Date: 05/26/10 01:01 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
zomg~~~~ sounds like smexi time in neverland!
Author's Response: Oh, perhaps, perhaps. :D :D :D
Date: 05/25/10 11:07 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
I'm always so excited to see a new chapter of this! I obviously don't trust Andi one bit, but I'll admit I'm curious to see how you depict Neverland. Now I'll be waiting even more anxiously for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yeah, I wouldn't trust that fairy as far as I could throw him. Considerably less far, in fact! Eee, glad you're still reading, and I can tell you I'm looking forward to writing the scenes in Neverland!
Date: 05/06/10 02:58 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Starting off... I really thought I wouldn't like this; not anything personal, it was something I prejudged before I read because of its fantasy qualities. Something compelled me to continue... and now I just can't get enough - so glad I didn't upturn my nose too, too quickly. It's all my favourite things - especially fluffy! Love the fluff! Lots of laughs in here too, particularly the 'Hardcore Threesome Porn' - HAHA. With the way this is going, PG-13 can't be enough, secretly, secretly, craving it to go farther... *cough* Well, absolutely fascinated with Tom growing up (before further relationship development, naturally). On the other hand, although, strangely, I find the whole mini Tom and big Bill incredibly darling! So many excuses for cute, sweet, innocent (sometimes) fluff. For a little brother, Bill sure makes a great big brother. xD I'm sad I'm almost through the posted chapters, but I
m not finished, so I'll enjoy it while I can... *goes on to read more happily* Addicted. =3
Author's Response: This reply is late as usual with me, but thank you so much! It always feels like an accomplishment when someone who doesn't normally read or like a certain genre enjoys a fic I've written within that genre. <3 I hope you'll keep on enjoying it, and thank you again!
Date: 04/30/10 02:19 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Oh! I love this story so much! It's sexy and adorable all at the same time... How is that even possible? This one is definitely a favorite :D
Date: 04/20/10 12:29 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
How much I love this story? Very much. It's not going too fast or too slow, it's fun to read and you write as perfectly as always.
And I love how Tom is after Bill ;) Andi at the next chapter? Can't wait for that!
xx
Date: 04/19/10 01:58 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Ahaha nice one, Bill
Date: 04/19/10 11:13 am Title: Chapter Twelve
I'm happy Andi didn't show up in this chapter. He's eeviiil.
Date: 04/19/10 09:47 am Title: Chapter Twelve
LOL I love the end of this this chapter! This story just keeps getting better and better. All the little touches and twin moments make it utterly believable :)
Date: 04/19/10 02:41 am Title: Chapter Twelve
yay for another chapter, i can't wait for the next one!!
Date: 04/18/10 07:25 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
That was uh-mazing darling, I'm grinning, like, mad-crazy over this chapter :D
Date: 04/18/10 03:37 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
xD I loved it!!! The end in this one xD Daft Tom x3 I hope you continue soon!!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 04/18/10 01:55 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
"Or, there could be a fairy back at the hotel," Bill replied pointedly, and Tom snickered.
There is absolutely no response for that. >_> None. I'm glad David didn't even TRY, because um no. :snickers:
YES! Bill gave in! Yes yes yes! I am very pleased to have "encouraged" you to up the rating. >:D Mwahahahaha...I mean. Wait. How can I use this power for good? Oh who am I kidding; this is very much For The Good.
Wow, Tom, way to dive right in with a hardcore porno kiss. ♥ You read about all these fics where Bill totally has Tom wrapped around his finger. It's so easy to forget that Tom can have the same power, too. ;D
SO looking forward to this, and what Andi has on offer!
Date: 04/18/10 12:24 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
lmao nice chapter cant wait for the next one
Date: 04/18/10 12:02 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Bahahaha.. I love this chapter. :) Seeing Tom's "big brother" side come out is very amusing, and I love the twist on their connection (neither being able to refuse). Very cute, sweet, and smexy chapter. ;D Thank you for updating! *re-reads*
Date: 04/18/10 09:50 am Title: Chapter Twelve
lol tom's blitz out face...XP
Date: 04/18/10 05:52 am Title: Chapter Twelve
:3 YAY! Andi's coming back! OOH Im so excited for the next chapter!
Date: 04/18/10 05:25 am Title: Chapter Twelve
In the doctor's office? Dear god, that's hot!
I loved all the little touches in this; Bill soothing Tom with circles on his back, and trailing his fingers along Tom's spine in the doctor's office. It's all very hot and sweet at the same time. Lovely chapter! :D
Date: 04/18/10 04:42 am Title: Chapter Twelve
I'm always just thrilled to see an update for this story! The scene at the doctor's office was definitely hot, but I think my favorite part were the backseat kisses...so sweet and loving, and a bit naughty. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 04/18/10 03:24 am Title: Chapter Twelve
~flutterclaps~ oh yay!!! i hope the twins ahve another sexy moment soon~~~
Date: 04/18/10 12:28 am Title: Chapter Twelve
yay for updates! lol they are the cutest things ever! more soon please =)