Date: 11/26/09 09:21 pm Title: Talking
I want to review before I read Timeline and Just Pretend by Anony and RAWR_dino and look for Die Wächter, a new story by Synnie that'll be up sometime soon.
really good chapter!
Date: 11/26/09 07:56 pm Title: Talking
This fic I am assuming is going to amazing! haha.. I seriously Love it already....
Date: 11/26/09 06:37 pm Title: Talking
Tom made me laugh in the beginning of the story with what he said to Bill, but, my heart totally broke for him at the end. Honestly, Tom is the one I'm loving to read about now, but, I know he's gonna have a major impact on Bill so I can't wait to see how he, Bill, changes.
Great job as usual, guy ^_^
Date: 11/26/09 06:20 pm Title: Talking
bill is a rebel!!!! please continue!! and yeah you have some incredible telepathic powers!!! XD
hehehe continue!!
Date: 11/26/09 05:09 pm Title: Talking
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Date: 11/26/09 04:26 pm Title: Talking
For the record, the little button thingie says "submit". Thought you'd like to know.
For some reason, I felt absolutely COMPELLED to leave a review for this chapter, telling you how Gustav is an awesome friend, and Bill is a brat, adn I feel for Tom. Amazing work, ladies. I already read Timeline and Just Pretend, and my eyes are always peeled for something from Synnie, so no worries there.
I'm gonna say your telepathetic prowess worked! YAY! *thorws telepathetic confetti*
Date: 11/26/09 04:09 pm Title: Talking
Bill is very selfish. Can't wait till he and Tom talk more.
Date: 11/26/09 03:39 pm Title: Talking
Yup, prowess ftw. So these chapters are way too short *whines* When I'm getting into it, bam, it's over. It probably would be the same if they were 5000 words long chapters, I'm a bottomless pit when it comes to 'eat' stories.
Date: 11/26/09 01:54 pm Title: Talking
Poor Tom! I hope bill comes to his senses and and stops being a butt or self centered! Update soon.
Date: 11/26/09 01:19 pm Title: Talking
how do you manage to get out one amazing fic after the other, you're gifted seriously!!
Great job ^^
Date: 11/26/09 01:14 pm Title: Talking
luv it please continue i feel so bad for tom please let there be happiness for tom with the scars on his face thank you for the new chap
Date: 11/26/09 01:09 pm Title: Talking
hahha you guys crack me up with your pre-chapter banter... update sooner this time yeah? :) i'm excited to see where this story is going.
Date: 11/23/09 02:09 am Title: Silence
I think this is an amazing beginning to what I believe is going to be an amazing fic!! Can Not wait for more!! (And I think Tomi needs Gustav.. Someone to be there for him because they want to..and cause he would be nice to him..)
Date: 11/15/09 06:52 am Title: Silence
I'm really liking this story. :]
I can't wait for an update and to see more of what Tom is thinking, it was nice to hear from him. :D
Date: 11/15/09 01:03 am Title: Silence
Hi!
Interesting beginning.
It would be really good if Gustav were there for Tom. Bill is being kind of mean right now. That's the point though, I know. But still, Tom most be feeling pretty low.
Anyway hope you guys update soon!
Date: 11/14/09 07:25 pm Title: Silence
Wow, that's impressive
I wonder how you guys came up with this story line
It's so orininal, I've never read anything like it
and it's really good written too
I'd just like the chapters to be a little longer, but that's your choice
Love the story:3
Date: 11/14/09 07:01 pm Title: Silence
I laready helped to level Bacon today when I read PS. I can't do it again, sadly, but maybe tomorrow?
This chapter had no dialogue. That was kinda cool.
I can tell that Bill and Tom will be the best of friends. *snorts*
Date: 11/14/09 11:48 am Title: Silence
love this story!! your baby is cute!! XD
please continue!
Date: 11/14/09 12:01 am Title: Silence
Ok, so it hasn't been as long since the crash as I thought. This obviosly just happened. Poor Tom, I feel bad that he has to be all alone in his pain. You'd think, especially for a minor, they'd send someone to inform him and talk with him more thourougly, like a psychiatrist or something. And ew, when you described how his scar tissue is so bad that it's restricting his movement, that grossed me out, but of course I also feel bad for Tom for all the pain he's in. Can't wait for more interaction between self-centered Bill and poor injured Tom.