Date: 06/28/10 08:14 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
YAY we're finally getting there, or they are I guess I should say :) I really loved the interaction between the twins and the children. They seem to love them so much irl that it made the characterizations even more realistic. And LOL @ the mermaid named Chantelle XD
Date: 06/28/10 10:03 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
UM. HOW CAN YOU LEAVE IT THERE.
I am grateful that Tom denied Chantelle kisses to enjoy Bill's sweet mouth. ♥! The kids were adorable, I enjoy how Bill didn't think much of having his own until he realized how much Tom loved being around them. Such sweetly domestic thoughts of them being together! That moment when Bill thinks about Tom being forceful with production and so forth was somehow...sexy. >_>
Looking forward to more, you know I am! *_* Please don't leave us hanging for too long!
Date: 06/27/10 11:15 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
awww good chapter!
Date: 06/27/10 10:05 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
OH COME ON!!!! I'm not going to say I hate you or anything because I really want you to finish the story but REALLY?!?! You had to end it RIGHT THERE!?!? Please continue soon! This is a wonderful story all around but I'd really like some smexy Bill/Tom action goin on! ;P
Date: 06/27/10 09:41 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
more!
Date: 06/27/10 03:22 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
This fic is amazing. You don't leave me wondering about anything. As soon as a question pops up it's answered I love it XD
And it's been a while since I've seen Peter Pan O.O
Date: 06/27/10 02:50 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Agh! U stopped there?!
Date: 06/27/10 01:07 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
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Date: 06/27/10 11:55 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
SPANKY TIEM!
Date: 06/27/10 09:21 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Ohhh ! Can't wait for alone time in the next chapter !
I really like how Bill was thinking of their future while observing Tom... so sweet !
Date: 06/27/10 08:07 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
I think this story has become the one in which I look most forward to being updated. One might think of getting bored, in general, with stories in which, regardless of the situation, smut and romance tends to become routine and repetitive; as if no matter the situation or plot, in the end, it's all the same. Not here - oh goodness, you still surprise me, where every last kiss seems significant to the story and unique amongst other TWC relations. I'm still excited for every time they share their moments, whether it be dripping with romantic undertones or illustrating the pure, hormonal need that comes with being young adults utterly attracted to one another. Heartbeat goes happy, grin broadens on my face, it's all such a joy to read!
The images in this chapter are lovely, and I just love the way Tom blew off the mermaids. *coughChantelle!?cough* That was both funny, fluffy and sexy! The lost children are cute, and I love Bill contemplating the idea of Tom and children, and how he has all these inviting fantasies of sharing a life with his twin. It's really sweet. They should adopt Pet, pet seems really adorable and has cute chemistry with the twins!
It's so selfish, and I usually refrain from 'demanding' or 'begging', often ending reviews with 'looking forward to the next installment', but is it so terrible of me to get on both knees and plead for the next chapter to come ASAP? *tears flowing* T__T Haha, anyways, lovely chapter, excellent! I will be looking forward to more, of course! ^---^
Date: 06/27/10 05:02 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
O.o *twitch* I need that alone time, like just as much as the twins o.O x3 I loved it!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 06/27/10 04:40 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Fantastic chapter! The part with the kids was unbelievably sweet and charming--I love the idea of Bill thinking about having kids with Tom--and then the ending was so...guh. You make just the fact of their desire for each other so hot.
Date: 06/27/10 03:31 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Now I really can't wait for the next chapter! You evil thing with a cliffie... ;)
xx
Date: 06/27/10 02:21 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Oh man, I need more, pretty pretty please.
Author's Response: Soon, I promise! I love writing this. <3
Date: 06/27/10 01:50 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Oh my god, I can't believe you left off there! Woman! lol I'm loving Neverland, though, and how cute those kids are. Especially Pet and how she's got Bill thinking of them having kids. *_*
Author's Response: I wasn't planning to leave it there, but the next scene got out of hand! :P I've gotta say, I'm having fun writing the kids, too. And I love the idea of Bill and Tom adopting kids someday. *_* Anyway, glad you're enjoying it, thank you!
Date: 06/22/10 06:13 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
I've been behind on my fic and I'm just now catching up, and I was so happy to see the updates that I'd missed! Neverland is as beautiful as I imagined it :)
Date: 06/16/10 09:15 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Although, to be honest, I adore Andi as a character, I am not at all trusting of his motives. Neverland may be far away, but I have an icky feeling about this.