Date: 04/09/10 05:50 pm Title: Visiting
alriight ur telepathicness worked on me this time. i love the last line!
Date: 04/09/10 05:27 pm Title: Consequences
I WANNA COOKIE! lol *runs off to read next chapter* not a fan of chapter stories that much but this one looked to good to pass up :)
Date: 04/09/10 04:16 pm Title: This Could Be
GIVE ME MORE!!!!!!
Date: 04/09/10 04:10 pm Title: This Could Be
"This could be very bad."
No way! It could be goooood, so good! xD
xx
Date: 04/09/10 03:22 pm Title: This Could Be
thanks for the update
Date: 04/09/10 03:16 pm Title: This Could Be
Oh, how you torture me by leaving off there. Can't wait for more.
Date: 04/09/10 03:15 pm Title: This Could Be
Bleh post soon!!!
Date: 04/06/10 05:16 pm Title: In Need
BIIIIIILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
Date: 04/03/10 09:54 pm Title: In Need
Oh man. So sad. AGGGHHH. I can't even...
yeah.
Well played, Tom.
Date: 04/02/10 03:43 am Title: In Need
*bawls* I wanna cuddle Tom!!! D"X And why is there no next button??
*demands a next button* T^T
Date: 04/01/10 09:57 pm Title: Don't
I really love the story *cuddles plot line* I almost cried during those sad scenes ;__; If I could snuggle closely with your characters, I totally would.
And... I know that... I probably shouldn't be talking... but don't be afraid to use Bill and Tom's names ^-^ I was told this by an English teacher--that using their names is better than constantly repeating "the teen," "the blond," etc... Or find some other way to mention them--a different word order or something instead of using those words :) I used to do it a lot *hides* But I learned that it was very annoying to constantly read.
Don't be mad ;__; *anticipates being hit with something*
Date: 04/01/10 09:11 pm Title: Seeing
I umm *hides* found a mistake...
Laughing softly, his mother tried looking stern. "Now, young man, you know better than that."
"Yes, mother," the dreadhead said...
I thought Tom had cornrows? O.O
Date: 03/31/10 04:50 am Title: In Need
Truth is coming out now isn't it?
Date: 03/30/10 02:57 am Title: In Need
I don't have anything useful to say, but I just wanted to leave some love. :) Really enjoying this!
Date: 03/30/10 12:51 am Title: In Need
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *falls of chair* Why? Why? Whhhhhhhhy?! You two just had to leave it there didn't you....*sighs* this is perfection. You have no idea how sad and utterly surprised I was when I saw there was no next button...I love this so much. Please write more soon. *throws sparkles in the air* I will give you guys gustav and georg shaped cookies if you do.
I will be opening an archive very soon and I would be honored if you guys decided to upload it there too.
Date: 03/29/10 09:56 pm Title: In Need
0.0 oh my god!!! This story is effing amazing! Truly freaking love this one it's soo good and made me cry T-T. Can't wait for the next post.
Date: 03/28/10 11:21 pm Title: In Need
Omg D: What an emotional ending :O
Date: 03/28/10 10:37 pm Title: In Need
Ah shit...go Tom! Update soon please?
Date: 03/28/10 10:21 pm Title: In Need
O.O That was strong... the last part! Gosh... wow
Anyway, I've read the story on my ipaq last night until 1am so I don't have any reviews to you guys, but I have loved the story :3
Thanks