Date: 11/29/10 07:28 am Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks
Also, I wanted to say that the video for MGMT's Kids' REMINDS ME SOOOOOO MUCH of this story (pertaining to Alana and Teddy)
Author's Response: i gotta go watch it :)
Date: 11/28/10 11:46 am Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance
Omigosh, PLEASE post more... Your story is so addicting, it's a crime. It's sweet and SO DRAMATIC!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE POST!!! I can't take not knowing what happens!
Author's Response: x) I try to make it addicting, but I suck with writing on time, soooo that makes everyone suffer D:
Date: 11/27/10 03:26 am Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance
wow
Author's Response: thank you..?
Date: 11/23/10 10:57 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks
Iam completely shocked,and hating Alana and Drew. Please write another chapter soon I'm practically going crazy not being able to read further.
Author's Response: oh hon, i'll try
Date: 11/09/10 04:42 pm Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance
>..<
iz Confused yet shocked at whats happening. Alana and Drew the schemers from hell.
Author's Response: because those two are asses. i guess confusion will clear up later
Date: 10/28/10 10:39 pm Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance
D: i don't like Drew. he's a prick and makes me wanna punch him!
I want my Tomi and Billa backs!... pweeeeeese??? D:
Author's Response: x) No one like him. In short tiiiime :D
Date: 10/25/10 04:13 pm Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks
This story is one of the brightest stars on the website. Your story really got me hooked up to my labtop. I really really love it. Your style of writing is really good and your ideas are great. *blush*
As for Alana and drew, they are two huge Arschlöcher!!! I really hope Tom and Bill will have their happy ending.
p.s Do excuse me if my English isn't correct. English isn't my native language so there might me some mistakes.
p.s.s Do excuse me if my review is a bit weird. This is my first review so I'm still trying some things.
greetz, ScotiaMcGregor
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much. That made me really excited, that I get to make someone else addicted to the laptop, because I know I already am x) Your english is fine and your review made me happy! Don't worry about it :D
Date: 10/23/10 08:07 pm Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance
Ooooh my god, I love this fanfiction. It's the best fanfiction ever.
Poor Bill! :'( I just want him to have his happy ending, with Tom!
It was NOT a shitty update, it was awesome. Please update again soon!
Author's Response: thanks, darling. i'll try to update sooner <3
Date: 10/23/10 02:08 pm Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance
MOREEEE. I hate Drew. ;o
Date: 10/23/10 05:00 am Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance
Darling, you're everything BUT shitty.
Amazing more like it.
If you were NOT amazing, i would not have stayed up till nearly four in the morning reading "7 Days and Nights" AND "These Hearts". So, you're everything but shitty in my book.
I hope you feel better. *huggles*
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetheart. You made me smile :)
Date: 10/22/10 06:48 pm Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance
woah im left at a cliffhanger o:
Author's Response: yep :)
Date: 10/22/10 04:58 pm Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance
AWW that little kiss was so adorable. :D The 17 again part almost made me cry! YOU ARE NOT A SHITTY AUTHOR. You are a good author!!
Oh. My. God. I am going to mentally murder Alana. How long has she known Drew!? What the hell!!!!! That is so not cool. God, if only Tom could put a stop to this madness. :[
I hope Bill's wish comes true.
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Very eccentric :) I like it! I'll go back to writing right now~
Date: 10/20/10 09:47 pm Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance
no. not shitty...just...sniffle...WAAAAAAHH! ALANA U BITCH!! MAKE HER PAAAAAAAAAYYY!
Author's Response: I will! I promise! :D
Date: 10/17/10 12:52 am Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance
I loved this chapter. I hope you find time to rest before updating.
Author's Response: thank you, darling. The headaches are starting to come on, oi. D:
Date: 10/16/10 10:42 am Title: Of Coffee Cakes and Midnight Snacks
hahaha, its through my school, they do a europe trip, were you go to like germany france and i think somewere else im nto sure hahaha
Date: 10/15/10 12:01 pm Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance
Alana's being a bitch and a bad mother but I loved this chapter
Author's Response: Alana's always a bitch x) Thanks, babe
Date: 10/11/10 01:53 am Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance
No, no, noooooo!!!!! What's wrong with Bill? Ugh -.- This frustrates me to no extent, darling :( Everything went from fluffy and perfect with that kiss to completely downhill the next day :( Aww I wanted them to stay together :(
Alana.. Gosh! I'm not even kidding! Would you like let me rip her head off? pleaseee? She's just ruining the whole story, first she treats Bill like some sort of Robot-servant and later she calls Drew up to beat the scheisse out Bill for a little sweet kiss :'(
No! You've GOT to come back and update this thing, darl! It's me pleading you :(
And I'm sorry to hear you were having a hard time after posting this up :( Hope your head doesn't hurt anymore *strokes hair lightly* :)
Uh- Good luck with all in Germany! Hope you're feeling better already!
xoxo,
A.
Author's Response: When i checked my email and saw that i got a shitload of reviewd from These Hearts, I'm like "someone went off on a reading spree again..." and I was right! :D Yeah, I think things are getting better here. I saw Bill on a billboard one day and freaked the fuck out x) Mm, oh! As for your comment on what type of story I WOULDN'T write... x) Well, actually-- Romance Humor is one of my bigs, and my other one is actually, ironically, horror and angst. Hah, go figure :) Thanks for reviewing, love!
Date: 10/11/10 01:45 am Title: Dirty Martinis and Powdered Sugar Snow
'The hell that woman thinks Bill is? Her servant? Well... yeah he practically is -.- BUT STILL! What the hell, dude? Alana seriously needs to calm down, she's treating Bill like a freaking Cinderella! :/ Me no likey! grrr
Awww "Give me a hug, jerk." That was so Bill ;)
Loving the cute moments spared between those two! Bring us more :D
What I'd like to see happening in this story? Hmm... *taps finger against chin* Lemme think... OH, OH, OH! I'd just LOVE IT if you could have Tom coming face to face with the jerk that is Drew -.- Maybe he could kick that guy's ass for once and for all! Oh yeah and would it me TOO MUCH to ask if I told you it'd totally make me my day if you chopped Alana's head into a billion pieces? pretty please? :)
Date: 10/11/10 12:33 am Title: Of Gravity and Ignorance
yay update!..... *drops jaw* OMG i hate alana, and drew.... poor billa.... :(
I hope Bill gets his happily ever after with Tom soon *hugs them*
Author's Response: i know :( everything willbe better though, i promise
Date: 10/10/10 11:32 pm Title: Of Smiley Bacon and Unfortunate Surprises
Gee... That Alana HAS to be cut off from the picture, gal. Everything's fine UNTIL her nasty-cheating ass arrives :(
“Because an ‘A’LLIGATOR ‘L’IES ’A’ROUND the ‘N’EAREST ‘A’NIMAL.”
Teddy proceeded to hug Momo the Giraffe closer to his body as he looked around for stray alligators. Andreas laughed.
“I think ‘T’EDDY ‘O’BVIOUSLY ‘M’AKES a big deal about wanting you close to him, you should stay,” He smirked, “Or it would be rude.”
LMAOOOO! That's it! I'm using those codes whenever the parents go around and I'm chatting up with friends xD So innovative! No wonder why you're one of my fave writers here :D
A gender I'd never see YOU writing?
*deep deep deep brainstorm processing*
I think it'd be... ANGST or NECROPHILIA ---> That sh*t's nasty & scray :S