MORE OR ELSE I WILL NOT BEHAVE AND I WILL RAISE THE MEAT CLEAVER ONCE MORE!!!!
Author's Response: Aww, you're so adorable :D I'm really trying hard, but since I'm going to Germany, I'm taking Summer School to get ahead and my friend just HAPPENS to have his birthday on Friday, the day I usually write, so...Ahh D: I'll try!
Date: 06/21/10 12:28 am Title: Of Four Seasons and Crumbly Cookies
haha aww this chapter was very sweet :) Teddy sounds like a very cute kid. urgh Jelly, i'm so jealous of your amazing writing talent. DONT HOG IT UP! SHARE IT WITH SOME OF THE UNFORTUNATE PEOPLE!! lol just kidding...or am i? O.o
haha i love your author's note about ich bin confused!! haha i wish i could go to Germany...but i dont have that exchange student thing until like..another year or so. so i guess its not too bad. xD
I NEED TO KEEP ON READING!! haha this brings back so many memories of 7 Days and 7 Nights :) one part that really sticks with me is the part where Tom pretends to be dead on Bill's lawn and then pulls Bill down with him when he comes to inspect xD that was by far my fave part.
now ive got to stop typing this incredibly long comment, and continue one with the next chapter!!
Date: 06/19/10 02:57 pm Title: Of Momos and Animal Fries
gaah! bill go with tom!! pleasseeee!!! i cant stop to comment..i have to read more!!
Date: 06/19/10 02:45 pm Title: Of Hot Chocolate and Fishnets
......
OMG I AM IN LOVE WITH ANDI!! haha whale catching outfit xD
omg..i hope Tomi is ok...
dude...id start hyperventilating if i was in Bill's situation with Teddy..actually i did start hyperventilating xD
poor Teddy...i bet he's confused xD
Date: 06/19/10 02:30 pm Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches
....HAHAHA I LOVE ANDI IN THIS CHAPTER!! "im going dick hunting!" haha that was hysterical. it made me crack up insanely.
aww poor Bill..i feel so bad for him. why cant he run away or something? or would Drew find him again? that douchebag.
haha i love Geo...making Tomi blush. i wonder what Teddy's going to say to that...err i mean Theodore.
stupid stupid Alana... -.-
Date: 06/19/10 01:43 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks
finallly!! i thought you hadnt written this..until i decided to go to your profile and saw this waiting for me to read!! haha im so pathetic.
omg..poor Billie...in abusive relationship. :[ i feel so bad for him. stupid Drew, they need that money so that they can pay off their bills! not drinking money.
i wonder how Tom's coping with everything..hmm...and i still hate Alana..booo.
NEXT CHAPTER!
Author's Response: x) A lot of people don't know about sequels until they actually HUNT for them on THF, but I'm glad you found it!
Date: 06/18/10 11:34 pm Title: Of Smiley Bacon and Unfortunate Surprises
OMG YOU CANNOT LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT!!!! HOW DARE YOU!!!! please this story is amazing!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: xD Omg, so excited. I'll try!
Date: 06/18/10 03:10 pm Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches
OMG MANHATTAN!!!!!!!!!!! YEAH!!! YEAH!!! YEAH!!! YES!! YES!! YES!!!
Date: 06/18/10 02:44 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks
omg love the first chappie!!!!
Date: 06/18/10 02:13 pm Title: Of Smiley Bacon and Unfortunate Surprises
I could never see you write a heartless fic. where the characters are just utterly heartless and have no chance to change.
please update. I was really disappointed when i didn't see next at the bottom of the page
Author's Response: Hmm. Actually, that's sort of true x) It's just...I dont know, cruel. I think everyone has a chance at changing, but whatever. Maybe I'll be in a dark mood on day xD Ahh..perhaps by next week, i'm sure.
Date: 06/16/10 09:29 am Title: Of Smiley Bacon and Unfortunate Surprises
How Tom does to stay with her! For what he waits to divorce?
I wonder what will be the reaction of Alana face to face of Bill …
Bill will have problems with Drew when he will come home, I suppose.
Poor Teddy. Naturally he is capricious, but I am sad for him.
Bill will have the opportunity to observe the relation between Tom and Alana.
Your French reader
Laura.
Author's Response: Naturally, yes :) Hopefully, Bill will learn something when he observes Tomi and Alana. Your english is great for someone who has it as a second language. Thank you for taking the time and reviewing!
Date: 06/14/10 03:57 am Title: Of Smiley Bacon and Unfortunate Surprises
quicker! update quicker!!!!
Author's Response: x) Okay, dearie!
Date: 06/13/10 07:31 pm Title: Of Smiley Bacon and Unfortunate Surprises
OMGG. I took an extra long break from this site and when I finally decided to come back I had a sequel to the best story on here waiting for me, with six chapters!:D
I could never see you writing anything without Bill and Tom ending up together. O_O
Author's Response: Well, the other oneshots I write are them together x) And this one will be, sooo ja :D I've seen, like, a billion people with Harry Potter usernames, woahh
Date: 06/12/10 07:11 am Title: Of Smiley Bacon and Unfortunate Surprises
MORE SOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: ja, i shall try! :D