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Reviewer: LittleMrsTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 04:13 pm Title: "Do you want to be with me, or not?"

I don't want this to endddd :((

Author's Response: I'm sorrrrrrrry. =((

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 03:12 pm Title: "Do you want to be with me, or not?"

Biiiiiiill, you're such a brat! I really wanted Tom to not let go, as Georg advised, and I was frustrated at him for going limp, so to speak. But I was pleased when finally, FINALLY, Bill made the overtures that got them there. ♥ Sweet dense boys.

“You have me,” Tom countered, holding tightly to Bill’s chin, keeping his face firmly angled towards his own. “You have me to keep if you’ll just quit pushing me away.”

YES. *heart flutters madly* It was a rough road but I'm glad they got there.

Author's Response: SO dense, as many boys are. lol And my own heart fluttered when you pointed that line out. I'm really glad you've enjoyed the story so far. ♥ ♥ ♥

Reviewer: Maddie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/10 02:38 pm Title: "Do you have a best friend, Bill?"

I know and I read tons of them, but yeah...I only have a few of them that I'm really hoping and praying for updates on :/ Anyway, I'll get over it :p

Author's Response: Aw, just don't feel too bad. There's never a lack of things to read with THF around. =)

Reviewer: tearose99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 01:32 pm Title: "Do you want to be with me, or not?"

God I want to throttle Bill in this chapter, but I'm so glad Tom is patient and willing to work through Bill's issues. This one made me cry a little :)

Author's Response: I wanted to throttle Bill in this one, too. And I'm sort of surprised Tom didn't. haha I...totally didn't mean to make you cry, but you're smiling, so I guess I'll smile, too? =)

Author's Response: I wanted to throttle Bill in this one, too. And I'm sort of surprised Tom didn't. haha I...totally didn't mean to make you cry, but you're smiling, so I guess I'll smile, too? =)

Reviewer: IWillBe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 01:01 pm Title: "Because you look like a hoodlum?"

OK I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

haha and can someone PLEASE tell me what b29; means 0_0

Author's Response: I'm not completely sure, but I think it's supposed to turn into a heart? I know I tried to do a heart once on something, and it turned into b29; .....it's weird. I don't know. haha ♥ ♥

Reviewer: Princess2000204 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 04:34 am Title: "Do you want to be with me, or not?"

Finally Tom has broken through to Bill!!!!

Author's Response: Yes!

Reviewer: unreachable102 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/10 08:51 pm Title: "Do you want to be with me, or not?"

gosh bill BE CONFIDENT WITH YOUR GAY SELF! >:/
lmfao.
:]

Author's Response: LOLOLOLOL ILU. ♥ ♥ ♥

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/10 07:31 pm Title: "Do you want to be with me, or not?"

OOOH only an epilogue aww i want more

Author's Response: Only the epilogue left. =) I actually have mixed feelings about that, myself. lol

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/10 07:14 pm Title: "Do you want to be with me, or not?"

Oh god yes! Bill, you nearly lost him, you damn fool! But he didn't. He sucked it up and thank goodness for that. I'm excited for the epilogue now :D

Author's Response: All that's important is that he didn't. =)))) Epilogue soon.

Reviewer: PoorMedea Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/10 06:34 pm Title: "Do you want to be with me, or not?"

I have to admit, I kind of hated Bill in this chapter...he was just being so unreasonable! And poor Tom, having to deal with it the whole way back. Glad Bill changed his mind, even though I'm not entirely sure Tom should have forgiven him. I'm looking forward to the epilogue, though!

Author's Response: He was being a total brat in this one, wasn't he? Tom, of course, forgave him, because he totally wants in Bill's pants, you know? ;) haha No, that's not it. Tom's just Tom, and Tom is awesome. Epilogue is coming soon.

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/10 06:00 pm Title: "Do you want to be with me, or not?"

Oh good. This is ending happily. I can't wait for the epilogue.

Author's Response: Of course it's ending happily. I couldn't do it any other way. Epilogue coming soon.

Reviewer: Didyme Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/10 05:17 pm Title: "Do you want to be with me, or not?"

aww.. :) This story has been so great, I'm saad that it ends :/

Author's Response: I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far. =)

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/10 04:37 pm Title: "Do you want to be with me, or not?"

*does a happy dance* Finally! yay!

Author's Response: Took them long enough, right? =)

Reviewer: han Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/10 03:53 pm Title: "Do you want to be with me, or not?"

uff i was scared tom was actually going to leave...i'm happy for them :)
great story!!!!

Author's Response: I'm happy for them, too. And thank you so much!

Reviewer: Maddie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/10 03:41 pm Title: "Do you want to be with me, or not?"

*pouting* No, I do not put it below me to kick my feet and pout like the baby I really am...I don't want it to end! What am I going to look forward to read when this is over?

Author's Response: Ohhhh, there are TONS of fantastic stories out there to follow. It pleases me to know that you like it enough to want it to keep going, though. <33

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/10 03:31 pm Title: "Do you want to be with me, or not?"

YEssss! Reading the chap was painful, but I'm super glad it worked out in the end... Can't wait for the epilogue, sad that this story is almost finish... I enjoyed it a lot :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter, but sorry that you're sad it's almost over. I'll still be around though. =)

Reviewer: GiraffeJumper2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/10 02:38 pm Title: "Do you want to be with me, or not?"

Thank God...took him long enough. I still think Bill needs a slap of reality though. BUT at least he's not being a stubborn-ass...

Author's Response: He's just really, really, really insecure. But I think Tom can get through to him. =)

Reviewer: talyntokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/10 01:51 pm Title: "Do you want to be with me, or not?"

YAY

Author's Response: Yes!

Reviewer: LYNgo85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/10 01:44 pm Title: "Do you want to be with me, or not?"

Jeez finally, Bill decided what he wanted. I love the fact that Tom was firm with him and finally got him to admit his feelings.

“This isn’t a game to me, Bill,” Tom snapped. He dropped his bags and stepped forward, away from the door and closer to the younger boy still leaning against the archway from the hallway into the living room. “You think you can just keep playing this game of tug of war and I’m going to stay around like some pathetic little puppy? Because I’m not. You can’t push me away and then try to reel me back in every time you get scared that I might actually leave.”

“I’m not…it’s not a game to me, either,” Bill frowned, looking down at his feet. “I’m just really bad at this kind of thing.”

Tom dropped a heavy sigh into the air and pinched the bridge of his nose. When he dropped his hand from his face, Bill’s eyes were fixed on his, wide and worried. “What is it you want from me? The God-honest truth.”

“I don’t--” Bill started, unsure.

Tom stepped forward, even closer to Bill, pinning him to the door frame and standing so close that they could breathe each other’s breath. Tom’s nostrils flared. “What do you want from me?” He asked, again. “Because what I want is to be with you. But what I don’t want is to keep getting pulled around because you’re insecure. So, what do you want?”

“I want…” Bill started, looking down at his feet until Tom tipped his chin back up so that their eyes would meet. Bill licked his lips, nervously, and cleared his throat. His voice came out as a whisper as he continued, “I just want you.”

“You have me,” Tom countered, holding tightly to Bill’s chin, keeping his face firmly angled towards his own. “You have me to keep if you’ll just quit pushing me away.”
- Absolute favorite part.

Author's Response: I love, love, love when people point out certain passages that they really like. Thank you so much. ♥ ♥

Reviewer: deutsch_kalamar Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/10 01:31 pm Title: "Do you want to be with me, or not?"

TABARNAK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVE THIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!! :D

that makes me happy! :D YEAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!! :)

i love you i love you i love you i love you i love you i love you! :D

Author's Response: Oh, and is tabarnak a real word? haha

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