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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/11 11:09 am Title: Back with the old?

when will u put up the rest??

Reviewer: Gisele Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/08 09:11 am Title: the truth of childhoods

Really good story!
Just one question, is Gerog supposed to be their dad ? (Jörg?)

Author's Response: ye, sorry, i've changed it now!! kinda a stupid mistake!!!lol!!!

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/08 02:53 pm Title: the truth of childhoods

O.O the son of a bitch ...

poor bill did anything wrong..!!! love this!

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/08 02:04 pm Title: at home and away

its SO CUTE ............... why do I have the feeling that their father is gonna bust them? =_=

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/08 02:03 pm Title: at home and away

kyaaaaaaahhh the last part melted my heart ~_~

Reviewer: THege Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/08 01:45 pm Title: at home and away

omgosh what's going to happen? :o
please write more this was awsome=D

Author's Response: thank you!!!!!!!!! lol!!!!!!!!! =DDD

Reviewer: THege Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/08 01:43 pm Title: back to normal???

aaaw.. they are so sweet^^,

Reviewer: THege Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/08 01:40 pm Title: whats wrong with bill???

aaaw poor Bill..
I just wanna comfort him.. xD

Author's Response: lol!!! XDDD keep readin!

Reviewer: THege Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/08 01:38 pm Title: bill???

oooh, I love it=D
I gotta keep reading:p

and I really like that the chapters are small.. big + ;)

Author's Response: thank you!!!!

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/08 12:56 pm Title: back to normal???

oh oh mommie mommie is out, time to rock the house! well, i'm glad they're okay now.. make bill eat!

Author's Response: ok, he is eating now!!!

Reviewer: xEmoPenguinx Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/08 12:10 pm Title: back to normal???

yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!! they made up!! =D =D loved it, update soon!! =] =]

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/08 11:50 am Title: back to normal???

aaaaaaaawwwwwwwww cuteeeee!!!!

Reviewer: th4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/08 11:17 am Title: back to normal???

nice fic...:)

Author's Response: thank you!!!

Reviewer: kaulitz_dreamz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/08 10:30 am Title: back to normal???

UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON! i neeeeeed to know what happens! tis torture! lol! i luv it by the way!!! hehe!

Reviewer: xEmoPenguinx Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/08 03:12 pm Title: whats wrong with bill???

poor billa!! *sniff* naughty tom!! *points finger*

Author's Response: danke!!! lol!!!

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/08 01:54 pm Title: whats wrong with bill???

Ow.. you update so fast! Good thing girl I like seeing new chapters quickly 8D as I was saying, oh poor Bill.. you need him to let Tom get closer to him, he'll hurt himself :( next post coming soon again? :)

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/08 01:50 pm Title: bill???

Ow.. if I were you I'd write this better, not grammar I mean :) for example, you could devide lines, write the names with the capitol letter (Tom), and describe things a little more.. I see it's the first chapter, so I just wanted to give some advices :) by the way I like where this is going - I can easily figure out Tom did it because people were getting suspicious? Anyway, post soon! :)

Author's Response: i'm sorry, i just normally write in a different type of text called copperplate gothic on word, which is all in capitals, and i don't change my mistakes normally because it would take too long, sorry. keep reading it though...

Reviewer: deepshadows87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/08 11:44 am Title: whats wrong with bill???

Poor Billa... interesting so far :D

Author's Response: thanx!!!

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/08 11:15 am Title: bill???

love huuurts! =_=

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