Date: 11/07/09 06:33 pm Title: Consequences
-screams and charges for the plate- GUSTI COOKIES!!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYY!!!
I like this story, Bill's a little shallow asshole isn't he? Hahaha hopefully Tom can change that...Anywho, -tackles you for cookies-
Date: 11/07/09 06:22 pm Title: Consequences
Bill's a bitch, alright. Poor Tom. I'd love to know what is going through his head.
Date: 11/07/09 05:49 pm Title: Consequences
GUSTI COOKIES!!!.... -eyes- i was gonna review BEFORE you mentioned that... -eyes- agh!!! i reallyrealy liek this depictiuon of bill, its realistic :D (not that many other aren't blada blada,) but ja
Date: 11/07/09 05:37 pm Title: Consequences
awesome! i feel bad for tom, his poor face
Date: 11/07/09 05:30 pm Title: Consequences
=O
Oh my gossssssssssh! Bill's an ass and why didn't Tom say anything?! AHH! Tom needs to talk omg. *anxiousness*
This is off to a good start, I can't wait until they start interacting.
Date: 11/07/09 05:17 pm Title: Consequences
This story sounds like it'll be interesting, for sure. I always loved a spoiled bratty Bill :D
Anyway, it's exciting to see two great authors working together and I can already tell this will be great, love the way it's going. The idea is different, too, not something you see on here everyday. I can't help but find Bill highly amusing, though I hate how he's quick to judge because of appearance. Eh, I'm sure it'll change the more time he spends with Tom :) Anyway, I'll be waiting for an update on this ^^
-StarStruck
Date: 11/06/09 10:40 pm Title: Accidents
omg...T___T poor tom!! please continue!!
Date: 11/06/09 09:27 pm Title: Accidents
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ACTION!
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Date: 11/06/09 08:45 pm Title: Accidents
*jaw drops* WHAT THE HELL KIND OF A FIRST CHAPTER IS THAT? HOW CAN YOU LEAVE IT LIKE THAT? ALICE! YOU HAD BETTER HURRY WITH THAT SECOND ONE, OR IMMA HAFTA GO ALL NINJA ON YER ASS! *skvishes both of you*
Date: 11/06/09 07:04 pm Title: Accidents
Waiting for an update on this-already hooked!!!
Date: 11/06/09 06:42 pm Title: Accidents
Awesome so far!
Date: 11/06/09 06:00 pm Title: Accidents
:OOOO *wants more*
Date: 11/06/09 05:47 pm Title: Accidents
...car chases are awful... n more if its with a truck.... they happen in just few seconds and with that all ur life changes... this is a sad chappie =( hope tomi will b kay well he will right?
Date: 11/06/09 05:32 pm Title: Accidents
Aww sounds like a really good story
Date: 11/06/09 02:58 pm Title: Accidents
Duuuddddeee!! Must it be left there !!! -pouts, literally- -mutters under breath- Your mean :(
Date: 11/06/09 02:48 pm Title: Accidents
Two things, first of all, why do you people only respond to review when you lash out at someone?
Second, if a person doesn't get what you're trying to say I don't see why you should pretty much just attack them here and make them seem stupid, because guess what, people can't read your mind, too fucking bad. A person gave her opinion based on how SHE interpreted it, and you made it seem like she got an IQ below 10. Maybe YOU need to be clearer in your writing if somebody doesn't understand, don't blame it on the reader!
Date: 11/06/09 02:32 pm Title: Accidents
So excited to read this. What a great idea for a story!
Date: 11/06/09 01:35 pm Title: Accidents
xD This is off to a good start; I can't wait to see how it progresses (I love both of your stories and I'm really interested to see how you guys write one together!)
Date: 11/06/09 01:22 pm Title: Accidents
Guh, I just tensed all up. I always think about that drunk driver thing when I'm in the car too. Not that I think I could accomplish it if I needed to.
Your banner freaked me out, my poor pretty Tom. *pets his face*
Date: 11/06/09 01:10 pm Title: Accidents
omg, gah, i want so badly to read moooore!!!!!!!!!!! -camsoutsidewith"NEEDMORESKINDEEP"banner- i'll wait till your ready..... -hunkersdownandeatsaCOOKIE!