Date: 11/14/09 09:30 am Title: Chapter Three
This is such a wonderful story. Tom is just so adorable. Bill's total devotion is lovely. Simone is certainly in for a shock. And Andi is the fairy, bahaha. Love this so much.
Date: 11/14/09 09:01 am Title: Chapter Three
This is unbearably adorable. I just want to take baby!Tom and put him in my pocket.
*squishes twins*
Date: 11/14/09 05:06 am Title: Chapter Three
They are adorable in this - though you need to lose a 'd' on surprise in the third to last paragraph here. Tom's just so squishable. ♥
Date: 11/14/09 02:54 am Title: Chapter Three
awwww i want more kisses and fluffy moments...
Date: 11/14/09 02:23 am Title: Chapter Three
This is adorable! I'm in love with how sweet and cute Tom is, and how Bill is juggling the immaturity of Tom and the maturity of being an adult. This is really captivating.
Date: 11/14/09 02:23 am Title: Chapter Three
I am totally overcome by fluff! Tom is so damn cute and Bill is so patient with him. I'm all nervous about Andi, now, though! O.O
Date: 11/14/09 02:12 am Title: Chapter Three
Imaginig to this young with bill is so cute I still really Want to know how he dissapeared to never land though
Date: 11/14/09 12:14 am Title: Chapter Two
Peter Pan is my favorite childhood story, so this just makes my day!
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You write amazingly.
Im excited for whats next!
Date: 11/13/09 11:45 pm Title: Chapter Three
There are just bits and pieces in every chapter that make me grin like an idiot. Tom is such a midget little spitefire. I love that he considers Bill's jewelry "treasure." The fact that one of Bill's shirts is "too tight" despite it not being tight at all, hoping it's Andi that dies because he stole him from Bill. Then there's Bill, and the way he takes so much care to make sure Tom gets dressed and brushes his teeth (and omg, Tom is adorable in that scene, too) that he doesn't even think about getting himself ready. And Tom with the butter knife in his belt. I mean, SERIOUSLY. You have no idea how much I love this. SFM. The best thing since sliced bread. F'real.
Date: 11/13/09 11:31 pm Title: Chapter Three
awesome :D lol.your end note made me laughh ahaha
Date: 11/13/09 11:10 pm Title: Chapter Three
You know, here I am trying not to be a pervert, then you put in something like EAR PETTING, and I'm right back where I started. *throws up hands* ...Loving this, you know that. ;D LOOOOOOVE your wild child Tom and this Bill who's found his happiness.
Date: 11/13/09 11:48 am Title: Chapter Two
I believe in fairies! I do! I do!
Date: 11/13/09 11:40 am Title: Chapter Two
awww I love this story! David might as well just give up now :)
Date: 11/13/09 01:39 am Title: Chapter Two
Bill might not...But I do I do I do believe in fairies!!!!
Date: 11/12/09 09:44 pm Title: Chapter Two
OOh, lovee !
Date: 11/12/09 07:47 pm Title: Chapter Two
lol i love tom! more!
Date: 11/12/09 07:41 pm Title: Chapter Two
OMG BILL DOESN'T BELIEVE IN FAIRIES??WHAT IS WRONG WITH HIM??!!!* repeats "I do believe in fairies" 3 times, so no fairies die*
Awwwwe i love how Tom acts!!He's trying to defend Bill from the "Pirates"!XD
LOL at how Tom thinks Georg and David are pirates??is it 'cause of Geo's long hair???XD
Gustav is a genius!!Why hadn't no one thought of a DNA test before!*face palm*
Date: 11/12/09 01:18 pm Title: Prologue
It's shaping up to be my newest guilty pleasure. Tom with cutlery is just hilarious. I hope you'll update soon, because this fic is awesome!
Date: 11/12/09 12:35 pm Title: Chapter Two
All I have to say is Tom weilding cutlery made my day. That's about all I can say. It was just brilliant.