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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/11 04:07 am Title: Chapter 1

nice story!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: myself225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

aww, how adorable!! loved it :) x

Author's Response: Good, and thanks! x

Reviewer: cleverone Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/09 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

it was really good, but in one paragraph you wrote, "...Tom’s small black braids." and then you started using blond as a pronoun. (ex.) "...his nails down the blonde’s back, making said blonde bite his earlobe."

Author's Response: Oh. Whoops. hehe (nervous laugh). Yeah. i usually write stories where Tom is still blonde, so i kind of forgot that I used his new hair in this one. Yeah. Thanks for pointing that out, I'll try to remember. And thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/09 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was really cute!

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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