Date: 11/14/24 07:03 pm Title: If Only You Knew
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 09/03/10 04:46 pm Title: If Only You Knew
That was a lovely little story and I enjoyed every minute of it.
Date: 11/06/09 10:18 pm Title: If Only You Knew
hope for a sequal
Date: 11/06/09 04:48 pm Title: If Only You Knew
Very cute little fluff this was... I really enjoyed! Somehow the whole kissing was so cute. There were nothing lustful or horny, it was just... love. Confessions and first times make me always Aww... :)
Date: 11/06/09 01:21 pm Title: If Only You Knew
Aww that was so cute
Date: 11/06/09 03:40 am Title: If Only You Knew
I think this story captured a moment in time very well. It isn't the best fic you've ever written, but I still liked it. I love "first time" twincest stories in general- first kisses, first sex, anything. :) Thank you.
Date: 11/05/09 11:53 pm Title: If Only You Knew
I really liked this a lot, any chance you might decide to continue ????
Date: 11/05/09 10:31 pm Title: If Only You Knew
lol I liked the line about Bill's lips being better used for something else other then shitty excuses.
I could tell that it was written quickly there were a few typos here and there. But is was cute.
Author's Response: I've been using drwicked lately, a writing device to keep you writing and motivated and it has no spell check. I also have no beta, so that's why there are mistakes.
Date: 11/05/09 09:32 pm Title: If Only You Knew
Awwww!
I hope where they move onto is filled with more love and kisses.
Great job as usual!