Date: 12/22/09 06:52 pm Title: Siebenundzwanzig. Dirty Demands and Whipped Boyfriends
i love how bill saves them. haha. and the ending was cute!!
Date: 12/22/09 06:00 pm Title: Siebenundzwanzig. Dirty Demands and Whipped Boyfriends
Aww loved it lol pain of love part very nice i cant wai tot read more hope u make a sequel =D
Date: 12/22/09 05:11 pm Title: Siebenundzwanzig. Dirty Demands and Whipped Boyfriends
love it! :)
Date: 12/22/09 10:49 am Title: Siebenundzwanzig. Dirty Demands and Whipped Boyfriends
awhhhh it was cutee :)
Date: 12/22/09 05:33 am Title: Siebenundzwanzig. Dirty Demands and Whipped Boyfriends
:)
Date: 12/22/09 02:49 am Title: Siebenundzwanzig. Dirty Demands and Whipped Boyfriends
Hot. Also very cute! I
Date: 12/22/09 02:01 am Title: Siebenundzwanzig. Dirty Demands and Whipped Boyfriends
woooow Tom and Tori are a couple of sex addicts! atleast they can enjoy each other fully all of the time!
great chapter!
Date: 12/22/09 12:27 am Title: Siebenundzwanzig. Dirty Demands and Whipped Boyfriends
Oh my gosh!! I loved this chapter! I was literally laughing out loud! "'Oh God! Tom wait till I’m out of the room you idiot!' He said, cursing and running out."
Date: 12/21/09 11:22 pm Title: Siebenundzwanzig. Dirty Demands and Whipped Boyfriends
awweeee...i love it all...forget the ending :D it was so good. thanks :D
Date: 12/21/09 11:06 pm Title: Siebenundzwanzig. Dirty Demands and Whipped Boyfriends
I absolutely love this chapter! I laughed so hard I cried when Georg and Bill walked in on Tori and Tom fucking lol absolutely hilarious! Please keep writing!! I'll keep reading!!
Author's Response: Sounds like a deal to me! lol I'm glad your enjoying this!!
Author's Response: Sounds like a deal to me! lol I'm glad your enjoying this!!
Date: 12/21/09 10:26 pm Title: Siebenundzwanzig. Dirty Demands and Whipped Boyfriends
i loved this chapter...lol tom didn't even wait till bill was out of the room...eager boy eheheheh
Date: 12/17/09 02:39 pm Title: Sechsundzwanzig. Emotional Wrecks and TLC
I've just read the whole thing and I have lots to say.
First of all when I read the summary I thought it would be some kind of high school fic, but I'm glad that it wasn't!
The first 10 chapters or so were very predictable. Especially the love-hate-relationship and also the pregnancy thing, but it got a lot better after that.
The car accident was a bit of a cliche, but you made it work and the story is really starting to get interesting :)
I really like how you picture Tom and Bill and the chapters gets better and better. You seem to grow while writing this, which I love.
As a last remark Georg's last name is spelt 'Listing' without the 's' at the end.
I'll be following this from now on!
Date: 12/17/09 05:17 am Title: Sechsundzwanzig. Emotional Wrecks and TLC
You are NOT lame I was giggling too! The way you wrote it was just funny you can't not laugh!
Date: 12/17/09 01:29 am Title: Sechsundzwanzig. Emotional Wrecks and TLC
omg i love it! it cant be over! i seriously am so addicted to your stories. its awesome! i wuuv tommi ;)
Date: 12/16/09 11:06 pm Title: Sechsundzwanzig. Emotional Wrecks and TLC
awwww...such a sweet chapter!!!
Date: 12/16/09 09:14 pm Title: Sechsundzwanzig. Emotional Wrecks and TLC
lmfaoooo
you are sooo not lame XD
awsome chapter :)
Date: 12/16/09 08:39 pm Title: Sechsundzwanzig. Emotional Wrecks and TLC
awwww Tom is the sweetest guy in this story! He's doing so much for her and he loves her. Tori is so lucky to have all of the guys around.
great chapter!
Date: 12/16/09 07:59 pm Title: Sechsundzwanzig. Emotional Wrecks and TLC
poor tori with all her pain and poor tom with dealing with tori's pain. lol! :) hopefully u make a sequel to this, cuz i noe i definitely will be looking forward to it!!
Date: 12/16/09 07:28 pm Title: Eins. I hate him
Aww poor Tori! And poor Tom too XD. Hopefully by next ch. they're both feeling better =P
Date: 12/16/09 05:49 pm Title: Eins. I hate him
I love it! :) I'm getting a huge kick out of Tom and Tori's love/hate-oops, I mean hate/hate relationship. ;)
Author's Response: tehe! I'm so happy you're liking it! :)