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Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 10:21 pm Title: "You kissed a boy and you liked it."

I love this. I really really love this. It makes me warm and fuzzy inside and I love it.

Author's Response: Aww. I'm glad it could have that effect on you! ♥

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 10:12 pm Title: "What's the real issue here, Bill?"

Tom is right, Bill needs to figure his shit out, but at the same time...when someone kisses you, I think certain things are pretty obvious. I really love this chapter, and I tend agree with Bill about the love thing.

Author's Response: Awww. I tend to be more on Tom's side on the topic of love. But you're right, when kisses are involved, things become a little clearer and a little more obvious. =)

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 09:58 pm Title: "You scare me."

AW YES! Finally, a kiss. I am very very happy with this. Extremely happy, actually, even if it seemed to come a bit out of no where...Whatever. I loved it.

Author's Response: lol Thank you! I'm glad you loved it. I have a fondness for that part, myself. =)

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 09:49 pm Title: "I want dates. Spontaneous ones."

Oh man, somehow missed a few updates! Loving this still, the slow development, how considerate Tom is of Bill...yet clearly very desirous. ♥ Very gallant!

Definitely gonna be a good year.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! ♥

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 09:49 pm Title: "Don't be too proud to ask for help."

Okay we are making progress. I was a little let down by what happened between Georg and Bill after all that time it was just taunting me and reminding me of my ignorance. I really like it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. =)

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. =)

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 09:35 pm Title: "Are you going to give me a hug, or what?"

Of course he means Bill? Please? I really like this, but I still have NO CLUE what went on with Georg. I really want to know.

Author's Response: lol I didn't realize that the Georg/Bill thing got dragged out so long. But, on the bright side, you've already gotten to that part. =)

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 09:26 pm Title: "I want dates. Spontaneous ones."

awwwwwwww :) plz more gurlies

Author's Response: More soon!

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 09:26 pm Title: "Shit, you fucker."

AH! Explain Georg!! I'm sorry, the accumulating suspense is getting to me. Too much suspense in my life at one time. Anyway, I really like this.

Author's Response: lol I'm sorry. =)

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 09:20 pm Title: "I'll go kill myself on the sidewalk, next time."

There are some people you simply cannot live in close quarters with. But again, I really really want some development...And other than that, I really like it.

Author's Response: lol I think I'm one of the people that will never be able to, comfortably, live with anyone.

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 09:08 pm Title: "Because you look like a hoodlum?"

Okay, as much as I absolutely adore this, and as glad as I am that you aren't rushing into anything, I do kind of wish there was a little romantic development going on here.

Author's Response: I have a tendency to walk the line of slow enough and too slow. lol Hopefully it's not too painfully slow. =)

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 08:57 pm Title: "My little narcolpetic friend."

Yes, I did see it coming. I also believe that either Amber is sleeping with John to get him to do what she wants, or he wants to sleep with her so he does what she wants. Either way, I really like this chapter.

Author's Response: LoL I can't comment on how these things work or happen, but I DO know that I had a co-worker quite similar to Jessica, and I hated her with a fiery burning passion. lol

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 08:40 pm Title: "I didn't need to see that."

Well I'll freely admit that I am hella jealous of him. Personally. Anyone who gets to see Bill nekkid is a lucky person. I really liked this chapter, although I still want to know more about Georg.

Author's Response: haha Too true. Although, I think I'd rather see Tom naked. ;)

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 08:31 pm Title: "I’m trying to figure out why I should trust you."

This is such an interesting way to start a friendship. And drunk Bill always makes me giggle. The line "Want more, dern it" just made me grin. I think it was the dern it...I don't know. The point is that I really loved this chapter.

Author's Response: Writing drunk!southern!Bill was pretty fun in this chapter. =) I'm really glad you liked it. <3

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 08:14 pm Title: "I'm not gay, if that's what you're thinking."

So, I'm really curious to know what went on with Georg...I want more about that.

That being said, I really love this. Tom is slightly creepy. Considering Bill doesn't know him at all, and he's being so friendly and asking him out to pizza. For all Bill knows, he could be planning on taking him somewhere remote so he can kill him or something.

Great chapter. :D

Author's Response: Tom IS creepy, isn't he? And Bill is so silly, but it's a good thing he let his guard down a little bit. =) Thank you so much for reading. <3

Reviewer: unreachable102 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 07:51 pm Title: "I want dates. Spontaneous ones."

if this was facebook and i was allowed to 'like' this chapter
i`d be doing that right now lmao

Author's Response: awwwww haha We should incorporate that feature, don't you think? ;)

Reviewer: Hikarist Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 07:38 pm Title: "I want dates. Spontaneous ones."

:3 I really liked this chapter.. getting to see how Bill finally dealt with the apology, and seeing his relationship with Tom progressing. :) Wonderful, WONDERFUL story. :) Thank you for updating! :D

Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading. I'm really glad you liked it. <3333

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 07:24 pm Title: "Do you have a best friend, Bill?"

Why do I get the feeling that Tom bought all that acrylic paint just for an excuse to talk to Bill? HM. That being expressed, I dearly love this chapter. I'm going to read the second one now.

Author's Response: lol That would be absolutly adorable. He'd have to return it all on the sly. ;)

Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 07:15 pm Title: "I want dates. Spontaneous ones."

Awwww so cute :3 I can't wait for the smut, though. Or will there be more Tom/Bill drama? o.o

Author's Response: =) <---- that's me being evasive. lol

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 05:07 pm Title: "I want dates. Spontaneous ones."

YAY! And for the record, O_7, I love drunk!Bill, especially when he gets the southern accent....my accent only comes out to play at that time too...lmao! XD

Author's Response: LOL I'm having fun writing the southern accents in the story...especially Bill's drunken one that only comes out occasionally. =)

Reviewer: GiraffeJumper2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 03:34 pm Title: "I want dates. Spontaneous ones."

Aw

Author's Response: =)

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