Date: 11/29/09 09:09 pm Title: Chapter Five
This is just adorable :D I can't wait to see where you go from here.
Date: 11/29/09 06:09 pm Title: Chapter Five
Oooh, nice xD Lolz xD I loved it :D I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 11/29/09 03:03 pm Title: Prologue
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Date: 11/29/09 04:27 am Title: Chapter Five
*squeals into a pillow* oh yay!!! i loved the whole Tom/Bill fluff moment but... did you say a shower? ummm, together? oh please yes!!!
Date: 11/29/09 02:58 am Title: Chapter Five
Aaawww.. That was sweet!!XD Hahahahaha..XDD And I like it that even Tom is acting like a kid still and a few years behind, he's still the older brother by ten minutes of Bill. Soooo cute...XDD
I wonder what happens in the shower in the next chapter. LOL..XD
Date: 11/29/09 02:35 am Title: Chapter Five
I'm willing to bet this passage was written early on: "Well." Andi tipped his head in the other direction, shedding a fine rain of golden dust and fluttering his wings, sending the dust drifting forward, dispersing in the air until it vanished. Bill resisted the urge to sneeze. "There were two of you. He was an extra."
Oh god, that wrenched at my heart. Bill's instant, primal reaction was so gratifying. They're so desperate to stay together; can't Andi respect that? And brilliant save on Tom's part! Good show; I like to see Tom protecting Bill in his own way.
...A SHOWER!? I need to bribe you for this.
Author's Response: You clever person, you. Yes indeed, that was among the first five paragraphs I ever wrote of this story. I knew exactly how Bill would react to it, too - I firmly believe that the twins really are two halves of a perfect whole, after all. Is my twin!love showing too obviously here?
Yes, a nice twinny shower. *wiggles eyebrows* You know I'm always susceptible to bribery.
Date: 11/28/09 08:41 pm Title: Chapter Five
You write action so well! This chapter was so good and went really fast. I gasped when Bill went flying away and cheered when Tom got him back! lol :D
Author's Response: Thank you! It was pretty quick to write, too, once I actually got to it. So glad you're still reading and enjoying. ♥!
Date: 11/28/09 08:05 pm Title: Chapter Five
LOL Tinkerbell is scarier in person! I loved the Bill and Tom aren't one plus one, but rather two halves analogy. And "I got you, Bill" was too freaking adorable. ♥
Author's Response: Absolutely terrifying! She was a bit of a brat in Peter Pan, now that I think about it. ;P Ah, I'm glad the analogy made sense. It's the way I always feel about the real twins, for some reason. Thank you! ♥
Date: 11/28/09 07:27 pm Title: Chapter Five
That Andi is a troublemaker and I feel like they need a lantern or whatever Hook trapped Tink in to put Andi in some time out. I don't believe in fairies!! >:|
Author's Response: That's not a bad idea. Andi could definitely do with a time out, that little brat. He's certainly not finished making life difficult for all of them... *mysterious*
Date: 11/28/09 07:07 pm Title: Chapter Five
Wooohoo! Love this so much.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're liking it. ;D
Date: 11/28/09 06:51 pm Title: Chapter Five
Aww this story is such fun. And the twins are adorable.
I've enjoyed reading it so far. Looking foward to the shower, lol!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm having fun with it myself, and kinda looking forward to writing the shower, too. :P
Date: 11/28/09 06:25 pm Title: Chapter Five
Oh my gosh! I love how you make everything seem like a serious, real life situation, except for the fact that the whole thing is steeped in fairy dust. It's funny, but not crazy. It seemed like you write of everything with a certain amount of rationality.
Author's Response: That's exactly what I'm trying for, so I'm rather thrilled to hear it's succeeded! I know the premise and events of this story are cracky, but I wanted it to seem almost plausible at the same time. ;) Thank you so much.
Date: 11/28/09 06:25 pm Title: Chapter Five
Get over it, Andibell, Tom isn't going back!
Author's Response: Andibell! Okay, I'm giggling over that.
Date: 11/26/09 12:17 pm Title: Chapter Four
*Laughs* He does believe in fairies he does he does. That was great XD I have to say, I'm totes in love with this little Tom
Date: 11/22/09 05:02 pm Title: Chapter Four
Oh dear, I NEED that other chapter xD Lolz xD I loved it :D They're cute ^^ (the twinsels, of course ;P) I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 11/20/09 10:32 pm Title: Chapter Four
Oh, and happy birthday! My nephew also turned 7 today!
Date: 11/20/09 10:30 pm Title: Chapter Four
Oh my stars! That was fantastic!
I have an uncle named Herschell. And one named Frederick. My grandmother's maiden name was Broccle, and her married name was Schreck. Her first name was Gertrude. Can you tell I have some German in my family? lol.
I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
Date: 11/20/09 09:20 pm Title: Chapter Four
omg this story is so cute D:
i can barely contain myself x]
Date: 11/20/09 08:00 pm Title: Chapter Four
lmao more more!
Date: 11/20/09 04:47 pm Title: Prologue
I read this before work today, and I was laughing to myself all day about Herschel. And ANDI! This just keeps getting better and better. I love so much.