Date: 12/27/10 10:49 pm Title: "Do you believe we're destined?"
A and A
Date: 06/12/10 06:03 pm Title: "Y'know, conversing with yourself is the first sign of insanity."
I know this ends with the wall coming down, and I'm excited to see how this story develops in this setting. I'm actually getting ahead of myself and imagining Tom and Bill meeting the night the wall comes down and running to meet each other. *sigh* Update soon! Please!
Author's Response: Hehe i was the same :) im hoping to get back to this fic, since it was my first :) but i've been so busy with Rachel Stevens and TNT the sequel, which i shouldnt be talking about ! It's a secret! XD but i hope to text chelly and see if se wants to continue with this >< thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 04/22/10 08:50 am Title: "Do you believe we're destined?"
ooo thats a tough one! hmm how bout some tom/jorg action followed by some tom/bill love!!! XD oh and definatly need to go FASTER!!! cant wait to read!
Date: 01/06/10 02:26 am Title: "Do you believe we're destined?"
1. B
2. A
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for reviewing! hazex
Date: 01/05/10 11:48 pm Title: "Do you believe we're destined?"
bill/tom love all the way=]
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for reviewing! *hands out heart shaped twincest cookies*
Date: 01/04/10 09:58 pm Title: "Do you believe we're destined?"
Humm well I think we need a little more back ground on both of them but at the same time I want to see their relationship a little more. If Tom and Bill are to be the focus then they need to develop a little more as individuals and as friends lover or whatever they are to become. Jorg and Toms relationship is important because it is the reason that Bill sent the bottle flying over the wall with the message for the boy who looked so sad and lost. Bill felt emotional towards him so there has to be more basis for his emotional out put. I think you are doing well and please keep going. I hope I have helped in some way.
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! thats loads of help! Thanks for reviewing! hazex
Date: 01/04/10 04:23 pm Title: "Do you believe we're destined?"
bill/tom faster
Author's Response: yes! score for me! thats what i want!rnrnthanks for reviewing!rnrnhazex
Date: 12/23/09 12:54 am Title: "Y'know, conversing with yourself is the first sign of insanity."
Ok. So, the thought of Bill in ballet class kind of makes me giggle. He's so tall and lanky I'm not sure how graceful he really is but that said. I could be totally wrong. I'm the most klumsy person and yet I did Gymnastics and Tae Kwon Do. I liked their first meeting it was sweet yet still mysterious. Tom's life is so dark and I hope Bill can bring him some light someday. Well done and I can't wait to read more. I'm excited about this story and how it will progress.
Author's Response: I just started my Intermedite Foundation classes, the idea of bill dancing just kinda sprung to mind! Lol. I'm quite clumsy myself, i fall over my own feet! rnWe're looking forward to writing Happy!tom! rnThanks for reviewing! xrnHazex
Date: 12/22/09 09:40 pm Title: Prologue
i love it....please keep writing
Author's Response: Aw thank you! Merry christmas! hopefully i can squeeze in writing while shopping and celebrating xmas with the family! xrnHazex
Date: 12/04/09 05:27 am Title: "Was that a fucking bottle?!"
Love your premise of having Tom and Bill on either side of the wall - in fact, I'm surprised no one has written a fic like this yet! (or at least I haven't read any...) Your story is off to a really interesting start. I would just caution against maybe overdoing/overexaggerating the angst - sometimes more subtle angst can pack a greater punch. Anyway, good job so far and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was planning on making something ad happen to tom in the next chapter, but i'm still not sure about it, i dont what it to be too angsty, that'd be crap! and very depressing xD
Date: 12/04/09 12:44 am Title: "Was that a fucking bottle?!"
This is interesting. For me the Berlin Wall was not talked about much in my school. I was 11 when the wall came down. I remember everyone being happy and scared all at the same time. My parents talked about it with me but not so much at school. I'm not sure why. I think it's something that needs to be remembered and this is the first time anyone on this site has done story around this part of history as far as I know. I think you have started off well, but don't forget about character development. I'm curious to find out where you take this and how Bill and Tom will meet or if they meet. Keep going please.
Author's Response: Wow thanks. I'm very interested in the history of the wall myself. I wasnt born when it came down, and its only made me want to learn more about it. I'm very pleased you like it. x
Date: 11/08/09 07:08 am Title: Prologue
Poor Tom D:
This is very interesting, I'm looking forward to reading more of it.
Author's Response: Aw thank you! I better get back to writing, i wonder what will happen to Tom....
Date: 11/07/09 04:35 am Title: Prologue
Omg poor Tom :O
Author's Response: His dad's an ass! It made me sad writing it. rnI must continue. Thanks for reviewing x