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Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/10 03:40 am Title: "What's the real issue here, Bill?"

When will those two just work it out! lol

Great chapter. I can't wait for the next!!!

And Happy New Year!!

=)

Author's Response: lol It's coming! Tom has made Bill think, and that's a good start. =) Next chapter coming soon, hopefully! Thank you so much for your review, and a very happy new year to you, too!

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/09 09:44 pm Title: "What's the real issue here, Bill?"

Awwww, I feel bad for the both of them. But I'm glad Tom is trying to make Bill give him some answers, instead of just yanking him around :D

Still...I want it to be better ;_;

Author's Response: I promise it will be better. It's going to start looking up from here for them.

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/09 09:21 pm Title: "What's the real issue here, Bill?"

GAH! Woman, you did not make it better! Poor babies. How 'bout that? xD

Author's Response: I know...I'm sorry! But I WILL make it better. Just trust me. =)

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/09 08:39 pm Title: "What's the real issue here, Bill?"

Fer TOtes, Mah Goats! Happy New Year to the O_7! YAY! And YAY fer the update...and YAY for the kiss that has Tom all twisted!

Author's Response: Happy New Year to you too! And yes...Tom is all twisted. Bill is all twisted. And eventually they'll be all twisted in each other! ;)

Reviewer: toriboo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/31/09 04:16 pm Title: "What's the real issue here, Bill?"

Poor Bill?
POOR TOM!

Bill is such a mess maker and I feel bad for like that but, he's yanking poor Tom around on chain and it's not fair to Tom.
And when did Tom say he wasn't gay? I don't quite remember lol ;)

And these kisses! XD
Bill needs to get himself sorted before he plants anymore kisses on Tomi-boy because he's NOT having it lol
I love Tom's attitude, god, he's so sexy when he has an attitude and Tom's NY accent still makes me smile!
Happy New Years ^_^

Author's Response: lol Bill IS a mess maker. Bill is just...a mess. lol Tom said he wasn't gay...a couple times I think. Definitely in chapter two (I think?) when Bill said, "I'm not gay if that's what you're thinking" and Tom said, "me neither." Or something like that. My brain is fuzzy and I'm too lazy to look it up. haha Bill will get himself sorted because Tom is going to make him. Because Tom wants kisses, but he doesn't want confused kisses. ;) Also, I love that you have put Tom's NY accent in my head because, you're right, he's sexy with his BX accent and attitude. <3333 (Happy New Years to you too!)

Reviewer: GiraffeJumper2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/09 03:36 pm Title: "What's the real issue here, Bill?"

Wow...that was great.

Author's Response: lol I have no idea if that was serious or sarcastic, but I appreciate it either way. <3

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/09 03:20 pm Title: "What's the real issue here, Bill?"

plz makw it better=]=]] i need it

Author's Response: I promise I'm going to make it better. Cross my heart. ♥

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/31/09 01:19 pm Title: "What's the real issue here, Bill?"

*moans and facepalms*

One step forward, ten steps back. Good job, guys. Good job.

Author's Response: lol It's actually not ten steps back. Maybe a few, though. But this was important for them to move forward, and I promise, promise, promise they'll get there. Have I ever let you down before? =)

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/09 12:51 pm Title: "What's the real issue here, Bill?"

Totally. :D. They need to piss each other off in order to grow. ...I really am enjoying seeing Tom twining his way all unknowing into Bill's heart.

Author's Response: =D Thank you SO much for this review. I was expecting a bunch of upset reviews, so having this one show up made me happy. =) Methinks it'd be really easy for Tom to twine his way into anyone's heart. ♥

Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/09 11:54 am Title: "What's the real issue here, Bill?"

Wait...what just happened? o.0

I think Bill's battling his attraction to Tom for all he's worth...and he probably would have gotten MORE pissed if Tom had kissed back xD

Author's Response: I thiiiiink you're probably right that he would have gotten more upset if Tom had kissed him back. But they're making progress, at least, because they're sort of (a ltitle bit? lol) talking about it. *bites lip* It'll get better. You have my word.

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/09 11:47 am Title: "What's the real issue here, Bill?"

god. they're fucking stagnant.

*headdesk* you have a real knack for writing them getting nowhere & it makes me wanna slit my thoat.

it's not a bad thing though, just annoying for my inner Tom that's going STFU BILL xD

Author's Response: D= They are actually getting somehwere....just REAAAAAALLY slowly. And I apologize for that. lol Please don't slit your throat though. Just...hang in there with me. haha ♥ ♥ ♥

Reviewer: LittleMrsTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/09 11:40 am Title: "What's the real issue here, Bill?"

Oh dear, oh dear, poor boys. They're both so confused and in denial :( Now please, make it better =)

Author's Response: I promise I'm going to make it better. It doesn't seem like it, but I am. haha (Kind of seems like my way...right? Make it worse before I make it better.)

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/09 07:47 pm Title: "There's somethin' in your britches."

that was cute. i loved the end with the swings. poor bill. he doesnt want ppl to assume he is gay from his hair and makeup and such, but that also doesn't mean he isnt gay. or at least bi. keep up the great work!

Author's Response: I think, basically, Bill just doesn't know WHAT he is. haha Tomsexual, perhaps. ;) Thank you so much for the review! ♥

Reviewer: toriboo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/28/09 12:00 am Title: "There's somethin' in your britches."

=O
*pout*
WHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHY?!
I thought they were getting someplace! I thought there'd be cuddles! I thought be awkward touches and questions of "Is this okay?", and "Are you sure?"
WHAT. HAPPENED?!?
Damn those two and their cowardice!
*sigh*
I hope Bill does go to talk Tom to talk, that way, maybe he'll need to be *comforted* with a nice hug...
YAY! lol

Author's Response: D= I'm sorry! They'll get there though, I promiiiiiiiise. ♥

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 09:48 pm Title: "There's somethin' in your britches."

*shifty eyes* Here! Imma share mah cherry cobbler today. :D

Hope your Christmas went well..(mine didn't.)

However, thanks for the update! :D

Author's Response: Gah, cherry cobbler! My Christmas was fine (low key and relaxing). Sorry to hear about yours, though. =( But thank you, thank you, thank YOU for reading. And reviewing. ♥

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 09:30 pm Title: "There's somethin' in your britches."

=]=] plz more=] i love this so much=]=]

Author's Response: More soon, I promise. Thank you so much for reading. =)

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 05:31 pm Title: "There's somethin' in your britches."

Oh you guys. Stop playing with my heart and each other's. But you're just being boys and boys don't talk, so you're doing your sex justice I suppose.

HOWEVER, taking the bull by the horns is also a manly trait and you guys at least cleared part of the air that's making things not so fun.

I'm glad.

Author's Response: haha Males can be so dense, can't they? They'll get through it though. =)

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 04:45 pm Title: "There's somethin' in your britches."

SO full of angst! Thank goodness for Annie. I was feeling for Tom's lungs, there, with how much he was smoking. I understand that kind of nervousness and you did it so well.

I want to say 'poor Tom' because he's just so confused by everything Bill is doing but I really want to say 'poor Bill', too, because he's just confused by everything. I wonder what it's going to take for him to admit to himself what he feels, and what he feels for Tom.

Author's Response: I think 'poor babies' would suffice. But they'll get there.

Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 04:13 pm Title: "There's somethin' in your britches."

So much fluff ^_^ I totally love this story as much as ISWAK ^_^

Author's Response: I'm very happy to hear that! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Reviewer: Didyme Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/09 03:26 pm Title: "There's somethin' in your britches."

:)

Author's Response: =)

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