Date: 04/17/10 11:56 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
I’m so happy to see an update on this story! I like it so much!
This quote is brilliant, it represents exactly how I picture the twins’s relationship, all of that in one little sentence... I’m speechless ! : "I'll make sure it's okay for you."
Sexy hexy chapter! They want each other so much, you can really tell by the way you’re writing it.... very well done !
Date: 04/17/10 10:38 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
So how old would he be now? I'm guessing like 15?
Date: 04/17/10 10:37 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
omg! i like totes LOVED this chapter! i was so happy to come home and see it was updated! :D
Date: 04/06/10 12:54 am Title: Chapter Eleven
I can't stop gushing about how cute and sweet this story is! I really love how you depict Bill and Tom here. Tom, innocence corrupted yet still innocent, and Bill, dealing with grown up things and childish things.
Date: 04/06/10 12:44 am Title: Chapter Ten
Awww! So cute! And Tom's already so naughty yet so innocent. Poor Bill, Tom has himself wrapped around his finger. Well, same as Bill for Tom, but this is even more difficult for bill.
Date: 04/06/10 12:33 am Title: Chapter Eight
Tom is too cute.
Date: 04/02/10 02:17 am Title: Prologue
...Bill's a pirate? What? Reading on...
Date: 03/31/10 06:25 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
more! good chapter
Date: 03/31/10 05:58 am Title: Chapter Eleven
*___________*
magical!
and sexy :F
Date: 03/30/10 12:15 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Tom is cute and naive. I can't wait till they go all the way.
Date: 03/28/10 05:01 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Oh my, I love Bill/Tom sexytime! More? Please? :D Kinda wouldn't blame Bill if he decided to go with Tom to Neverland, but I'll just have to wait and see. Great chapter!
Date: 03/28/10 03:47 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Andi screeching 'Too hot! Too hot!' slayed me. I had a picture of a very disgruntled and red fairy in my mind.
Go Tom and his obsession with porn! This chapter went up in the AWW factor, as well is the Sexy factor.
Date: 03/28/10 10:22 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Ooh. I don't know if I want them to go to Neverland or not :(
Date: 03/28/10 10:02 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Awww I'm so glad every time I see a new chapter of this fic ! This chap was adorable and sexy! Loved it ! Can't wait to know what will happen next !
Date: 03/28/10 07:37 am Title: Chapter Eleven
aw, I love this story so much, really:') I love how everythig is turning out, and I can't wait for the next update!:D
Date: 03/28/10 06:37 am Title: Chapter Eleven
I loved it ^^ Muahaha, Tomi's a horn-dog xD Hihi xD I hope you continue soon!!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 03/28/10 04:49 am Title: Chapter Eleven
I just adore this story...it's completely perfect.
Date: 03/28/10 02:27 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Interesting! It never occurred to me that they might go to Neverland. I think Bill would miss his mom too much, though.
The sexyteims were very nice! You really captured the feeling of drowsiness and warmth and comfort, with their inhibitions lowered so far. Wonderful chapter! ♥
Date: 03/28/10 02:09 am Title: Chapter Eleven
awwwwww~ this story just keeps getting better! i love you for writing it~
Date: 03/28/10 01:40 am Title: Chapter Eleven
u posted...finally YAY and omigosh so good like really good i cant wait in till u post again