Date: 06/16/14 11:48 am Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story. I liked the Way they were bothers that stuck together. Bill being an idiot and forgetting his coat was definitely a good thing. I'm going to go and read the next one.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I hope you like the others, as well. :D
Date: 06/16/14 09:24 am Title: Chapter 1
God this is good, perfect tension.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 04/04/11 06:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Phew... i'm feeling a tad overheated myself. That was hot.. I love the visual of them sharing Tom's hoodie. I do it with my OH all the time hehe.
Kinda hilarious re the heat though because my OH had some workmates over so I stayed in the bedroom and spent the last couple of hours or so looking at a facebook page called Bill's Beauty and reading fics. After his guests leave, my husband comes in and the first thing he does is comment about how hot the room is and asks if I have the heater on and was really surprised when I said no. It's about 50F outside and the wind is howling. I guess I know how the temperature went up in here lol.
Author's Response: Haha! That's pretty awesome, actually, thank you for telling me! I had only written one underage before this and I wanted to make sure that it conveyed what I wanted without making it too vulgar. I think it worked out pretty well and I'm really happy you enjoyed the story. Thank you! :)
Date: 12/05/10 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
So very sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 07/11/10 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
aw that was beautiful! What sweet discovery of their not so brotherly twin relationship :) lovely and sweet! I really so absolutely adore your writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really enjoyed writing it, so it's always great when someone enjoys reading it, too. <3
Date: 04/10/10 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for this, it is so super sweet and a treat to read :D
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for the kind words! It means a lot to me. <3
Date: 01/18/10 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was so damn cute
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 11/03/09 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't know what to say other than, this warms my heart. Utterly. ♥
Author's Response: I'm so glad! Thank you! <3
Date: 11/03/09 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love first time kisses and touches between the twins and this was just adorable :)
Author's Response: I think so, too! Thank you, darling! <3
Date: 11/03/09 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like that :D
Author's Response: I'm glad! Thank you :)
Date: 11/03/09 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww... super cute! I don't know what else to say except it's so nice to read sometimes something this cute and fluffy :)
Author's Response: Oh no, I do appreciate the kind words. Thank you so much! :D
Date: 11/03/09 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was such a sweet exploration into the twins' early relationship! I also liked how you kept everything realistic enough that it seems like a probable occurence instead of just fantasy. Great story!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really glad you liked it. :D
Date: 11/03/09 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved seeing this installment of the series because I love, love, love first-time twins and you wrote them so perfectly, with all the brotherliness but also the sweetness and uncertainty. The idea of the two of them zipped up into that hoodie together made my heart swell. This was lovely.
Author's Response: I've never written young twins like this so I was a little nervous about how they were going to work for me. I'm really happy that they felt brotherly and just right to you. That just means so much to know, and I thank you! <3
Author's Response: I've never written young twins like this so I was a little nervous about how they were going to work for me. I'm really happy that they felt brotherly and just right to you. That just means so much to know, and I thank you! <3
Date: 11/03/09 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have been anticipating this ever since you first mentioned you'd begun writing it, and it surpassed everything I thought it would be. It didn't matter that it was young and not old twins, because this was an easily believable beginning for how your older twins behave. It was cute, and sweet and fluffy, with just the right amount of realism, aaand I loved every word. Just like I knew I would. *hearts*
Author's Response: Girl, do you even know how much I want to glomp you right now? I was really nervous that it wouldn't live up to your expectations! I can't even tell you how happy I am that it did. And you went and wrote a scene very similar the other day, which terrified me because I already had part of that bit written. I'm glad that didn't bother you. Anyway, I'm so very glad that you liked it. Thank you! <333
Date: 11/03/09 11:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my! =D This is just perfect! So sweet and so hot. Poor Bill being so cold, but then Tom gets to warm him up, so I do think it's worth it! ;D
Author's Response: Oh wow, Jelly, thank you! You write amazing twins and I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this. <3
Date: 11/03/09 10:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Very naughty...Why haven't I read the other bits of this series? This is lovely! I liked how it was slow and paced but it didn't drag, there wasn't empty storyline just to make it longer. I liked that there was a lot implied but it wasn't necessary to put in the exact details of things. Well done you!
You need to learn to make a series. It looks like you have other stories that are a part of this series but if you don't put them together how am I supposed to find them!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I was quite nervous about this one, as I wasn't really sure it was up to snuff. I'm glad to know that it felt right to you!
Ah, I do know how to make a series but there's a bug in the efiction coding that makes it so that some people just can't make one. We get a message that we aren't authorized to use that function, even though we are. I believe there are other users and at least one other mod that I know of that can't make them. So I came upon the idea of using the same banner for each installments of the series. If you scroll through my stories, you should be able to pick them out. I hope you like them! Thanks again. :)
Date: 11/03/09 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my gosh! The idea of them all snuggled together in Tom's jacket is just...gah. I love it! And Tom going from pissed off and irritated to totally all big-brotherly. ♥
Author's Response: Just the idea of what it must be like inside of Tom's hoodie is enough to keep me warm, I can only imagine what it would be like for Bill. I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you! <3
Date: 11/03/09 07:32 am Title: Chapter 1
So sweet. I really liked it :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 11/03/09 03:46 am Title: Chapter 1
wow, that was really great!!!!! got any more sweetie?
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sure there will be more to this series; I'm not done with these guys yet. :D
Date: 11/03/09 01:05 am Title: Chapter 1
God, see this is why I fangirl you. My body is literally humming from excitement (and if I'm honest, fic-induced-horniness). I loved their relationship before they even decided to make it more than platonic, and your attention to details made me sit foward and ignore everyone else LOL.
Author's Response: You really make me smile so much, have I ever told you that? Thank you, bb. Honestly, you saw everything I wanted you to see and that means a lot to me. <3