Date: 12/10/09 01:02 pm Title: Vierundzwanzig. Bleeding Hearts and Dark Days
LOVE! but hate! haha xD
not that kind of hate, a good hate. Noooooo! I did not see that coming! :o It's so sweet of her to push Tom back though to protect him :') gahhhhh :D
update soon! please please please :D
Date: 12/10/09 09:36 am Title: Vierundzwanzig. Bleeding Hearts and Dark Days
OMG OMG THIS IS SO EXCITING! :DD
Date: 12/10/09 05:16 am Title: Vierundzwanzig. Bleeding Hearts and Dark Days
Arggg.. No cliffhngers!! :/ But it's a lovly story :) Hope tori is alright and that they can work it out with tom.. he must forgive her, she just saved his life :D
Date: 12/10/09 04:32 am Title: Vierundzwanzig. Bleeding Hearts and Dark Days
more please! why did you stop there? Torii don't die!!!!!!
Date: 12/10/09 01:20 am Title: Vierundzwanzig. Bleeding Hearts and Dark Days
i knew something bad had to eventually happen. Tori should have listened to him before she went running off like some wacko. i hope she's ok
Date: 12/10/09 12:41 am Title: Vierundzwanzig. Bleeding Hearts and Dark Days
HOLY SHIT WOMAN! I'm sitting here all choked up and you do this?! Gosh...please post more soon! :D
Love this story so much!
Date: 12/10/09 12:17 am Title: Vierundzwanzig. Bleeding Hearts and Dark Days
ok that did make up for the cliff hanger until i got to the end again but that is ok now im just really scared about what happened to Tori considering that she probably got hit by said car and she had better not have died cuz then Tom just mihgt end up commiting sucied and that is never good...i leave you with one last thing...PLEASE UPDATE SOON... and i shall love you forever!!
Date: 12/09/09 11:19 pm Title: Vierundzwanzig. Bleeding Hearts and Dark Days
Nice Cliffhanger!!! I really think that if no one is hurt Tom should still be angry, because that was a jerk move on Tori's part. But also she DID save his life so I guess that's an automatic "Get out of jail free" card. I'm excited, That was really creative of you. Also, not to get all picky on you, but ummm "his face filled with terror and fear." is quite redundant you know?? Anyways sorry, just a general writing strength tip. But I like it! c: have a good day!
Author's Response: Thank you thank you. And constructive criticism is always welcomed and appreciated! :D
Date: 12/09/09 10:03 pm Title: Vierundzwanzig. Bleeding Hearts and Dark Days
AAAHHHH!!! WHY!?!?!!! You need to stop with the damn cliffhangers..I'm going to have a heart attack pretty soon..haha xD love it, as always!!
Author's Response: No heart attacks! Not allowed! You'll never find out what happpens! :p
Date: 12/09/09 09:45 pm Title: Vierundzwanzig. Bleeding Hearts and Dark Days
ahhhh noooo...cliffie?!!!
have to know what happened to her!!!
Author's Response: I'm working on it as fast as I can!
Date: 12/09/09 09:38 pm Title: Vierundzwanzig. Bleeding Hearts and Dark Days
uh oh...
its all turned to custard lol
Tom has to forgive her if she gets hit by the car, he'd be stupid not to
Its so exciting!
Author's Response: hahah your review made me laugh out loud literally. ... he would be stupid.... **hint hint!
Date: 12/09/09 09:21 pm Title: Vierundzwanzig. Bleeding Hearts and Dark Days
OMG! >
Author's Response: :D
Date: 12/09/09 09:09 pm Title: Vierundzwanzig. Bleeding Hearts and Dark Days
=O OMG! Ooh shit! Ooh Tori! MORE PLZ! XD.
Author's Response: haha... soon!!! :)
Date: 12/09/09 07:44 pm Title: Dreiundzwanzig. It Was All I Had, But I Gave It To You And You Fucking Broke It.
oh.my.god. =O I am speechless!! Can't wait for the next update! Plus, I love the drama, and I love that it's not all butterflies and rainbows in this relationship. Finally, something real from a fan fic!. =D
Author's Response: Awww... your review means so much to me... thank you! I'm so happy you're enjoying this! It's so much fun writing!!
Date: 12/09/09 06:25 pm Title: Dreiundzwanzig. It Was All I Had, But I Gave It To You And You Fucking Broke It.
oh ... my ... god. ... what was in tom's hand D: dude.! update soon.!
Author's Response: hehehe.... you'll see! I'll update tongiht! :)
Date: 12/09/09 02:33 pm Title: Dreiundzwanzig. It Was All I Had, But I Gave It To You And You Fucking Broke It.
absolutely loved it!
Author's Response: Oh yea! Thank you!!!! :)
Date: 12/09/09 12:38 pm Title: Dreiundzwanzig. It Was All I Had, But I Gave It To You And You Fucking Broke It.
you're in deep shit now.. you better make it alright again!
;-)
Author's Response: hahhaaha.... i won't disappoint you.... (i hope!) :) )
Author's Response: hahhaaha.... i won't disappoint you.... (i hope!) :) )
Date: 12/09/09 03:59 am Title: Dreiundzwanzig. It Was All I Had, But I Gave It To You And You Fucking Broke It.
Plan Kill Tomi is set to take place in the next few chapters...lol idk, i really wanna no how Tom and Tori duke it out, but i really really hope that they stay together cuz they make such an effing cute couple...oh and btw i really really dont like cliff hanger
Author's Response: You'll see soon! I'm tweaking the next chapter as we speak and it should be up soon..... hopefully you'll forgive me for the cliffhanger.... :)
Date: 12/09/09 02:31 am Title: Dreiundzwanzig. It Was All I Had, But I Gave It To You And You Fucking Broke It.
I wanna know what's in the envelope...
Poor Tom, I believe you!
:D
Author's Response: awww..... your so sweet. I'm glad somebody is on tom's side!
Date: 12/09/09 01:12 am Title: Dreiundzwanzig. It Was All I Had, But I Gave It To You And You Fucking Broke It.
Wha...Wha...WHAT THE HELL?!?!?! GAAAAAAAH!!! *hyperventilates* NOOOO!!!! *breaths and calms down* Okay, okay. I trust you. The next chapter will be awesome. I know it well....please let it be awesome *Puppy dog eyes*
Author's Response: I hope I live up to your standards! I'd hate to dissappoint! :)