Date: 06/10/10 03:24 pm Title: I'll Never Be My Brother
Wow, simply wow! that was very well written i must say and i love the moral of the story i really do, i think everyone deserves to be treated equally coz Bill has his own personality and everything while Tom also has his own, no ones the same, not even twins ect and that doesn't mean they should be treated differently! and it was such a shame bill had to resort to that in the end :( it just goes to show... so yeah that was brilliantlly written! x
Date: 11/03/09 08:00 pm Title: I'll Never Be My Brother
This was heartbreaking. I'm crying. My thoughts on this is wow now I know how my younger brother and sister feel. I don't think it was Tom's fault. Bill should have tried to be stronger. I know he hurt but he could have waited for that special someone who changes it all or just been happy with the love his older brother gave him Bill was blind as well. He was blind to Tom's love. I have to say i'm bit disapointed in him. I love the characters. I wished Tom had missed his soccer game. I wish Bill's parents weren't blind overall I wish Bill was still lving and had someone. i'm gonna leave now before i start ranting. I really enjoyed reading this. read it two times.
Date: 11/02/09 09:18 am Title: I'll Never Be My Brother
damn.. this is sooo sad. But it's got me reading twice already. *sigh* lovely but tragic. :)
Date: 11/02/09 09:15 am Title: I'll Never Be My Brother
damn.. this is sooo sad. But it's got me reading twice already. *sigh* lovely but tragic. :)
Date: 11/02/09 01:46 am Title: I'll Never Be My Brother
I haven't read a fanfic that made me cry in a while. Congratulations.
Date: 11/01/09 11:24 pm Title: I'll Never Be My Brother
I so didn't know this was a deathfic until a certain point and by then, I couldn't just STOP reading it.
Whoo, as always, the storyline was beautiful and this was well written, but it took me a good five minutes to stop crying to write a review.
It was really sad and...I defintely wish someone had found him sooner so he could've been saved but..yeah.
Good job as usual ^_^
Date: 11/01/09 09:08 pm Title: I'll Never Be My Brother
It so heartbreaking. One question though, are you EVER going to update "Cellar Door"? Because I've been waiting VERY patiently for it. I want for it to BE updated. PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
Author's Response: i do not have a fic titled Cellar Door.
Date: 11/01/09 08:40 pm Title: I'll Never Be My Brother
You nearly got me to cry there at the end. But it pretty much faded and I smiled. Its a good fic, and now I remember why I love reading your stuff.
Date: 11/01/09 08:37 pm Title: I'll Never Be My Brother
Just a tip don't read this and listen to adam's song by blink -182 you will end up in tears
Date: 11/01/09 08:32 pm Title: I'll Never Be My Brother
Oh my gawsh. Love this.
Date: 11/01/09 08:18 pm Title: I'll Never Be My Brother
could you please write a sequel. i want to see how tom deals and how bills parents react to their sons death.
Date: 11/01/09 08:12 pm Title: I'll Never Be My Brother
Oh oh oh ;-;
That was so sad. I think I cried a little. The fact that Tom wasn't just coming home again and was instead giving him a gift to make him feel better...and then he found Bill dead...that was so sad :/
I really liked the countdown thing you did, too. The 'sixteen years, two months, three hours, and seventeen minutes'. Powerful.
*nods* Good job, son xD
Date: 11/01/09 07:24 pm Title: I'll Never Be My Brother
This was so beautiful. I love how you juxtaposed Bill and Tom, as well as described all of the emotions. It was very visual and I could really feel for both characters. So sad, but I still love it!