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Reviewer: sodapop90 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/09 02:22 am Title: First Kiss

awww it was sooo damn cute *3*
the twins like so naive are the cuttest XDD

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/09 06:35 pm Title: First Kiss

Aw this is wonderfully sweet ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: haenniTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/09 07:35 pm Title: First Kiss

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw. i want more

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I'm definitely thinking of continuing this...it's just a matter of inspiration striking.

Reviewer: Lazurline Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/09 12:31 pm Title: First Kiss

AWW :D

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/09 03:11 am Title: First Kiss

Awwww, that was wonderfulful! I love little stories like that, when they're young and eachothers first's. I find it darling. :)
Thanks for writing!
Oh, and coincidentally, I'm reading and reviewing this on my iPod Touch as well. Woot. XD

Author's Response: High-five for the ipod! Glad you liked the story.

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/09 10:35 pm Title: First Kiss

Now that was just sweet. I really adore young twins experimenting and finding their way, and I really enjoyed this. :)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: kishmet Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/09 08:10 pm Title: First Kiss

Hee. This was sweet and perfect and I loved it, especially how nonchalant Bill was over the kisses. :)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/09 06:34 pm Title: First Kiss

LMAO! I could just picture Georg's face

Author's Response: Haha...I love the idea of him being like, "umm....? Whatever."

Reviewer: twincestkindom Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/09 05:20 pm Title: First Kiss

awwwwww XD love it!!! thanks for the chapter!!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: sarahyellow Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/09 02:25 pm Title: First Kiss

That was very sweet. It was PG, but I tried it because it was by you. I'm glad I read it.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you read it despite the rating (I skip a lot of the G or PG ones, too...haha).

Reviewer: Jelly Pencil Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/05/09 11:16 am Title: First Kiss

I somehow thought this was going to be a present day, 20-year-old Tom hasn't kissed anyone fic, so when I started reading and got to the 12-year-old line, I laughed so hard! xD

I loved the whole story - I want to take it home and cuddle with it at night. Of course if Tom was upset about not having kissed anyone he'd kiss Bill! I love how pleasantly accepting Bill is with the whole thing, and how Tom worried he didn't like, and how Georg thinks they're weird, because they are, but he's cool with it too. =3 I just love the whole dynamic. And yeah, take home a cuddle. =3

Author's Response: Perhaps I should have specified in the summary...oops. I'm so glad this story's getting cuddles!

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/09 11:10 am Title: First Kiss

That was so amazingly adorable. ♥ Yay for twinkissing.

Author's Response: Thanks! (and I second that 'yay'!)

Reviewer: nothingbutadream Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/09 10:32 am Title: First Kiss

Aw!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Remy Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/09 10:12 am Title: First Kiss

This was adorable! This part made me so happy-

“You’re so funny, Tomi. You liked it, didn’t you?”

“Yes,” Tom grumbled, displeased that Bill wasn’t giving him a straight answer.

“So you know I liked it, too. Sometimes I think you forget that we’re the same person.”


You write the twins so well. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, that's such a lovely compliment! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/09 09:49 am Title: First Kiss

That was in fact the cutest story I have read. I loved everything about. Especially: “You’re not a boy.” Bill laughed again. “You’re Tom.” - That line could not have been any cuter.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks!

Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/09 08:44 am Title: First Kiss

Another story of yours I love! I really like how you took something that could have been really sugary sweet and made seem very real and genuine. This has made my morning!

Author's Response: Thank you...that's such a nice thing to hear! I'm always so pleased when people think my writing is realistic or genuine.

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/09 06:54 am Title: First Kiss

cute cute cute.
:DD

Author's Response: Thanks!

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