Date: 07/08/10 02:31 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Oh wow. It makes me feel like I was caught being intimate with my girlfriend and then my cousin tried to imitate us.
Date: 07/08/10 02:26 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Is there any explanation coming up about WHY Andi stole Tomi? This story is enchanting
Date: 07/08/10 09:58 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
oh THAT game lol :D That's so funny XD
Date: 07/08/10 07:28 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
rofl they are corrupting the kids XD
Those kids sure learn fast though ._. Fairy dust is gonna come out of Andi's ears if he knew the kids saw them.
Date: 07/08/10 07:11 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
~laughs hard~ oh my- wow... yay!!!!! if that keeps happening, Bill and Tom are going to turn all those kids into adults and have to take them back to Earth with them... or Neverland might become another teen party island...
Date: 07/08/10 06:47 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
xD Haha, forget the kiddos there xP I loved it :D Can't wait for more :D
xx Chi ^^
Date: 07/08/10 06:26 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
LOL, too funny!!
Date: 07/08/10 06:09 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
I am absolutely mortified for them. OH LORD... *dies*
Date: 07/08/10 04:26 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Oh no, they're corrupting the children! I think twin kisses are going to be a hard thing to explain to a bunch of little kids. As always, a fantastic chapter. The 'alone time' was very hot, and I just adore the affection between the twins.
Date: 07/08/10 03:16 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
this chapter was cute, (more than cute) but the last little bit left me with that impression, poor boys, lol!
Date: 07/08/10 01:29 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
LOL! ohh my. Yeah, I'm eager to see how that's gonna play out. Kids. xD
Date: 07/08/10 12:35 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Ahh how funny! One second my eyes are wide at Bill and Tom, the next I'm laughing my head off. Great chapter, as usual!!
Date: 07/08/10 12:21 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Uh-oh, seems they weren't as alone as they thought in their alone time. Hee, I can't wait to see what repercussions this might bring to the kids in Neverland.
Loved the chapter, loved their alone time and how they've fallen into this relationship so easily after being separated for so long. I'll be looking forward to more!
Date: 07/08/10 12:02 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
That was so hot, maybe it was not such a good idea for them to go to neverland though, at this rate all the kids will be growing up, lol. I absolutely love bill and Tom's connection in this story abd yes, u felt a little sad for Andy this time. Can't wait for next chap.
Date: 07/07/10 11:52 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Bahaha.. This was delightful. :3 I'm always so incredibly happy when you update (ask my roommate.. I tend to squeak). This was such a nice chapter, and I love the "object insight" into Tom's personality. Of course, I also love twin-time, but that last bit at the end had me rolling laughter. Kids have the darndest way of finding out the things we'd rather they not know. ;) Lovely chapter, and I very much enjoyed it. :)
Date: 07/07/10 11:45 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
I loooooooooooooooooooooove it! So cute and sweet and... HOT. *_*
Date: 07/01/10 10:06 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
>:/ That was a meaaaan place to leave it.
However, I want to go be on that beach right now. You're an amazingly gifted descriptive writer. WooT :)
Date: 06/30/10 01:25 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
It definitely counts! XD
Date: 06/28/10 11:19 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
yes it counts, absolutely! this story is so freaking amazing!!!