Date: 05/27/10 09:37 pm Title: Very Wrong
Aw, poor Bill. Did Tom do that because he thought Bill would ignore him?
Date: 05/27/10 02:52 pm Title: Very Wrong
a little shorter but i liked it. but doesnt bill wear makeup to school? doesnt that make him like everybody else?
Date: 05/27/10 04:43 am Title: Very Wrong
Wow. I totally understand Bill's disappointment, but I understand Tom's decision as well. I hope they get over this soon though, I look forward to their next couple of interactions.
Date: 05/27/10 03:53 am Title: Very Wrong
TOO SHORT. that means you need to update fast. :)
Date: 05/27/10 02:23 am Title: Very Wrong
GIVE ME MORE!!!!!!!
Date: 05/26/10 09:48 pm Title: Very Wrong
awww poor Bill. I feel for him.But Tom only wanted to fit in just like everyone else because they would have made fun of him either way.
Date: 05/26/10 06:01 pm Title: Very Wrong
Awh, at first I thought he was going to be a bitch again, but I guess it's because Tom's trying to hide his injuries. Bill is hurt at that because he knows Tom's stronger than that, right? And because everyone at the school is fake. He wants Tom to be real because he knows Tom can be real, and he's starting to see Tom's real, inner beauty.
Poor things :'(
Date: 05/26/10 05:40 pm Title: Very Wrong
Naw come on Bill! That is a totally different thing with Tom. Tomi doesn't use makeup to really hide himself, only to protect himself >.< I'm totally on Tom's side in this one, because when he's wearing makeup, people will make effort to get to really know him. If he didn't wear it, people would just ignore and boycot him and not get to know him. Superficial bastards they are.
So give me a club or something and let me knock some sense in Bill. Bah. He kinda disgusts me right now, why won't he give Tom a chance for happiness and a normal life? Anyway, I would be totally fine with it if Tom would take off the makeup later, off course, he doesn't need to hide whole his life.
You see how I'm getting in to this story? It's crazy how much I'm taking this for real xD
Oh. And in my sugarcoated world of black sparkly clouds, I like to believe that it was the Sally from my suggestion. That's how I'll picture her anyway xD
Nice job, again! Good luck with the move and job, Alcie, I know how hard it can be :) It'll all work out!
love xxxxxx
Date: 05/26/10 05:24 pm Title: Very Wrong
Poor Bill, I think he was trying to find someone REAL and then he was disappointed by Tom...
Hope they can be together again!!!! XD
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
Date: 05/26/10 05:18 pm Title: Leaving
Please continue!!! I really love this story !!!! It is incredible !! ^^continue!!
Date: 05/26/10 04:15 pm Title: Very Wrong
*shakes head* oh Tom you always find a way to be an idiot don't you?
Date: 05/26/10 03:51 pm Title: Very Wrong
omg! wtf? anony, synnie, WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME? -dies, but not before throwing confetti everywhere-
Love,
Ashley
Date: 05/26/10 03:46 pm Title: Very Wrong
wow bill is stupid! he can not say that if he was in tom's shoes he wouldn't cover his face with makeup!! wow get it together bill!! ANYWAYS!..i LOVED this chapter so please post soon!!!
Date: 05/26/10 03:35 pm Title: Very Wrong
Ugh, Bill, so stubborn. Can't wait for more.
Date: 05/26/10 02:15 pm Title: Very Wrong
Damn Bill, overreact much? Sheesh. I'm more sad that Tom felt like he had to do that to protect himself. *pets Tom*
Date: 05/26/10 01:13 pm Title: Very Wrong
How about if we make it glittery and tasting like butterscotch? Is that ok? I'm hugging your chap. Poor Billa.
Date: 05/26/10 01:04 pm Title: Very Wrong
oh damn-poor Tom...now he has to prove otherwise to get back any of the relationship they had managed to have!
More soon please
Date: 05/26/10 01:00 pm Title: Very Wrong
oh no it's already the end of the chapter =( I want more ! =D