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Reviewer: Phantomrider92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/10 11:24 pm Title: Of Four Seasons and Crumbly Cookies

AWWWW MYYYYYYY GOOOOOOD! These two men are in dire need to end up together! They're just too freakin' heartmelting when they're together! I love how Bill makes it so OBVIOUS that Tom melts him! XD

D'awwww I'm liking this new facet of Tom. He's a lot more respectful and that's always a plus ;D Though... teen, horny Tom cracked me up at times xD

Awesome, awesome! And I'm uber glad you're in Germany right now. I must tell you I ENVYYYYY you. badly. xD

Reviewer: Phantomrider92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/10 11:15 pm Title: Of Momos and Animal Fries

AWWW I would've killed you if there wouldn't have been more chapters when I read this, sweetie ;)

I would be like "WTF? Damn-Mother-F*c king cliffhangers!" lol jk! I'm not Drew *shudders*

Aww Billy got all nervous and ran off, typical xD And once again: I just HEART andy, d'awwww :D

Reviewer: Phantomrider92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/10 11:13 pm Title: Of Momos and Animal Fries

AWWW I would've killed you if there wouldn't have been more chapters when I read this, sweetie ;)

I would be like "WTF? Damn-Mother-F*c king cliffhangers!" lol jk! I'm not Drew *shudders*

Aww Billy got all nervous and ran off, typical xD And once again: I just HEART andy, d'awwww :D

Reviewer: Phantomrider92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/10 11:10 pm Title: Of Hot Chocolate and Fishnets

XD AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW°!!!!!!!!!!!!

I wanna marry Theodore! *pretty-pretty-PRETTY PLEASEEEE?* :3

He's just TOO CUTE to be real, well perhaps that's why he doesn't exist anyway -.-

Awww I love how Teddy & Bill just get along so naturally and I had to crack at Tom's reaction xD

Loved!

Reviewer: Phantomrider92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/10 11:05 pm Title: Of Manhattan Shots and Golden Arches

Jesus, This story had me giggling all the way and Imma feel kinda bad for saying this but... YOU GO, MAH TOMI! Cheat on that whory biatch you've got! Man, I can't believe how BAD Tom & Alana's marriage is *awkward silence*... Okay I guess I can xD

Aww I feel like I'm reading some sort of modern-pretty-gay-boy version of "Cinderella" :3

AHHH! Tomi & Billa are goin' to meet up

*squeals!*

Reviewer: Phantomrider92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/10 10:58 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks

OH-MY-GAWD! I dunno how much of an ass am I b/c the other day I spent all night [and part of my morning] catching up w/this story but was too damn excited to leave reviews at the same time. Would you mind dropping my thoughts on each chapter now? ;)

Okay so... Teddy's ADORABLE xD

"IT'S THEODORE!"

And I feel bad for Billa :( That Drew guy's an ass and Tomi needs to kick his butt as soon asap, gurl!

Reviewer: alelgreen1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/10 02:31 am Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance

omfg i want alana's and drew's heads on silver platters!! grrrrr them?!?!!!!

Author's Response: x) so does everyone~

Reviewer: orangelover456 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/10 11:53 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks

GREATTTTTTT chapter !!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Skebe-Neko Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/10 03:20 pm Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance

Oh my god!! I loved this!! i feel bad for Bill.. kinda felt bad for Alana, but when she called ti Drew I hoped that i could be in the story and kick her pretty little ass off!!!! XDD

Author's Response: xD So imaginative!

Reviewer: Deni_Cookie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/10 07:18 pm Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance

Promise? Can you really promise me that Bill and Tom will be okay too? It'd be really nice of you!! :))

I'm living in Czech Republic, so Germany is neighbouring country xD And Germany is my favorite country (well, and Great Britan) so... well, you live near to me now; it's cool! xD

And yeah, I had to leave so long review 'coz I was really emotionaly broken and I had to put my feelings somewhere :) And this story deserve to have proper reviews!! :)

Author's Response: Aww :D We ARE neighbors! That' super cool :) I hope you feel better about my story x) I didnt mean to make you feel bad! Hopefully you'll forgive me :)

Reviewer: RissaTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/10 04:41 pm Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance

you are not a shitty writter!

goddamit bil! you retard! ugh and alana! imma rip her hair out! gosh! oh oh my pooor teddy!!! nooooo!!

i think tom should save bill!! god, noone deservse abuse!

and im jelous, cause your in germany, ! i might be going though to!

Author's Response: x) Awesome! How are you getting to Germany?

Reviewer: Invade_Tokio_Valo Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/10 01:56 am Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance

I like this chapter! It makes Alana a bigger super bitch while my heart breaks for Bill :(

Author's Response: I know D: All will be okay though!

Reviewer: vendetta Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/10 11:29 pm Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance

a) not shitty, loved the alana bit
b) wow, glad you got to germany, you lucky lucky author.

Author's Response: x) Thank you so much, and you have no idea how interesting Germany is!

Reviewer: Deni_Cookie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/10 11:41 am Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance

This story makes me sad... of course I'm happy that there was an update, but still...
At first I was really happy that they had kissed - it was like 'uuuh finally again!' ... then I was angry because Bill hasn't let Tom to have him; you know what I mean, he hasn't gave him another chance even if he knew that Tom came up for him after graduation and that he still loves him.
Well, after this I was angry again because of Alana... sure she can love Tom, I do believe her that she really somehow does, but what the hell?? Is she really so stupid and naïve and so BITCH?! that she must be so selfish and hurt Tom like this? If I could do it, I would kick her ass really bad!!!!
Then again, I was said because od Theo and Tom; I want them to have Bill back, too!!
And in the end, I was so fucking furious! That stupid Drew with stupid Alana! I really want to shoot them both right now! She's a bitch and we know it for a long long time now, but him? He's suppossed to be Bill's boyfriend and still he beat him and is such a jerk to him!

I'm just curious how the things will go on and I hope you will get rid of Alana and that Tom will shoot that stupid fucking asshole!!! (sorry, but I'm really angry right now!) But hey, I have to tell you that this story, and the first part '7 days and nights' too, are making me sad all the time. When I'm reading this I feel like someone was holding my throat tight and I just can't think straight. And it's really common now that I'm crying during reading this story!

So please! Make it all better again for them; this is a real torturing! :')


Oh yeah and good luch in Germany ;) I hope you'll okay in there! You're somehow my neighbor right now xD Okay, I'll let you be... I think I released some of the angry into this review and now I can peacefully watch the TV! But one more thing; I don't think it's shitty update! ;)

Author's Response: Ahh, please don't cry! You are so sweet to take the time to leave such a long review, thank you so much :) Don't worry about me, I'll be okay here, I promise! And Bill and Tom will be fine also :) Where are you? How come you're my neighbor? xD

Reviewer: JumbieCasanova89 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/04/10 11:41 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks

okay... I'll still write it...

Who should the main character be?

Author's Response: Bill of course! He's too pretty to NOT be the main character x)

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/10 02:24 am Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance

I pray to god that Tom goes to see Bill one last time with teddy and sees what is really happening to Bill. Please update again soon and save Bill.

Author's Response: x) I'm not going to be THAT heartless and just cut the story short without any happy endings! It's just going to be a loooong way there xD

Reviewer: Yuuki_Kyo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/03/10 04:15 pm Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance

:O Not a shitty updated and your definitely not a shitty author!

I loved the chapter, even if I want to kick Alana's ass :]

Author's Response: Thanks, darling :) Everyone wants to kick Alana's ass xD

Reviewer: laura_67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/10 01:02 pm Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance

… I can’t believe that… Alana knows Drew ! Did she know him before he met Bill ? She planned the meeting ?
I don’t know, if I understood well... But... Alana asked to Drew to fire at Tom ?
I hate her !
And of whom Drew has to get rid ? Bill ? Tom ? Somebody else ?

Poor Bill ! He thinks he deserves what arrives at him ! Drew's brainwashing is going to work ? I hope that not and that Bill is going to leave him !

I hope that Tom is going to react !

I am so sad for him and Bill ! And Theodore !

I can’t wait to read the next chapter !


Where are you in Germany ?

A bientôt ! ^^
Your French reader
Laura.

Author's Response: It's okay to be a bit confused, everything will clear up soon :D You're so sweet~ I'm in Neuss, near Dusseldorf :)

Reviewer: InsertWittyNameHere Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/10 09:00 am Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance

Julia, that was fucking AMAZING!

Don't say that it was badd!! Okay, soooo much to say!

The thing about ebing 17 again? Made me cry. Alana's gonna kill Tom? *stabby-stabby to Alana* Drew beat up our Billa again? *whistles her Tom over* get him, boy!

Hones to GOD this fic is so... GAH! It's so amazing!!

I am so jealous of you being in Germany! How is it??

I get that you may be under some stress about the exchange, the whole language, homework and all but please, update soon. 

I just.

Wow.



Author's Response: I'm under more stress than I've EVER been in. Just, ugh. My GOD, the German language is so damn hard to understand Dx It's all about contex of the sentence, and the-- Okay, I'll stop bitching. Basically, I'm sort of annoyed that most Germans HATE Tokio Hotel here, but some of them love them, which makes me smile :)

Reviewer: MelissaRM19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/10 08:29 am Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance

You're not a shitty author. Every time you update it makes my day.

Author's Response: I must not make your day a lot, huh? D: My update timing sort of SUCKS, but I'm still working on it~

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