Date: 03/28/25 04:42 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Please please please continue to write more on this atleast one more ending chapter and a proper first time for the twins now that Tom is as old as Bill also :> even if it’s been a long time I’m sure your writing is as amazing as ever still! Please I beg you 🥹d84;a039;
Date: 03/28/25 04:42 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Please please please continue to write more on this atleast one more ending chapter and a proper first time for the twins now that Tom is as old as Bill also :> even if it’s been a long time I’m sure your writing is as amazing as ever still! Please I beg you 🥹d84;a039;
Date: 07/09/15 05:53 pm Title: Prologue
YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW LONG I'VE BEEN SEARCHING FOR THIS FIC! I could never remember the name for the life of me. I AM SO HAPPY I found you againb25;b25;b25;b25;
Date: 03/05/12 10:52 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Lols XD Looks like they weren't quite careful enough XD Also, LOVED it when Pet said "shit" XD It was hilarious XD Reminded me of a story my parents told of me when I was about one and a half XD (I'd thrown my toys - a TON of them - out of my crib and had the nerve to just say "Uh-oh" when my parents came in and saw me standing looking at them XD) Awesome job so far, but I hope you deal with some of the unresolved stuff, like Bill's assumption that they're not going to stay in Neverland (which is obvious, because he keeps talking about a future where Tom is with him in the adult world), and how they're going to deal with all the media hype that would, of course, go with the lead singer of an up-and-coming rock band going missing without a trace, along with his supposed twin. I think I REALLY wanna know the results of that test, even though it's obvious Tom IS his twin, just to see what the world does. Plus, is Bill aging backwards, now that he's in Neverland??? It seems like he might have descended to be... I dunno, maybe eighteen, instead of twenty??? I dunno how that might work, but I was wondering about that when you said that Bill felt like a teenager again... I mean, I know you meant sexually, but I have to wonder whether he feels that way because of Tom, or because he's in Neverland... ANYWAY! This is really good so far, and I can't wait to read the rest ^-^
Date: 03/05/12 12:50 am Title: Chapter Ten
This chapter made me tear up!!!!!!!! Very well done so far Kish-san!!
Date: 10/26/11 09:03 pm Title: Prologue
This is literally one of my favourite stories on THF. I'm so sad it seems so neglected. Will there ever be a new update? Oh please say yes, pleaaase! *is all big eyes and wobbly lips*
Date: 10/16/11 11:55 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
this is a really good story!!
i cant wait tell u post the rest!
Date: 07/21/11 03:12 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Shit, yeah. xD It´s so nice - Neverland and twin´s relationship.
Date: 07/18/11 05:53 pm Title: Chapter Two
But I do, I do! xD
Date: 06/14/11 03:23 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
I love this story, it's so good. But I hate WIPs, I hate stories left unfinished. I know that you probably have a life and are busy but it's been months. How much longer are you going to keep us waiting? Hopefully you'll read this and realize, that you need to finish this story.
Date: 02/11/11 12:37 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
I'm the 483th review and I have ONE WISH for that magical number.
AN UPDATE. PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE
Date: 01/17/11 03:59 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Oh my god, no! I got sucked into another WIP. Why do I keep doing this to myself??
Besides the bit of frustration I had to experience when I realised this was uncompleted, this has got to be one of the most adorable stories I've ever read - EVER :D The first chapter had me in tears because Bill and Tom aren't meant to be separated! *sniffs* But Tom in Neverland is just the most brilliant idea ever, and having him come back as a thirteen year old... Perfect.
I love absolutely everything about this - the characterisations (Georg and Gustav are made of so much win), the writing, the story progression... I absolutely love this Tom; how sweet and protective and curious he is, and the twins' relationship is just beautiful. Andi and David make me giggle, and the fact that one of the Mermaids was Chantelle just made me LOL :D
I... there were so many other things I wanted to mention, so I should've taken notes while reading because I can't remember them now, dammit.
But anyway, I absolutely ADORE this and I hope you're still working on it and plan on updating soon because I NEEEEEEEED it! :)
Just... so much love b29;
Date: 01/02/11 02:26 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Oh my the consequ5of their actions brought to light. They started another's set of twins to twincest. Oh my that was lovely and sexy touching. Im glad Tom's old enough for it now. It was kind of creepy before when Tom was only 13 and crawling all over Bill. *holds breath waiting for another update* It's been a while and I'm new. It's totally rude to ask for more, so instead I'll say; I look forward to an update whenever it is that you are inspired to continue this story.
Date: 01/02/11 01:08 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
The idea of the lost boys I've always found creepy. Children who never grow up, never change, never grow, never learn. Even as a child I found this disturbing. You loose a lot when you grow up but you gain so much as well. No one said when you grew up you had to be stuffy and boring. It always disturbed me that they couldn't figure that out. I always knew that being a grown up had a price but ultimately way more freedom. It made me and honestly makes me sad that they don't know how wonderful it can be to change. I think that might be what bothers me the mort the lost children ate afraid to change. And I guess I realized how important and vital change is. And yes change can be scary even good change but it happens so its best to accept it and embrace it. Because change can He wonderful.
Date: 01/02/11 08:27 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
Its magical and amazing and Im full of dread.
Date: 01/02/11 08:13 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Neverland seems like an amazing place and an amazing way to get away but like any thing free it really does come with a price. There will be a price to pay even if it takes a while to present itself. I'm nervous and worried.
Date: 01/02/11 07:57 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Oh my if they keep getting frisky they are going to get caught. I don't trust Andi why does Bill? God I hope this all works out.
Date: 01/02/11 07:36 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Really really? Hand jobs in a doctor's office? Nit the best of excuses Bill. Especially since Tom tripping along behind in a state of post orgasmic bliss.
Date: 01/02/11 07:15 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Don't trust Andi he's untrustworthy. He stole tom in the fist place. Why would he offer us such an amazing offer without something in it for him? He wouldn't we are all fundamentally selfish ... even fairies.
Date: 01/02/11 02:08 am Title: Chapter Ten
Naughty, Naughty, Naughty Tom oh my goodness Naughty Tom! Love that! Glad that Simone knows the truth. Glad the videos worked out ok.