Date: 10/02/10 08:22 pm Title: Chapter Seven
ohmygod am i glad i can just click next for the upcoming chapter xD haha Tom's innocence is so cute, so differnt from the current Tom we all know and love. This fic is so wonderful to read, i love it so so much! Always makes me chuckle :)
Date: 10/01/10 07:24 pm Title: Chapter Six
wow things are heating up a bit! Such a lovel shower scene, aw i loved it. And all the food they for at Maccy D, man i couldn't believe how much they ordered xD i love this, the more i read of it the more i love it!
Date: 10/01/10 11:46 am Title: Chapter Five
Oh haha poor twins xD This chapter was nothing but delightful! I love the twins like this, all sweetness and so close. Beautiful beautiful, this fic makes me so happy ^___^
Date: 09/30/10 07:15 pm Title: Chapter Four
ohmygod ohmygod! I'm so sleepy my eyes are drooping but i wanna read on so bad! This is such a sweet fic, absolutely beautifully written, ah wow just so cute ^^
Date: 09/30/10 06:45 pm Title: Chapter Three
aw i'm left with such a smile after reading that, it was adorable! I love Tom's naivity, it's so sweet and done so well! I'm looking forward to more ear petting and also, suddenly very curious as to how this fic is actually going to develop, i wanna know all about Tom's time in Neverland and why he's only 13 and if the age gap will close or remain. Ah i wanna know so much xD only one way to find out, click on, woot!
Date: 09/27/10 07:33 pm Title: Chapter Two
oh David xD i'm with Gustav on this one! This is beautiful, i love watching Bill and Toom's interactions with one another, so lovely!
Date: 09/26/10 08:40 pm Title: Chapter One
haha i love this, it's so sweet xD Tom makes me chuckle, his protection of Bill was adorable! I really can't wait to see how this fic is gonna run out, what people are gonna say and different people's reactions and what they'll all do! Ah so much i wanna find out, guess i'll read on tomorrow :D
Date: 09/26/10 08:06 pm Title: Prologue
ooh this is such an awesome idea! I've been tracking this story for an age but never actually got round to reading it, obviously xD so far i can definitely say i'm intrigued and excited to find out more! Wonderfully written, as always, as always. This is going to be fun to read, i know it :D
Date: 08/10/10 05:11 pm Title: Chapter One
Omg. I bet whoever kidnapped Tom gave him a hypopituitary hormone drug O.O To keep him young?
Date: 08/09/10 03:28 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Oh wow. I'm feel the worst second-hand embarrassment reading the ending. >.< Thanks for the update! Great as always. :D
Date: 07/16/10 12:49 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Hehehe...they should've known the kids would've noticed something...
Date: 07/12/10 01:17 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Oh, that was really cute although they have some explaining to do! Hot encounter in Tom's tree house :)
Date: 07/09/10 11:11 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Nnnnnnh this is like 10000000 times sexier than I remember. Sweet cuddles and determined Tom and corrupting the innocent! Pet is adorable. Andi is a DICK. And I looooove their private time and the awesomeness of the self-cleaning clothing.
I don't trust that Andi. I am certain that pirates are going to make an appearance. Annnnnnd Tom and Bill really need more sextiems. >_> Ahem. WHAT. Premature ejaculation is my new favorite fic trope.
There can never be enough of this.
Date: 07/08/10 11:25 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
LOLZ! The ending was adorable, shit indeed!
Can't wait for more!
XD
Date: 07/08/10 10:23 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Really hot chapter ! Lol at the twins game! Can't wait to read the next chapter, I'm always very excited to see an update on this fic! LOVE it :D
Date: 07/08/10 10:15 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
That ending is priceless! :D I really can't express how much I adore this story/you.
Date: 07/08/10 09:28 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
That would be, as my drama teacher, Mrs. McCrea, likes to say, an 'Oh Crap' Moment. :D This is not going to be good but it's going to be bloody hilarious!! Fantastic job! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 07/08/10 07:42 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
lol omg more
Date: 07/08/10 06:41 pm Title: Prologue
Pfffft. So much for privacy in Neverland.
Date: 07/08/10 03:28 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Ooh, alone time! And so fantastic too!
I love how their desire is so mutual, it only takes a moment for Bill to feel the same thing Tom is feeling! And I love how they reach for each other simultaneously like that. They're so lovely.
I'd love to get Tom's pov a bit in this story -- how he felt when he first saw Bill, so different from him, all grown up, and how he started to realise that Bill is not only his beloved twin but also the hottest thing he's seen (not that he thought anyone was hot before, but still). And now things are so heated between them. It's marvellous!
I love that Bill knows, from experience, when Tom is about to come. *_* And the rest of the scene is so hot too! I love how frantic they are, and Tom being so responsive is just perfect. Plus Bill's teasing. *fans self* They definitely haven't learned each other's boundaries yet and how far they can push... it's not a bad thing at all though, to my mind!
Tom makes me melt, too: "They weren't you. I needed you more." This is so lovely! They're so openly loving, it's absolutely amazing.
Thanks again for updating -- this is such a happy fic!