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Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/09 03:23 am Title: "My little narcolpetic friend."

Haha yes, it was sort of inevitable, I think. I really liked this chapter. Nice to have a bit more back story and to see them interacting. It's not all fireworks, though they are cute together, but it's really nice to see a story where they are more friends first. I can't wait for dinner at Melissa's. :)

Author's Response: First? What do you mean first? You think they're actually going to make out and grope, and maybe even have sex? Silly girl. =p But no, really...I'm mostly having fun with this one. Mostly. ;) And I'm so glad you're reading it! ♥

Reviewer: Hannah-Jill Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/09 09:47 pm Title: "My little narcolpetic friend."

Good! Bill doesnt need that shit!

But I'm worried about Tom. What will he do now for money?

BTW, i love Tom's character in this, he's acting the same way Bill does in some fics and its entirely adorable and yet sexy as the same time. XD Please continue this!! ^^

Author's Response: Tom will be alright, I promise. =) And I love that you love Tom's character in this one. It's fun playing around with him, and changing his personality up a bit. It's refreshing. =) I will definitely be continuing soon!

Reviewer: toriboo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/01/09 04:06 pm Title: "My little narcolpetic friend."

Thank god he quit; that place made my toe itch in irratation lol. But how serendipitous that they both became unemployed at the same time! (Time for kisses and love, yes!?) And look at that, they're already an 'us'. I'm sure Melissa is gonna try to get their goat for them going to dinner together, but meh. Oh my god! Is Bill gonna take Tom to georgia with him? TELL ME YES!
XD I'm in love with story and totally cannot wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: haha It made your TOE itch? That's kinda funny, but not if it becomes a serious issue. =p And yes! Serendipitous. lol I was just saying that a minute ago. haha Kisses and love may or may not come later, but certainly not in the next chapter. =(((( I love that you pointed out that they've become an 'us' because it's true! BillandTom should never be Bill and Tom. Never never. And as far as Bill taking Tom to Georgia, mums the word. I cannot say yes, but I can't say no, either. =Z I'm in love with the idea that you're in love with this, really. And I ♥ you!

Reviewer: kittyskull Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/09 02:34 pm Title: "My little narcolpetic friend."

I love it!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad!

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/01/09 01:38 pm Title: "My little narcolpetic friend."

Awww, it shouldn't be so sweet that they both don't have jobs on the same day anymore. XD

HOWEVER, more time to spend together! Except how is Bill going to pay rent now? And what does that mean for Tom? What will he do for money now? Sooooo many questions, but I will be patient and wait for the answers and just enjoy the ride! <333 



Author's Response: I know it SHOULDN'T be, but it is, isn't it? Kind of like serendipity in a way. haha And how WILL Bill pay rent now? And what does that mean for Tom? These questions will be answered very soon! <333333

Reviewer: Maddie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/09 12:51 pm Title: "My little narcolpetic friend."

yay! update *dacing*
I love this story ^^,

Author's Response: I'm glad you do! <3

Reviewer: LittleMrsTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/09 02:21 pm Title: "I didn't need to see that."

I shall join you (or not) in the jealousy O:

This relationship doesn't seem to be getting off to the best starts, does it? I'm worried for them. Already. And it's only chapter 4. D: Not gooood.

But can I say I love Sugar? She seems so cuuuute :3

Author's Response: haha We should have a jealousy party. And maybe invite Bill, and convince him to strip?? lol Nah. The relationship is a little rough around the edges now, sure, but there's no need to worry. It'll get better. =) And I love Sugar, too! None of my cats act like Sugar, really, but I kind of wish they did. =( haha

Reviewer: toriboo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/26/09 07:58 am Title: "I didn't need to see that."

I didn't understand the whole, "Can I walk with you to class?"
"Can you walk me to class thing?"
It seemed to me like Tom was in Bill's class, but, I guess not.
I'm sort of curious with the parental front. I think Bill's are dead and Tom's are either dead, MIA, or non-caring. Meh.
I really like this story so much and I wished I'd discovered it later so I could read more lol.
You're doing a great job as usual ^_^

Author's Response: Hmmm...I didn't realize it was confusing. They don't have class together, no. But Tom pretty much doesn't really have anything better to do, so he just wanted to walk with Bill and talk some more, I guess? But Bill took it as Tom wanted to walk him TO class, which is a coupley thing, and he's adamant that he's NOT GAY. So. lol The parental issues will be cleared up pretty soon. =) And there will be another chapter on Tuesday. Thank you SO much. I appreciate all of your reviews. =D

Reviewer: toriboo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/26/09 07:27 am Title: "I'm not gay, if that's what you're thinking."

Oooooooooooooh.....
Awwwwwww.....
Tom is SO damned cute and endearing here, I can hardly STAND it. *squeal!*

Author's Response: lol I love Tom in this one, pretty much.

Reviewer: toriboo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/26/09 07:10 am Title: "Do you have a best friend, Bill?"

xD I don't know what's up with this site because I constantly think you're on my favorite authors list and then when I look for a new story to read, your name is there and I've never gotten any sort of alert!
AHH!

But, ahh, I love the city; it makes me. I feel like when I go there, I get so much exercise and I never even realize because there's always something to look at, even if you're always visiting the same area, you know? Ah, my city, dude. ^_^

Tom is a bit of a creeper here and Bill is kind of a stuck up Suzy, but, I like them both. I can kind of tell Bill's about to be fired lol, but, it's cool since he's TOTALLY about to make a new bestie! xD

Author's Response: That happens to me, too! Like, there'll be an author or a story that I KNOW I added, and then I go back to read it again or something, and it isn't there? I dunno...it's weird. lol If you have the story favorited, you should get an email saying it's updated, I think. I...love the idea of the city. I've never actually been there (which makes this actually a little difficult to write lol). I think I'm writing off of the dream of going there, someday. Someday. And yes, Tom is a bit of a creeper, and Bill, I think, is just really introverted at the moment. lol New bestie! I totally want to use that now. haha ♥ ♥ ♥

Reviewer: diamondicecream Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/09 12:09 am Title: "I didn't need to see that."

So, the banner is good.

Tom looks like, a really white guy with dreads.

XD

Author's Response: Thanks. And yes, he does. lol Because, technically, that's what he is. O.o

Reviewer: kishmet Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/09 10:36 pm Title: "I didn't need to see that."

I think we're all a little jealous of Tom in this one. ;D Anyway, this story is adorable. I love that they had an awkward morning after, even though there was no real night before. Silly boys!

Author's Response: It's hard to not be at least a little jealous. lol But thank you! I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/09 09:39 pm Title: "I didn't need to see that."

I think I was a bit jealous, too ;)


Loved it =]

Author's Response: Tom definitely was at an advantage, there. =) Thank you so much!

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/09 08:33 pm Title: "I didn't need to see that."

I like the banner...much better than mine! I saw it, and was like, "Snap! O_7 got a banner..."

Annnnyyyywhooo...Snap, I'm enjoying this story. Still have yet to see where it's goin...totes cool, tho. I don't wanna know where it's goin....*takes breath* I wanna be surprised! :)

And yet again, you let me ramble on and on and on...

Author's Response: First of all, I love that you call me O_7. haha I think I want to change the header of my fiction LJ to that! ♥ Second of all...I'm really glad you like it. It really is going somewhere, I promise. It's just a matter of getting there. And I let you ramble because I like it when you ramble. =D

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/09 08:10 pm Title: "I didn't need to see that."

So much awkward in one chapter! Even I was cringing. I was so glad to see this updated but you know it just means I'm gonna want more, right? xD

Author's Response: Yeah, yeah. =p Gotta get the next one edited so I can post it.

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/24/09 07:34 pm Title: "I didn't need to see that."

If I got to see Bill NAKED and WET, my reaction would NOT have been like Tom's. -____- Just saying.


Author's Response: I know, right? What is WRONG with that child? haha

Reviewer: LarnaRose Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/09 05:59 pm Title: "I didn't need to see that."

I only found this today, and I really like it :) It made me laugh quite a bit!

I was kind of gutted it ended, lol. Looking foward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I'm still really nervous because it's not something I'm used to writing, but so far so good, I think. Another chapter on Tuesday!

Reviewer: Maddie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/09 04:27 pm Title: "I didn't need to see that."

*crying* moooooooreeeee

Bitte?

Author's Response: More on Tuesday, I promise. =) Don't cry.

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/09 11:45 pm Title: "I’m trying to figure out why I should trust you."

LOL at Bill turning all southern when he's drunk. Um, so do I. Drunk or mad.

Poor Tom seems a bit overwhelmed now that he had a drunk Bill on his hands. And he's straight, or so he says. No wonder he just wants to bail. I just wanna see more. xD

Author's Response: Seems everyone has the same problem when they drink. =p Or so he says. ;) More coming soon!

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/09 10:56 pm Title: "I’m trying to figure out why I should trust you."

Ha ha ha ha! I have the same problem as Bill when I get drunk, too...that amuses me to no end! :D (Mebbe that's why I'm TSOA and youse are O_7.)

*Yay*

Author's Response: haha It seems to be a problem among many, turning southern when they're drunk. Double!yay!

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